According to Booker T. Whatley’s recent analysis, planting the same crops as are planted on large farms will lead to economic disaster for the small farmer, who should plan a succession of high-value crops that will provide a year-round cash flow.
(A) planting the same crops as are planted on large farms will lead to economic disaster for the small farmer, who
=====>Best choice.
(B) it will lead to economic disaster for the small farmer to plant the same crops as on the large farms;
they
=====>"they" have no clear referent and "it" refers to "recent analysis". Recent analysis cannot lead to disaster.
(C) economic disaster will result from planting the same crops
as large farms to
the small farmer, who
=====>Comparing apples and oranges.
(D) economic disaster for the small farmer will result from planting the same crops as on the large farms;
they
=====>"they" have no clear referent. Also this is passive.
(E) the small farmer
planting the same crops as
are planted on large farms will lead to economic disaster; they
=====>"they" have no clear referent. Also, its not parallel
Mahesh, a small request, please underline the part that need to be checked or corrected.
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SAID BUSINESS SCHOOL, OXFORD - MBA CLASS OF 2008