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A new test for AIDS has proved helpful in eliminating blood, contaminated with the virus, from the nation's blood supply.

(A) in eliminating blood, contaminated with the virus, from the nation's blood supply
(B) in eliminating blood from the nation's blood supply that is contaminated with the virus
(C) in eliminating from the nation's blood supply blood that is contaminated with the virus
(D) to eliminate blood that is contaminated with the virus from the nation's blood supply
(E) to eliminate blood from the nation's blood supply that is contaminated with the virus

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A new test for AIDS has proved helpful in eliminating blood, contaminated with the virus, from the nation's blood supply.


o in eliminating blood, contaminated with the virus, from the nation's blood supply
Correct
o in eliminating blood from the nation's blood supply that is contaminated with the virus
Makes it seem that nation's bloody supply is contaminated with the virus
o in eliminating from the nation's blood supply blood that is contaminated with the virus
Was confused about this one, but I think A does a better job is not repeating the word blood. Cant see anything wrong otherwise
o to eliminate blood that is contaminated with the virus from the nation's blood supply
The virus is not from the nation's blood supply!
o to eliminate blood from the nation's blood supply that is contaminated with the virus
Makes it seem that nation's bloody supply is contaminated with the virus

Thus I shall go for A
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Re: SC: A new test for AIDS [#permalink] New post 20 Mar 2009, 11:52
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IMO A. Agree with above explanation.
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Re: SC: A new test for AIDS [#permalink] New post 20 Mar 2009, 12:06
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Confusing. Between A and C, I went with A
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Re: SC: A new test for AIDS [#permalink] New post 20 Mar 2009, 13:44
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i think B....more meaningful sentence imo.
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Re: SC: A new test for AIDS [#permalink] New post 20 Mar 2009, 14:53
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I guess it's C.

o in eliminating blood, contaminated with the virus, from the nation's blood supply
three clauses that are totally independent.
o in eliminating blood from the nation's blood supply that is contaminated with the virus
Makes it seem that nation's bloody supply is contaminated with the virus
o in eliminating from the nation's blood supply blood that is contaminated with the virus
the use of 'that' clearly says that the blood is contaminated with the virus and not the blood supply - correct
o to eliminate blood that is contaminated with the virus from the nation's blood supply
to eliminate is wrong usage
o to eliminate blood from the nation's blood supply that is contaminated with the virus
to eliminate is wrong usage

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Re: SC: A new test for AIDS [#permalink] New post 20 Mar 2009, 20:20
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I guess it's C.

o in eliminating blood, contaminated with the virus, from the nation's blood supply
three clauses that are totally independent.
o in eliminating blood from the nation's blood supply that is contaminated with the virus
Makes it seem that nation's bloody supply is contaminated with the virus
o in eliminating from the nation's blood supply blood that is contaminated with the virus
the use of 'that' clearly says that the blood is contaminated with the virus and not the blood supply - correcto to eliminate blood that is contaminated with the virus from the nation's blood supply
to eliminate is wrong usage
o to eliminate blood from the nation's blood supply that is contaminated with the virus
to eliminate is wrong usage

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the OA is C

It was tough between A and C, but i think pbanavara explained pretty nicely :)
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A new test for AIDS has proved helpful in eliminating blood, contaminated with the virus, from the nation's blood supply.


o in eliminating blood, contaminated with the virus, from the nation's blood supply
o in eliminating blood from the nation's blood supply that is contaminated with the virus
o in eliminating from the nation's blood supply blood that is contaminated with the virus
o to eliminate blood that is contaminated with the virus from the nation's blood supply
o to eliminate blood from the nation's blood supply that is contaminated with the virus



please explain your answers :thanks



In A.. "contaminated with the virus" --> not essential..phrase. if you remove this and read the sentence..
It doesn't make sense.

C --> that clearly introduces essential clause..

C is the best
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Re: SC: A new test for AIDS [#permalink] New post 23 Feb 2010, 06:49
Between B & C, but C sounds better - Blood and Clause starting with That clearly linked
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Re: SC: A new test for AIDS [#permalink] New post 24 Feb 2010, 11:05
in eliminating gets precedence over to eliminate and blood supply that is meaningless.
So fight is between A and C.

in eliminating X from Y is good construction. C sounds really bad. There is no problem in A . that is unnecessary here. I will go with A.

Can somebody explain me what is wrong in A.

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A new test for AIDS has proved helpful in eliminating blood, contaminated with the virus, from the nation's blood supply.

