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According to findings derived from functional magnetic resonance imaging (MRI), the area of the brain in which a second or third language is stored depends on the age of the language learner; whereas each language occupies a distinct area of the brain in an adult learner, language areas overlap in a young child.

(A) whereas each language occupies a distinct area of the brain in an adult learner,
(B) whereas for adults each language occupies a distinct area of the brain and
(C) each language occupies a distinct area of the brain when they are learned by an adult, while
(D) each language in adults occupied a distinct area of the brain, while
(E) each language occupying a distinct area of the brain for an adult learner, and

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According to findings derived from functional magnetic resonance imaging (MRI), the area of the brain in which a second or third language is stored depends on the age of the language learner; whereas each language occupies a distinct area of the brain in an adult learner, language areas overlap in a young child.

(A) whereas each language occupies a distinct area of the brain in an adult learner, - CORRECT

(B) whereas for adults each language occupies a distinct area of the brain and - Use of WHEREAS & AND together is incorrect. Both words mean different things. Thus Incorrect.

(C) each language occupies a distinct area of the brain when they are learned by an adult, while - Singular antecedent "Each Language" require singular pronoun and not plural. Moreover, WHEN is incorrectly used. Thus Incorrect

(D) each language in adults occupied a distinct area of the brain, while - This option means that in the past language occupied a certain area of the brain, but not it doesn't. Changes the meaning. Thus Incorrect

(E) each language occupying a distinct area of the brain for an adult learner, and - This sentence is a big run-on and fragment as OCCUPYING is acting as a modifier. Thus Incorrect.

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Re: According to findings derived from... [#permalink] New post 22 Sep 2013, 04:03
Yeah!! For some reason my mind told me "whereas" is not a proper construction.

Can the sub-ordinate clause be separated by a semi-colon?

Is the sentence after the semi-colon in option A a complete sentence? Can it stand on its own?
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gmatter0913 wrote:
Can the sub-ordinate clause be separated by a semi-colon?

The answer is NO

gmatter0913 wrote:
Is the sentence after the semi-colon in option A a complete sentence? Can it stand on its own?

The structure of option A is
Clause 1 + ; + Clause 2

The structure of Clause 2 is
Dependent Clause A + , + Independent Clause B

We can also write The structure of Clause 2 as
Independent Clause B Dependent Clause A
Observe there is no COMMA before Dependent clause

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Re: According to findings derived from... [#permalink] New post 26 Sep 2013, 04:00
Hello fameatop,

Can you please detail the correct usage of "When". Its been increasingly used in incorrect answer choices, so just want to make sure how "When" works.

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Re: According to findings derived from... [#permalink] New post 26 Sep 2013, 07:34
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Hello fameatop,

Can you please detail the correct usage of "When". Its been increasingly used in incorrect answer choices, so just want to make sure how "When" works.

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If you are asking about option C then apart from "when", there is another error --> use of plural pronoun "they" to refer to singular noun "each language".

You can find a very good explanation of the usage of "when" by e-gmat in their blog:
http://e-gmat.com/blogs/?p=169

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Re: According to findings derived from... [#permalink] New post 27 Aug 2014, 10:42
In option (A) shouldn't there be a comma after 'whereas'?
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Re: According to findings derived from... [#permalink] New post 27 Aug 2014, 10:53
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In option (A) shouldn't there be a comma after 'whereas'?
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No, whereas wouldn't require a comma. The nice thing is that the GMAT wouldn't test you on comma placement like that.

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Re: According to findings derived from... [#permalink] New post 27 Aug 2014, 11:21
Hi Kyle,

In MGMAT SC guide Page 198 commas are used after whereas, when it is used after a semicolon.

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Re: According to findings derived from... [#permalink] New post 27 Aug 2014, 11:44
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In MGMAT SC guide Page 198 commas are used after whereas, when it is used after a semicolon.

Please help.

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Sounds interesting...can you post an example sentence?

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Re: According to findings derived from... [#permalink] New post 27 Aug 2014, 21:17
fameatop wrote:
According to findings derived from functional magnetic resonance imaging (MRI), the area of the brain in which a second or third language is stored depends on the age of the language learner; whereas each language occupies a distinct area of the brain in an adult learner, language areas overlap in a young child.

(A) whereas each language occupies a distinct area of the brain in an adult learner, - CORRECT

(B) whereas for adults each language occupies a distinct area of the brain and - Use of WHEREAS & AND together is incorrect. Both words mean different things. Thus Incorrect.

(C) each language occupies a distinct area of the brain when they are learned by an adult, while - Singular antecedent "Each Language" require singular pronoun and not plural. Moreover, WHEN is incorrectly used. Thus Incorrect

(D) each language in adults occupied a distinct area of the brain, while - This option means that in the past language occupied a certain area of the brain, but not it doesn't. Changes the meaning. Thus Incorrect

(E) each language occupying a distinct area of the brain for an adult learner, and - This sentence is a big run-on and fragment as OCCUPYING is acting as a modifier. Thus Incorrect.

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Re: According to findings derived from... [#permalink] New post 28 Aug 2014, 10:25
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Hi Kyle,

In MGMAT SC guide Page 198 commas are used after whereas, when it is used after a semicolon.

Please help.

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Sounds interesting...can you post an example sentence?

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Hi Kyle,

Andrew and Lisa are inseparable; therefore, we never see them apart.
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Re: According to findings derived from... [#permalink] New post 28 Aug 2014, 13:53
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qwerty12321 wrote:
Hi Kyle,

In MGMAT SC guide Page 198 commas are used after whereas, when it is used after a semicolon.

Please help.

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Sounds interesting...can you post an example sentence?

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Hi Kyle,

Andrew and Lisa are inseparable; therefore, we never see them apart.


Is that the example you were citing from the Strategy Guide? "Therefore" in that usage does use a comma after the semicolon (as would however, moreover, therefore, consequently, otherwise, nevertheless, thus). I'm interested to see an example with whereas. I just have the digital edition of the strategy guide with me but maybe the pages don't line up because there isn't anything with "whereas" around page 198 for me...

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Re: According to findings derived from... [#permalink] New post 31 Aug 2014, 10:58
Hi Kyle

You are right. There is no example with 'whereas'.

Why is this so?
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Re: According to findings derived from... [#permalink] New post 18 Sep 2014, 13:41
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You are right. There is no example with 'whereas'.

Why is this so?


Are you asking why whereas doesn't use a comma here or why there aren't examples of whereas in the strategy guide?
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