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Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals in her home, they [#permalink]
27 Sep 2005, 07:42
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Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals in her home, they featured the preparation of great quantities of ceremonial food, the wearing of many layers of colorful clothing adorned with silver, and the recounting of traditional tribal jokes and stories.
(A) Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals in her home, they featured
(B) Festivals were held in Aho, a Kiowa matriarchâ€™s home, which featured
(C) Aho, who was a Kiowa matriarch in her home, held festivals featuring
(D) In her home, Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals that featured
(E) Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals in her home that featured
A- they is the wrong pronoun here, should be these festivals.
B- were held in Aho, implies that Aho is a place instead of a person.
C- I quess festivals that are more proper than festivals featuring
We've left with D and E and E says held festivals in her home sounds more complicated than D. I prefer D.