(A) in eliminating blood, contaminated with the virus, from the nation's blood supply
(B) in eliminating blood from the nation's blood supply that is contaminated with the virus
(C) in eliminating from the nation's blood supply blood that is contaminated with the virus
(D) to eliminate blood that is contaminated with the virus from the nation's blood supply
(E) to eliminate blood from the nation's blood supply that is contaminated with the virus

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Re: SC: A new test for AIDS [#permalink] New post 27 Jul 2010, 05:58
Sorry I meant C is correct :)
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Re: SC: A new test for AIDS [#permalink] New post 27 Jul 2010, 06:55
"in eliminating" is better than "to eliminate"

C is clear & better than other options.
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misplaced modifier I think. "That" should be close to blood.

(B) in eliminating blood from the nation's blood supply that is contaminated with the virus ------> don't know what is contaminated. Whether the blood or the supply.

(C) in eliminating from the nation's blood supply blood that is contaminated with the virus ----> blood is contaminated. Of course "eliminating" cannot be contaminated.
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Re: SC: A new test for AIDS [#permalink] New post 28 Feb 2011, 07:55
i think

A is better because commas are used at the proper place.

C would have been better had there been a comma .
'in eliminating from the nation's blood supply( ,)blood that is contaminated with the virus.'


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Re: SC: A new test for AIDS [#permalink] New post 28 Feb 2011, 08:11
C is known is resumative modifer. Watch out for that pattern ! That is the credited answer.

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A is better because commas are used at the proper place.

C would have been better had there been a comma .
'in eliminating from the nation's blood supply( ,)blood that is contaminated with the virus.'


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C) is correct.

Idiomatic usage is "helpful in "
Eg "your help in walking the dog was appreciated."

A contains three clauses all together and this makes them look like independent clauses. A "that" is needed to identify an essential clause.

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Re: SC: A new test for AIDS [#permalink] New post 28 Feb 2011, 18:10
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A new test for AIDS has proved helpful in eliminating blood, contaminated with the virus, from the nation's blood supply.
(C) in eliminating from the nation's blood supply (missing comma) blood that is contaminated with the virus


Resumptive or Summative modifier would need a comma but C does not supply it. Is there a typo in the post?

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Re: SC: A new test for AIDS [#permalink] New post 28 Feb 2011, 19:37
Excellent! You mean option C, I guess. Yes I agree.

A and B both have modifier issue and C is as close as it gets to OA. Commas are easier to miss.

Another clue that he left is - although I won't trust this 100%. The distance of that
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A new test for AIDS has proved helpful in eliminating blood, contaminated with the virus, from the nation's blood supply.
(C) in eliminating from the nation's blood supply (missing comma) blood that is contaminated with the virus


Resumptive or Summative modifier would need a comma but B does not supply it. Is there a typo in the post?
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Re: SC: A new test for AIDS [#permalink] New post 28 Feb 2011, 20:26
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in eliminating gets precedence over to eliminate and blood supply that is meaningless.
So fight is between A and C.

in eliminating X from Y is good construction. C sounds really bad. There is no problem in A . that is unnecessary here. I will go with A.

Can somebody explain me what is wrong in A.

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A new test for AIDS has proved helpful in eliminating blood, contaminated with the virus, from the nation's blood supply.

(A) in eliminating blood, contaminated with the virus, from the nation's blood supply
(B) in eliminating blood from the nation's blood supply that is contaminated with the virus
(C) in eliminating from the nation's blood supply blood that is contaminated with the virus
(D) to eliminate blood that is contaminated with the virus from the nation's blood supply
(E) to eliminate blood from the nation's blood supply that is contaminated with the virus

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C


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Option A has got non-essential modifier whereas blood need essential modifier to point out that which blood need to be removed. In option B that point out to the blood supply. Only in option C both of these issues are rectified.
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Re: SC: A new test for AIDS [#permalink] New post 18 May 2011, 01:58
cici wrote:
A new test for AIDS has proved helpful in eliminating blood, contaminated with the virus, from the nation's blood supply.

(A) in eliminating blood, contaminated with the virus, from the nation's blood supply
(B) in eliminating blood from the nation's blood supply that is contaminated with the virus
(C) in eliminating from the nation's blood supply blood that is contaminated with the virus
(D) to eliminate blood that is contaminated with the virus from the nation's blood supply
(E) to eliminate blood from the nation's blood supply that is contaminated with the virus

please explain your answers :thanks


i want to know what are the 3 independent clauses in A, and how are they independent clauses as has been quoted a few posts above.
1)A new test for AIDS has proved helpful in eliminating blood.
2)contaminated with the virus
3)from the nation's blood supply

1 is an independent clause alright

but how are 2 and 3 independent clauses ?
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