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A study done on children under the age of twelve showed that 15 percent of them experienced night terrors but for children whose parents had also experienced such terrors in childhood it was more likely that they would perceive their behavior as fundamentally different from their peers.

(A) for children whose parents had also experienced such terrors in childhood it was more likely that they would perceive their behavior as fundamentally different from their peers

(B) for children whose parents also experienced such terrors in childhood, they were more likely than other children prone to night terrors to perceive their behavior as fundamentally different from their peers'

(C) when children had parents who had also experienced such terrors in childhood it was more likely for them to be perceiving their behavior as different from that of their peers'

(D) that children whose parents had also experienced such terrors in childhood were more likely than other children prone to night terrors to perceive their behavior as fundamentally different from their peers'

(E) that when children had parents who had also experienced such terrors in childhood they were more likely to be perceiving behavior that differed from their peers
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07 Jul 2011, 02:26
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How can the answer be D? "But that" in D sounds very awkward.

"but that" is fine here. read the sentence as:

The study showed that (....) but that (....).
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26 Jun 2011, 09:41
IMO B

but indicates llism ..Usage of "had" is wrong.
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26 Jun 2011, 09:45
Sorry its D, they in B can refer to either children or parents..
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26 Jun 2011, 10:04
D for keeping the –that - //ism and dropping the restrictive- when-;
in E the meaning is distorted

ABC miss the –that - //ism
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26 Jun 2011, 18:13
I vote for B. OA plz?? Also, what's the source??
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26 Jun 2011, 22:15
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I vote for B. OA plz?? Also, what's the source??

The source is Knewton (check the tag). Will post the OA after a day
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27 Jun 2011, 23:40
D for paralellism and eliminating antecedent ambiguity
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28 Jun 2011, 02:42
IMO D.
It took me 2.30 min to get to the answer. Isn’t it too much time or its fine for these kind of questions?
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29 Jun 2011, 19:54
OA is D..
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05 Jul 2011, 18:58
How can the answer be D? "But that" in D sounds very awkward.
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07 Jul 2011, 03:25
plz brief on the parallelism spoken of in the answer choice???
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07 Jul 2011, 10:21
Ans-D..but i took 3:18 as i couldn't understand the meaning of the sentence properly even though i eliminated A,B,C for lack of 'that' after parallelism marker 'BUT' and option E as "when children has parents" seemed awkward in quick time..Just wanted to make sure i hit the right button :D
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07 Jul 2011, 11:07
Parallelism always reigns supreme on the GMAT!!

D it is...This is a really well written question-- mainly because it seems harder that it really is!....
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07 Jul 2011, 12:37
Simplifying,

Study showed that (1 fact) but that (2nd fact)

When there is study, survey involved, wriiten fact etc involved, always look for that.

This brings us down to D and E.

E uses 'they' in wrong place.

So D it is.
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A study done on children under the age of twelve showed that 15 percent of them experienced night terrors but for children whose parents had also experienced such terrors in childhood it was more likely that they would perceive their behavior as fundamentally different from their peers.

(A) for children whose parents had also experienced such terrors in childhood it was more likely that they would perceive their behavior as fundamentally different from their peers

(B) for children whose parents also experienced such terrors in childhood, they were more likely than other children prone to night terrors to perceive their behavior as fundamentally different from their peers'

(C) when children had parents who had also experienced such terrors in childhood it was more likely for them to be perceiving their behavior as different from that of their peers'

(D) that children whose parents had also experienced such terrors in childhood were more likely than other children prone to night terrors to perceive their behavior as fundamentally different from their peers'

(E) that when children had parents who had also experienced such terrors in childhood they were more likely to be perceiving behavior that differed from their peers

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Simplifying,

Study showed that (1 fact) but that (2nd fact)

When there is study, survey involved, wriiten fact etc involved, always look for that.

This brings us down to D and E.

E uses 'they' in wrong place.

So D it is.

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A study done on children under the age of twelve showed that 15 percent of them experienced night terrors but for children whose parents had also experienced such terrors in childhood it was more likely that they would perceive their behavior as fundamentally different from their peers.

(A) for children whose parents had also experienced such terrors in childhood it was more likely that they would perceive their behavior as fundamentally different from their peers

(B) for children whose parents also experienced such terrors in childhood, they were more likely than other children prone to night terrors to perceive their behavior as fundamentally different from their peers'

(C) when children had parents who had also experienced such terrors in childhood it was more likely for them to be perceiving their behavior as different from that of their peers'

(D) that children whose parents had also experienced such terrors in childhood were more likely than other children prone to night terrors to perceive their behavior as fundamentally different from their peers'

(E) that when children had parents who had also experienced such terrors in childhood they were more likely to be perceiving behavior that differed from their peers

It's a tough one. Couldn't get this one right.
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24 Oct 2011, 04:48
hi all,
Ans is D for parallelism and "they", which is ambigous in all, except for D.
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24 Oct 2011, 09:04
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A study done on children under the age of twelve showed that 15 percent of them experienced night terrors but for children whose parents had also experienced such terrors in childhood it was more likely that they would perceive their behavior as fundamentally different from their peers.

(A) for children whose parents had also experienced such terrors in childhood it was more likely that they would perceive their behavior as fundamentally different from their peers

(B) for children whose parents also experienced such terrors in childhood, they were more likely than other children prone to night terrors to perceive their behavior as fundamentally different from their peers'

(C) when children had parents who had also experienced such terrors in childhood it was more likely for them to be perceiving their behavior as different from that of their peers'

(D) that children whose parents had also experienced such terrors in childhood were more likely than other children prone to night terrors to perceive their behavior as fundamentally different from their peers'

(E) that when children had parents who had also experienced such terrors in childhood they were more likely to be perceiving behavior that differed from their peers

Ans - 'D'

'But' seems to introduce ||ism therefore '..study..showed .. that ... but .. that..'. This eleminates A, B, and C.

'E' is suggest that 'when children had parents' as if children may not have parents as well

Timing - 1.59 Mins (Took a lil more to confirm D)
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24 Oct 2011, 10:02
Phew..tough one..got D after 4.30 mins:(
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