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A recent New York Times editorial criticized the citys [#permalink] New post 24 Feb 2007, 10:25
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A recent New York Times editorial criticized the city’s election board for, first of all, falling to replace outmoded voting machines prone to breakdowns, and secondarily, for their failure to investigate allegations of corruption involving board members.

(A) secondarily, for their failure to

(B) secondly, for their failure to

(C) secondly, that they failed and did not

(D) second, that they failed to

(E) second, for failing to

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 [#permalink] New post 24 Feb 2007, 11:01
I would say E, because it says "first" and not "firstly" and therefore, it must be second.

But I could see B also...
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 [#permalink] New post 24 Feb 2007, 11:27
Should be E

city’s election board is singular

and we need parallelism between first and second

for, first of all, falling to ..... second, for failing to
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Re: SC - failure to [#permalink] New post 24 Feb 2007, 11:52
(A) secondarily, for their failure to

(B) secondly, for their failure to

(C) secondly, that they failed and did not

(D) second, that they failed to

(E) second, for failing to


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 [#permalink] New post 24 Feb 2007, 15:47
but is "first of all" parellel to second ? shouldnt it be secondly ..?
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 [#permalink] New post 24 Feb 2007, 16:20
I believe after ‘first of all’, ‘second’ is preferred and more idiomatic. Also, board is singular so we are left with E.
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 [#permalink] New post 25 Feb 2007, 08:21
E should be the correct choice.
As 'second' is parallel to 'first'....not secondly or secondarily
parallelism is the key to solve this
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Re: SC - failure to [#permalink] New post 25 Feb 2007, 20:55
kkarank wrote:
A recent New York Times editorial criticized the city’s election board for, first of all, falling to replace outmoded voting machines prone to breakdowns, and secondarily, for their failure to investigate allegations of corruption involving board members.

(A) secondarily, for their failure to

(B) secondly, for their failure to

(C) secondly, that they failed and did not

(D) second, that they failed to

(E) second, for failing to

Strange this one.. :(


Good question. It's E for parallelism.

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Re: SC - failure to [#permalink] New post 08 Jan 2008, 19:14
OA is E indeed.
But, when does one use 'secondly' and when does one use 'second'?
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Re: SC - failure to [#permalink] New post 09 Jan 2008, 04:49
kkarank wrote:
A recent New York Times editorial criticized the city’s election board for, first of all, falling to replace outmoded voting machines prone to breakdowns, and secondarily, for their failure to investigate allegations of corruption involving board members.

(A) secondarily, for their failure to

(B) secondly, for their failure to

(C) secondly, that they failed and did not

(D) second, that they failed to

(E) second, for failing to

Strange this one.. :(


first of all .. second (of all)

E is correct (E also is parallel)
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Re: SC - failure to [#permalink] New post 27 May 2008, 21:26
E is the right answer.

Escapes the wrong pronoun error.
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Re: SC - failure to [#permalink] New post 28 May 2008, 13:54
kkarank wrote:
A recent New York Times editorial criticized the city’s election board for, first of all, falling to replace outmoded voting machines prone to breakdowns, and secondarily, for their failure to investigate allegations of corruption involving board members.

(A) secondarily, for their failure to

(B) secondly, for their failure to

(C) secondly, that they failed and did not

(D) second, that they failed to

(E) second, for failing to

Strange this one.. :(


I will go for E for parallel failing to replaced outmoded machines.... failing to investigate allegations of ..
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Re: SC - failure to [#permalink] New post 28 May 2008, 14:49
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okay a golden tip, In GMAT, secondly, secondarily are almost always wrong.
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Re: A recent New York Times editorial criticized the citys [#permalink] New post 13 May 2013, 12:58
for E to be correct for should come after first of all..otherwise it will make for for

correct me if i am wrong
Re: A recent New York Times editorial criticized the citys   [#permalink] 13 May 2013, 12:58
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