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24. Margaret Courtney-Clarke has traveled to remote

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24. Margaret Courtney-Clarke has traveled to remote dwellings in the Transvaal to photograph the art of Ndebele women, whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography and in a style that varies from woman to woman and house to house.
(A) whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography and in a style that varies from woman to woman and house to house
(B) whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries are embellished with old and new iconography, and their style is varying among women and houses
(C) whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries are embellished with old and new iconography, and they are in styles that vary from woman to woman and house to house
(D) with murals brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography, and their style varies among women and houses
(E) with murals that are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography, and their styles vary among women and houses
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 [#permalink] New post 30 Sep 2003, 22:28
Really tough. I chose A, which imo the beest, providing for parallellizm and clarity.
I eliminated choices, beginning with <with> and ending with <among women and houses>. Having left A and C, I canceled C out since it's not clear what is really modified here - women or murals.
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Re: SC: Long one. [#permalink] New post 01 Oct 2003, 12:49
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24. Margaret Courtney-Clarke has traveled to remote dwellings in the Transvaal to photograph the art of Ndebele women, whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography and in a style that varies from woman to woman and house to house.

(A) whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography and in a style that varies from woman to woman and house to house

(B) whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries are embellished with old and new iconography, and their style is varying among women and houses

(C) whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries are embellished with old and new iconography, and they are in styles that vary from woman to woman and house to house

(D) with murals brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography, and their style varies among women and houses

(E) with murals that are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography, and their styles vary among women and houses.



The second half of the sentence helps!

B..second half uses present progressive...but the first half is in simple past.."has traveled"..incorrect

D and E are wrong... Among women and houses.

A...I think the sentence is describing a plural subjects....

murals , symmetries and styles

So we need "styles" and so "vary" to accurately describe the plural subject

C corrects the problem with A... C is best
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 [#permalink] New post 02 Oct 2003, 10:30
I vote for B. A is clumsy: embellished with old and new iconography and in a style that varies from woman to woman and house to house.

Without this AND A would be fine.
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 [#permalink] New post 02 Oct 2003, 13:24
its B, the ands in A are redunctant. And C has a pronoun problem "they"

the ones with with are sucky, non idiomatic?

My choice is B.
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 [#permalink] New post 02 Oct 2003, 13:25
its B, the ands in A are redunctant. And C has a pronoun problem "they"

the ones with with are sucky, non idiomatic?

My choice is B.
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 [#permalink] New post 02 Oct 2003, 21:40
nike,
B sounds ridiculous, it implies variation among women and houses - incomparable subjucts. If not A then C imo.
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 [#permalink] New post 03 Oct 2003, 06:25
My choice C:- parallelism of murals description 'their geometric symmetries' and 'they are in style'

What say everyone?
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 [#permalink] New post 13 Oct 2003, 12:54
Is there any rule around vary among?
Are you sure it is incorrect to use varies among women and houses?
If not I guess right answer is E.
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sc. [#permalink] New post 15 Oct 2003, 07:03
my ans a)
the options d) and e) which start ''with murals brightely coloured'' mean that mrs clarke visited these places wearing ''murals '' , which changes the meaning of the sentence itself.
b)''that is varying from woman to house '' .also does change the meaning from the original sentence which say ''vary from woman to woman and house to house''also the ''that is'' changes the parallel str
c)''the styles that are varying'' appears redundant.
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 [#permalink] New post 08 Dec 2006, 11:40
I was going through some old posts and found this interesting one.

I choose A.

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 [#permalink] New post 08 Dec 2006, 13:35
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24. Margaret Courtney-Clarke has traveled to remote dwellings in the Transvaal to photograph the art of Ndebele women, whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography and in a style that varies from woman to woman and house to house.
(A) whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography and in a style that varies from woman to woman and house to house
(B) whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries are embellished with old and new iconography, and their style is varying among women and houses
(C) whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries are embellished with old and new iconography, and they are in styles that vary from woman to woman and house to house
(D) with murals brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography, and their style varies among women and houses
(E) with murals that are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography, and their styles vary among women and houses

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A...I think the sentence is describing a plural subjects....
murals , symmetries and styles

I say A. I don't think "styles" is necessary b/c murals by different people can have a similar style. (i.e. All those goth kids have the same style of dress)
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 [#permalink] New post 08 Dec 2006, 17:55
A is the correct answer but can someone grammatically deconstruct the sentence with option A ? Construction of this sentence is worth studying so let's give it a shot. Please furnish details of roles played each of the phrase/fragments (subject, predicate, depedent/independent clause, participle, modifier etc). I'll add my 2 cents after you.
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 [#permalink] New post 08 Dec 2006, 18:06
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Margaret Courtney-Clarke has traveled to remote dwellings in the Transvaal to photograph the art of Ndebele women, whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography and [murals]in a style that varies from woman to woman and house to house.

their - posessive pronoun referring to murals
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 [#permalink] New post 08 Dec 2006, 19:09
Margaret Courtney-Clarke has traveled to remote dwellings in the Transvaal to photograph the art of Ndebele women, whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography and in a style that varies from woman to woman and house to house

subject:

noun:
"Margaret Courtney-Clarke"

predicate:

verb:
traveled
has traveled - present perfect tense

prepositional phrase:
"to remote dwellings"
"remote" functions as adjective to "dwellings"
"dwellings" functions as the d.o. of the main sentence and object of the preposition:
"to remote dwellings" functions as an adverb of "traveled"

prepositional phrase:
"in the Transvaal" functions as adverb of "traveled"

prepositional phrase:
"to photograph" functions as adverb of "traveled"

definite article:
"the"

predicate noun:
"art"

prepositional phrase:
"of Ndebele women" modifies art functioning as its adjective

relative clause:
"whose murals are brilliantly colored"
"whose" - relative pronoun
the antecedent of "whose" is "women"

subordinate clause:
"their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography"
modifies "art"
pronoun:
their
the antecedent of "their" is "women"
"symmetries" functions as a noun and "geometrical" is its adjective
"embellished" functions as a verb
"with old and new iconography" is the prepositional phrase
"with" is the preposition
"iconography" is the object of the preposition
"old and new" are the adjectives of "iconography"

prepositional phrase:
"in a style"

relative clause:
"that varies"
"that" is the relative pronoun functioning as the subject and "varies" functions as the verb of the relative clause

prepositional phrase:
"from woman to woman and house to house"

"in a style" and "from woman to woman and house to house" function as adverbs of "varies"

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 [#permalink] New post 08 Dec 2006, 19:20
Bravo ggarr !! Now that is called grammatical deconstruction.
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 [#permalink] New post 08 Dec 2006, 21:18
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Bravo ggarr !! Now that is called grammatical deconstruction.

Thanks Swagatalakshmi,
Now ..... am I 100% correct?
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Re: SC: Long one. [#permalink] New post 09 Dec 2006, 22:55
I would have used following method to eliminate choices.

Vicky wrote:
24. Margaret Courtney-Clarke has traveled to remote dwellings in the Transvaal to photograph the art of Ndebele women, whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography and in a style that varies from woman to woman and house to house.

(A) whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography and in a style that varies from woman to woman and house to house
(B) whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries are embellished with old and new iconography, and their style is varying among women and houses
(C) whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries are embellished with old and new iconography, and they are in styles that vary from woman to woman and house to house
It is a style which varies, not 'styles. Otherwise we can't compare.
(D) with murals brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography, and their style varies among women and houses
(E) with murals that are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography, and their styles vary among women and houses
Re: SC: Long one.   [#permalink] 09 Dec 2006, 22:55
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