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A grammar question, I need your advise please. [#permalink]
 20 Jan 2013, 11:42
in the writing template, intro sentence starts like,
the article discusses the topic of .......
Now, after the topic of..... what kind of sentence should I use ? let's say, for example,
the article discusses the topic of adverse effect of grading system in education.
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the article discusses the topic of plantation in Africa. is this too general information ? firstly is it correct grammar using after "topic of.."
if you give me some advise or safe grammar use for this template I will be appreciated.
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Re: A grammar question, I need your advise please. [#permalink]
22 Jan 2013, 10:09
I would avoid using 'the topic of' alogether. The article discuss [whatever the topic is]...
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Re: A grammar question, I need your advise please. [#permalink]
23 Jan 2013, 08:27
JimGMATPrepster wrote: I would avoid using 'the topic of' alogether.
The article discuss [whatever the topic is]... Thank you for advise !
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Re: A grammar question, I need your advise please. [#permalink]
23 Jan 2013, 08:28
No problem at all, show a little kudos love if it helped. Good luck!
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Re: A grammar question, I need your advise please. [#permalink]
23 Jan 2013, 08:30
And... my grammar was a bit off.... It should be: The article discuss es I did not include the es in the original post.
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Re: A grammar question, I need your advise please.
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