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According to a 1996 survey by the National Association of College an University Business Officers, more than three times as many independent institutions of higher education charge tuition and fees of under $8,000 a year than those that charge over$16,000.

A) than those that charge
B) than are charging
C) than to charge
D) as charge
E) as those charging
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17 Oct 2009, 10:05
[E]?
Since you have 3x AS many, you need as in the comparison and not than, so eliminate A, B and C.
Need to compare universities to universities, so need those.
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I think this was simple thats y I missed the correct OA.
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The OA seems to be E according to my document.
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Experts @e-gmat could you help us here. OA is E . But the between D & E its a nightmare to pick the right one
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removing the clutter, the stem reduces to :

more than three times as many institutions charge fees of under $8000 than those that charge over$16,000.

Thus the constn we need to zoom in is : As X........As Y

X - Institutions ( Plural ) , --------this calls for a Plural Y (Those)

more than three times AS many institutions charge fees of under $8,000 a year ................ AS those charging over$16,000.
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is those here referring to independent institutions ...

i selected d as i overlooked those in the option
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is those here referring to independent institutions ...

i selected d as i overlooked those in the option

Hi,

Do we have any other Referrent of THOSE other than INSTITUTIONS = what can THOSE refer back to other than institutions = Guess That's the onliest logical antecedent of THOSE in the stimulus.

Lets substitute THOSE = INSTITUTIONS in our equation and see if it still holds :

More than three time AS many INSTITUTIONS charge 8000$...................... AS INSTITUTIONS charging 16000$ ( Seems Logical, Equation still holds )

ie institutions charging 16000 = x , institutions charging 8000 = 3x
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Experts @e-gmat could you help us here. OA is E . But the between D & E its a nightmare to pick the right one

According to a 1996 survey by the National Association of College an University Business Officers, more than three times as many independent institutions of higher education charge tuition and fees of under $8,000 a year than those that charge over$16,000.

D) as charge - as charge over $16,000 sounds incorrect because independent institutions is not singular E) as those charging - Correct because plural & charging. e-GMAT Representative Joined: 02 Nov 2011 Posts: 1996 Followers: 2080 Kudos [?]: 7146 [11] , given: 267 Re: According to a 1996 survey by the National Association of [#permalink] ### Show Tags 24 Sep 2012, 17:44 11 This post received KUDOS Expert's post 18 This post was BOOKMARKED Vinay911, not sure if you are still looking for a response on this question. But here it is anyway (I am royally late in responding to this one ) As many posters have commented, we have to establish the correct equation here. Simplistically here is the equation we are looking for: Since your doubt pertains to choices D and E, I will only focus on those. The difference between these two choices is in terms of what is there in the blank below. Choice D has nothing in this blank and choice E has "those that". Now you may question that choice E actually states "those charging". Remember that "those charging" is equivalent of "those that charge". For example : cow that grazes all day long = cow grazing all day long Ok now lets look at both constructions in terms of the equation: Per choice D - More than 3x as many colleges charge certain fees as ____ charge over$16000
Per choice E - More than 3x as many colleges charge certain fees as those that charge over $16000 Now what are the entities being compared - colleges that charge <$8000 & colleges that charge > 16000
Choice E clearly states that comparison.

Whereas if you look choice D, it is missing the "COLLEGE" part of the comparison. It only states the "charge" part.

I hope this helps. Let me know if you have any other questions regarding this.

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Hi Payal,
Isnt the option D a classic case of ellipsis. i.e Colleges is understood by default. Please share your reasoning

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Per choice D - More than 3x as many colleges charge certain fees as ____ charge over $16000 Per choice E - More than 3x as many colleges charge certain fees as those that charge over$16000

