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20 Jan 2013, 10:42
in the writing template, intro sentence starts like,

the article discusses the topic of .......

Now, after the topic of..... what kind of sentence should I use ? let's say, for example,

the article discusses the topic of adverse effect of grading system in education.

or

the article discusses the topic of plantation in Africa. is this too general information ? firstly is it correct grammar using after "topic of.."

if you give me some advise or safe grammar use for this template I will be appreciated.
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22 Jan 2013, 09:09
I would avoid using 'the topic of' alogether.

The article discuss [whatever the topic is]...
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23 Jan 2013, 07:27
JimGMATPrepster wrote:
I would avoid using 'the topic of' alogether.

The article discuss [whatever the topic is]...

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23 Jan 2013, 07:28
No problem at all, show a little kudos love if it helped. Good luck!
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23 Jan 2013, 07:30
And... my grammar was a bit off.... It should be:

The article discusses

I did not include the es in the original post.
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