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# A new study published by the Journal of the American Medical

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A new study published by the Journal of the American Medical Association has found that women who exercise regularly and maintained a healthy diet are at low risk of sudden cardiac death during physical exertion that is moderate to vigorous in nature.
(A) maintained a healthy diet are at low risk of sudden cardiac death during physical exertion that is moderate to vigorous in nature
(B) maintain a healthy diet are at low risk of sudden cardiac death during moderate to vigorous physical exertion
(C) maintain a healthy diet will be at low risk of sudden cardiac death during moderate to vigorous physical exertion
(D) maintained a healthy diet were at low risk of sudden cardiac death during moderate to vigorous physical exertion
(E) maintain a healthy diet are at low risk of sudden cardiac death during physical exertion that is moderate to vigorous in nature

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A new study published by the Journal of the American Medical Association has found that women who exercise regularly and maintained a healthy diet are at low risk of sudden cardiac death during physical exertion that is moderate to vigorous in nature.

(A) maintained a healthy diet are at low risk of sudden cardiac death during physical exertion that is moderate to vigorous in nature. Present Tense required to be parallel. the last part is wordy.
(B) maintain a healthy diet are at low risk of sudden cardiac death during moderate to vigorous physical exertion. Correct
(C) maintain a healthy diet will be at low risk of sudden cardiac death during moderate to vigorous physical exertion. Future tense.
(D) maintained a healthy diet were at low risk of sudden cardiac death during moderate to vigorous physical exertion. Past tense
(E) maintain a healthy diet are at low risk of sudden cardiac death during physical exertion that is moderate to vigorous in nature. Compare to B E is wordy.
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24 Apr 2012, 14:35
got E. can anyone explain why its wrong except that its wordy?!!

seem to get a lot of "wordy" qns wrong!!
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24 Apr 2012, 15:08
cant find anything wrong with it, other than it is wordy!!
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23 Apr 2016, 06:40
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