Now what are the entities being compared - colleges that charge < $8000 & colleges that charge > 16000 Choice E clearly states that comparison. Whereas if you look choice D, it is missing the "COLLEGE" part of the comparison. It only states the "charge" part. I hope this helps. Let me know if you have any other questions regarding this. Regards, Payal _________________ +1 Kudos me, Help me unlocking GMAT Club Tests Manager Joined: 10 Jul 2011 Posts: 115 GMAT 1: 700 Q50 V34 GMAT 2: 710 Q50 V35 Followers: 3 Kudos [?]: 21 [0], given: 10 Re: According to a 1996 survey by the National Association of [#permalink] ### Show Tags 26 Sep 2012, 07:46 I also chose D based on ellepsis. Payal - Kindly clarify the ellepsis concept in this scenario. It would also be great if you can clarify the concept behind "those charging" being equivalent to "those that charge". As I understand, "those charging" is present continuous while "those that charge" is simple present. Thanks a ton! Manager Joined: 30 Sep 2009 Posts: 124 Followers: 0 Kudos [?]: 27 [0], given: 183 Re: According to a 1996 survey by the National Association of [#permalink] ### Show Tags 01 Oct 2012, 04:50 as many X as Y ... as many institutions as other colleges e-GMAT Representative Joined: 02 Nov 2011 Posts: 1996 Followers: 2080 Kudos [?]: 7146 [4] , given: 267 Re: According to a 1996 survey by the National Association of [#permalink] ### Show Tags 01 Oct 2012, 07:52 4 This post received KUDOS Expert's post 2 This post was BOOKMARKED imhimanshu wrote: Hi Payal, Isnt the option D a classic case of ellipsis. i.e Colleges is understood by default. Please share your reasoning Thanks Himanshu egmat wrote: Per choice D - More than 3x as many colleges charge certain fees as ____ charge over$16000
Per choice E - More than 3x as many colleges charge certain fees as those that charge over $16000 Now what are the entities being compared - colleges that charge <$8000 & colleges that charge > 16000

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Himanshu and IndianExpress,

Let's assume that Choice D is fine with college actually omitted through ellipsis. Now let us bring back this word "college" and read the sentence:
More than 3x as many colleges charge certain fees as colleges charge over $16000. Now let us do sentence structure analysis here: 1: More than 3x as many colleges charge certain fees as 2: colleges charge over$16000.

Now given this sentence, what is the comparison. IMO, the comparison is no longer clear. Are we comparing the number of colleges or are we comparing the action of charging the fees. Per the intended comparison, we need to compare the colleges, more specifically the number of colleges. One side of comparison is the number of colleges with certain characteristic. The other side of comparison is the number of colleges with certain other characteristic. Now to make the above sentence correct we need to add "that" between colleges and charge as follows:

More than 3x as many colleges charge certain fees as colleges THAT charge over $16000. Let's take one more set of comparison sentences and see ellipsis at play: Here see how the comparison is no longer between the number of colleges. It is between the action of charging fees. West coast colleges charge 2X as much fees as east coast colleges. West coast colleges charge 2X as much fees as east coast colleges do. West coast colleges charge 2X as much fees as east coast colleges charge. I hope this helps. Regards, Payal _________________ | '4 out of Top 5' Instructors on gmatclub | 70 point improvement guarantee | www.e-gmat.com e-GMAT Representative Joined: 02 Nov 2011 Posts: 1996 Followers: 2080 Kudos [?]: 7146 [1] , given: 267 Re: According to a 1996 survey by the National Association of [#permalink] ### Show Tags 01 Oct 2012, 08:06 1 This post received KUDOS Expert's post IndianExpress wrote: It would also be great if you can clarify the concept behind "those charging" being equivalent to "those that charge". As I understand, "those charging" is present continuous while "those that charge" is simple present. Thanks a ton! Hello IndianExpress, I will now address your question on tense "those charging" and "those that charge". Those charging those that charge Here "charging" is not a verb. So it does not have any verb tense. It is a verb-ing modifier, which definitely represents an action but not in the role of a verb. It basically takes on whatever verb tense the main clause has. Yesterday night the sky looked beautiful with the stars shining so brightly. Tonight the sky looks beautiful with the stars shining so brightly. Notice the verb-ing "shining". Given what I have explained here, please give me your analysis of these two sentences in terms of the timing of the actions - specifically the action of shining of stars. I look forward to your response. Also, please review this article on verb-ing modifiers Thanks, Payal _________________ | '4 out of Top 5' Instructors on gmatclub | 70 point improvement guarantee | www.e-gmat.com Manager Joined: 10 Jul 2011 Posts: 115 GMAT 1: 700 Q50 V34 GMAT 2: 710 Q50 V35 Followers: 3 Kudos [?]: 21 [0], given: 10 Re: According to a 1996 survey by the National Association of [#permalink] ### Show Tags 01 Oct 2012, 09:47 Thanks for the amazing explanation Payal. Your explanations are always superb. I think I am pretty clear on both the concepts now. Just to re-iterate, ellepsis can only be used if there is absolutely no ambiguity regarding the meaning. I think this is the only rule around ellepsis. Let me know if I am not understanding this correctly. In the sentence in question, choice D actually makes the sentence a little confusing, hence ellepsis cannot be used. Regarding the verb-ing modifiers, I am actually familiar with the concept that they take the verb tense of the main clause. In fact, verb-ing modifiers are pretty common and I myself might have used them multiple times in the past. I was somehow not able to apply the concept at the right place, probably need to practice a little more. In both the sentences that you have mentioned in your post, the verb-ing modifier (shining) does actually take the respective verb tense (looked and looks respectively). Thanks again!!!! IndianExpress Director Status: Gonna rock this time!!! Joined: 22 Jul 2012 Posts: 547 Location: India GMAT 1: 640 Q43 V34 GMAT 2: 630 Q47 V29 WE: Information Technology (Computer Software) Followers: 3 Kudos [?]: 61 [0], given: 562 Re: According to a 1996 survey by the National Association of [#permalink] ### Show Tags 19 Jan 2013, 19:55 egmat wrote: Vinay911, not sure if you are still looking for a response on this question. But here it is anyway (I am royally late in responding to this one ) As many posters have commented, we have to establish the correct equation here. Simplistically here is the equation we are looking for: Since your doubt pertains to choices D and E, I will only focus on those. The difference between these two choices is in terms of what is there in the blank below. Choice D has nothing in this blank and choice E has "those that". Now you may question that choice E actually states "those charging". Remember that "those charging" is equivalent of "those that charge". For example : cow that grazes all day long = cow grazing all day long Ok now lets look at both constructions in terms of the equation: Per choice D - More than 3x as many colleges charge certain fees as ____ charge over$16000
Per choice E - More than 3x as many colleges charge certain fees as those that charge over $16000 Now what are the entities being compared - colleges that charge <$8000 & colleges that charge > 16000
Choice E clearly states that comparison.

