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According to Italy's top anti-Mafia prosecutor, the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town famous because of the “The Godfather” and near to those he most trusted.
a) the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town famous because of “The Godfather” and near to those he most trusted
b) famous because of “The Godfather,” the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town near to those he most trusted
c) the ailing mobster, famous because of “The Godfather,” came to take refuge in Corleone, a town near to those he most trusted
d) near to those he most trusted, the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town famous because of “The Godfather”
e) Corleone, famous because of “The Godfather,” was the town that the ailing mobster came to take refuge in because it was near to those he most trusted
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Re: 700-800 problem from Manhattan GMAT [#permalink] New post 25 Feb 2011, 08:15
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The gist of the text is that the town became famous because of ‘The Godfather’ and not the mobster. We can drop B and C on this count.

Placing the phrase ‘near to those he most trusted’ next to the prosecutor in D misinterprets the meaning as if the prosecutor was close to those he trusted most rather than the mobster; drop it.

E shifts the primary focus to the town from the mobster, by pushing him into a subordinate clause and is too wordy.

A is crisp and fine.
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Re: 700-800 problem from Manhattan GMAT [#permalink] New post 25 Feb 2011, 08:40
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B and C hugely change the meaning. D places the subject far away, making the sentence confusing.

E seems a good contender, but A sounds better. I'll go with A.
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Re: 700-800 problem from Manhattan GMAT [#permalink] New post 25 Feb 2011, 08:41
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E has modifier issue - the Godfather was not the town. Corleone = town
Hence A is the best.
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Re: 700-800 problem from Manhattan GMAT [#permalink] New post 28 Feb 2011, 03:20
yes , e is obviously not concise. is this a 700-800 level question ?
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Re: 700-800 problem from Manhattan GMAT [#permalink] New post 19 Apr 2011, 17:05
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E has modifier issue - the Godfather was not the town. Corleone = town
Hence A is the best.


Can someone please explain why E has a modifier issue? The additional information of the town is still right.

I agree with daagh for the explanation of why E is wrong. It is changing the shift to town.
I missed this and chose E. :cry:
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Re: 700-800 problem from Manhattan GMAT [#permalink] New post 26 Apr 2011, 04:49
Answer must be "A" as this choice correctly uses modifiers!!

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According to Italy's top anti-Mafia prosecutor, the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town famous because of the “The Godfather” and near to those he most trusted.
a) the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town famous because of “The Godfather” and near to those he most trusted
b) famous because of “The Godfather,” the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town near to those he most trusted
c) the ailing mobster, famous because of “The Godfather,” came to take refuge in Corleone, a town near to those he most trusted
d) near to those he most trusted, the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town famous because of “The Godfather”
e) Corleone, famous because of “The Godfather,” was the town that the ailing mobster came to take refuge in because it was near to those he most trusted

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Re: 700-800 problem from Manhattan GMAT   [#permalink] 26 Apr 2011, 04:49
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