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what about the and parallelism
can someone explain?
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You cannot elect early retirement, but you can elect to retire early.
Only (D) and (E) are possible choices.

(E) is the best for parallellism because "elected to retire" is parallel to "face"


Why I cannot elect early retirement?
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Guys would appreciate some help with B. OG says, retirement and facing are not parallel but I am not able to figure out why, as they are both nouns.

You are right. Technically speaking, facing is used as a gerund here (a noun form, since facing is the object of preposition of).

However, as Andrew mentioned, GMAT would just prefer an option that does close mirroring of the parallel elements.



Hi AjiteshArun EducationAisle
Please help with below queries:

1. I am still not sure whether (C) has any grammatical error. Or it is just that (E) is more direct than (B), making it the winner?

(C) have elected retiring early instead of facing
(E) have elected to retire early rather than face


2. Both of the below sentences use ''instead of''

Ex-1: I am ''walking'' to work instead of ''driving''.
Ex-2: Miguel is ''playing'' guitar instead of ''drumming''.

Now in example-1, ''Walking'' is parallel to ''driving''
But ''walking'' is a verb, on the other hand, ''driving'' is a ''gerund''
So, how these sentences can be grammatically correct? Because ''a-verb'' can't be parallel to ''a-noun'' right?
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Hi AjiteshArun EducationAisle
Please help with below queries:

1. I am still not sure whether (C) has any grammatical error. Or it is just that (E) is more direct than (B), making it the winner?

(C) have elected retiring early instead of facing
(E) have elected to retire early rather than face


2. Both of the below sentences use ''instead of''

Ex-1: I am ''walking'' to work instead of ''driving''.
Ex-2: Miguel is ''playing'' guitar instead of ''drumming''.

Now in example-1, ''Walking'' is parallel to ''driving''
But ''walking'' is a verb, on the other hand, ''driving'' is a ''gerund''
So, how these sentences can be grammatically correct? Because ''a-verb'' can't be parallel to ''a-noun'' right?

Hi Contropositive,

Option C does have a major error: it uses the unidiomatic {elected -ing}. When we use elect to mean "choose to do something", we use an infinitive with it. Here's an example:

1. He elected to take the GMAT early. ← This means he chose to take the GMAT early.

2. He elected taking the GMAT early. ← This is unidiomatic.

This is why option C is incorrect. We can't say "have elected retiring early".
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Hi AjiteshArun EducationAisle
Please help with below queries:

1. I am still not sure whether (C) has any grammatical error. Or it is just that (E) is more direct than (B), making it the winner?

(C) have elected retiring early instead of facing
(E) have elected to retire early rather than face


2. Both of the below sentences use ''instead of''

Ex-1: I am ''walking'' to work instead of ''driving''.
Ex-2: Miguel is ''playing'' guitar instead of ''drumming''.

Now in example-1, ''Walking'' is parallel to ''driving''
But ''walking'' is a verb, on the other hand, ''driving'' is a ''gerund''
So, how these sentences can be grammatically correct? Because ''a-verb'' can't be parallel to ''a-noun'' right?

Hi Contropositive,

Option C does have a major error: it uses the unidiomatic {elected -ing}. When we use elect to mean "choose to do something", we use an infinitive with it. Here's an example:

1. He elected to take the GMAT early. ← This means he chose to take the GMAT early.

2. He elected taking the GMAT early. ← This is unidiomatic.

This is why option C is incorrect. We can't say "have elected retiring early".



Hi AjiteshArun,

I understood why (C) is incorrect, but just wanted to draw your attention to the below query.
As ''instead of'' ends with a preposition, which must be followed by a noun, i can't see why ''walking''(Verb) is parallel to ''Gerund''(a noun):

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2. Both of the below sentences use ''instead of''

Ex-1: I am ''walking'' to work instead of ''driving''.
Ex-2: Miguel is ''playing'' guitar instead of ''drumming''.

Now in example-1, ''Walking'' is parallel to ''driving''
But ''walking'' is a verb, on the other hand, ''driving'' is a ''gerund''
So, how these sentences can be grammatically correct? Because ''a-verb'' can't be parallel to ''a-noun'' right?
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Hi AjiteshArun,

I understood why (C) is incorrect, but just wanted to draw your attention to the below query.
As ''instead of'' ends with a preposition, which must be followed by a noun, i can't see why ''walking''(Verb) is parallel to ''Gerund''(a noun):

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2. Both of the below sentences use ''instead of''

Ex-1: I am ''walking'' to work instead of ''driving''.
Ex-2: Miguel is ''playing'' guitar instead of ''drumming''.

Now in example-1, ''Walking'' is parallel to ''driving''
But ''walking'' is a verb, on the other hand, ''driving'' is a ''gerund''
So, how these sentences can be grammatically correct? Because ''a-verb'' can't be parallel to ''a-noun'' right?
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Hi Contropositive,

There are different opinions on this, but I don't recommend trying to look for parallelism around instead of. My recommended approach to rather than is different though (rather than is somewhat more complicated). You can find a discussion on rather than towards the end of this session on parallelism:



TL;DR: Prefer parallel structures around rather than, but also be aware that rather than can be used with structures that don't look similar. Don't look at instead of as an indicator of parallelism.
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In D why are we ignoring the fact that if "Facing the threats and "rising the costs" are parallel? We are considering the X rather than Y should be parallel, okay I agree but what about the parallelism with the "and" if we comply the above?
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In D why are we ignoring the fact that if "Facing the threats and "rising the costs" are parallel? We are considering the X rather than Y should be parallel, okay I agree but what about the parallelism with the "and" if we comply the above?

Hi anikpait17,

Rising is just an adjective there. The main element in the rising costs is costs.

Look at the sentence with the correct option like this:

1. Many doctors have elected to retire early rather than face (a) the threats of lawsuits and (b) the rising costs of malpractice insurance. ← Threats and costs are both nouns here.

Many doctors don't want to face the rising costs of insurance, and they don't want to face the threats of lawsuits.
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