Whereas if you look choice D, it is missing the "COLLEGE" part of the comparison. It only states the "charge" part.

I hope this helps. Let me know if you have any other questions regarding this.

Regards,
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Hi Payal,
Amazing explanation.. I, however, have a doubt here.

Had we had 'as those that charge' as another option, would this have been a better choice?
Its true that we are supposed to choose the best of the 5 answer choices. I am just trying to understand whether parallelism is absolutely needed as in this case, the parallelism is not with respect to structure but with respect to the meaning..

Please let us know which one would be preferred: parallelism with structure or parallelism with meaning.
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Had we had 'as those that charge' as another option, would this have been a better choice?
Its true that we are supposed to choose the best of the 5 answer choices. I am just trying to understand whether parallelism is absolutely needed as in this case, the parallelism is not with respect to structure but with respect to the meaning..

Please let us know which one would be preferred: parallelism with structure or parallelism with meaning.
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Hi Sachin,

Well, "as those that charge" is certainly the correct construction. However, on GMAT, out of 5 naswer choices, only 1 will be correct. You will never have to choose between two grammatacally as well as logically correct naswer choices.
"as those that charge" and "as those chraging" convey the same meaning. These are just two different ways of writing the same thing and both are equalyy correct. So I doubt, you will ever have to choose from such options.
However, if you had these two options then yes, you would have gone with the later to maintain absolutely identical parallelism in the sentence.

Now, in parallelism, we try to keep the entities as grammatically similar as possible. But, grammatical parallelism must not be maintained at the cost of logical parallelism. Always remember that LOGIC is utmost important in parallelism. Logic governs the grammatical structure of entities in the list. That's why many a times we see "imperfect list" where the entities do not always have identical grammatical structure. We must maintain the identical grammatical structure as long as we can do it. But the logic must be maintained all the time. You may read the following article on this topic that discusses the nuances of this topic:
parallelism-grammar-vs-logic-141946.html

Hope this helps.
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I guess you wanted to say that we would choose the former of "as those that charge" and "as those charging"

However, if you had these two options then yes, you would have gone with the former to maintain absolutely identical parallelism in the sentence
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I guess you wanted to say that we would choose the former of "as those that charge" and "as those charging"

However, if you had these two options then yes, you would have gone with the former to maintain absolutely identical parallelism in the sentence

Hi Sachin,

Oh yes, I meant you would have gone withthe choice you suggested. Sorry about that error.

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