Hi Would love to get a feedback on my profile

GMAT score:740 (50 quat 40 verbal)
experience 5yrs
industry :Softwares
Role : tech analyst
International experience: 2 yrs
Role played: Business analyst
Awards:
Professional
One of the top 5 finalist in Young leaders competition in my organization(out of 5000 ppl)
Winner of a technology competition from my Office and top 50 all over teh country(5000 in my office and more than 1 lakh all over india)
Special recognition award

College:
various inter/intra college competitions
Main Compere of Cultural fest
Chief coordinator for Cultural and tech fest
Vice president College ISTE chapter

School
Captain of one of the 4 houses in school
Main Compere

Other exp:
Working with national level NGO since 2006, where i train students and youth in various areas of development
designed the syllabi for this NGO on "Removing stage fright" which is now an integral part of its syllabus being taught at 1000's of schools in India
Designed ,developed and now maintaining websites of 4 national NGOs
Trained over 300 school students and helped remove their stage fright

I also write and record poetry and have over 500 subscribers on youtube. Was among top 50 most viewed youtubers from India for many months this year. One of my poetry has over 220,000 views. I am also now in youtube partners program. I have self released one single on itunes
An avid blogger and web junkie, i along with a partner have also started a discount site speciafically targetted to my City
Love traveling and last year completed a long cherished dream of driving from east coast of US to west coast. It took me and 2 of my friends 5 days to complete the trip

Colleges I aim for: Top 10 + ISB and IIM Ahembdabad Executive MBA