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Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals in her home, they featured the preparation of great quantities of ceremonial food, the wearing of many layers of colorful clothing adorned with silver, and the recounting of traditional tribal jokes and stories.

(A) Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals in her home, they featured
(B) Festivals were held in Aho, a Kiowa matriarch’s home, which featured
(C) Aho, who was a Kiowa matriarch in her home, held festivals featuring
(D) In her home, Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals that featured
(E) Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals in her home that featured
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D should be the one!

A: They is the stands orphaned here
B: home, which featured - incorrect. Its the festivals which features...
C: Kiowa matriarch in her home - only in her home is it? nah!
D: perfect..
E: again "home that featured" - incorrect.
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(E) Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals in her home that featured
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(A) ... they featured: has no correlation to the previous part

(B) Festivals were held in Aho : inside a person???

(C) Aho, who was a Kiowa matriarch in her home: Was a matriarch in her home and not outside her home?

(D) In her home, Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals that featured: Too many qualifiers which if removed don't make sense
"In her home held festivals???"

(E) Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals in her home that featured: Correct answer.
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 [#permalink] New post 17 Aug 2006, 20:09
gmatcrook wrote:
D should be the one!

A: They is the stands orphaned here
B: home, which featured - incorrect. Its the festivals which features...
C: Kiowa matriarch in her home - only in her home is it? nah!
D: perfect..
E: again "home that featured" - incorrect.


D reads a bilt stilted and choppy.

"home that featured" is a correct defining clause construction.

(E) wins here.
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 [#permalink] New post 17 Aug 2006, 20:11
Agree with D.

Aho, ................, held festivals in her home that featured
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 [#permalink] New post 17 Aug 2006, 20:20
I go with D.

E is wrong. home that featured or festivals that featured???
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ps_dahiya wrote:
I go with D.

E is wrong. home that featured or festivals that featured???


Exactly. That's why you are the :king "Mr. Sharp Arrow."

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 [#permalink] New post 17 Aug 2006, 22:53
Will go with D.

The fight's between D and E. But E makes that cardinal error of being ambiguous.

"That" can refer to home or festivals.
D is clear.
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ps_dahiya wrote:
I go with D.

E is wrong. home that featured or festivals that featured???


I could understand from the posts that E> is wrong,,
But i think even D> has a problem
in D> "Aho" is set off between commas, so it appera to be non-essential to the sentence...
Without "Aho" teh sentence reads :
In her home held festivals that featured....Now e don't know who is "her" refering to..

13.Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals in her home, they featured the preparation of great quantities of ceremonial food, the wearing of many layers of colorful clothing adorned with silver, and the recounting of traditional tribal jokes and stories.
(A) Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals in her home, they featured
(B) Festivals were held in Aho, a Kiowa matriarch’s home, which featured
(C) Aho, who was a Kiowa matriarch in her home, held festivals featuring
(D) In her home, Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals that featured
(E) Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals in her home that featured
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 [#permalink] New post 19 Aug 2006, 20:42
shinewine wrote:
ps_dahiya wrote:
I go with D.

E is wrong. home that featured or festivals that featured???


I could understand from the posts that E> is wrong,,
But i think even D> has a problem
in D> "Aho" is set off between commas, so it appera to be non-essential to the sentence...
Without "Aho" teh sentence reads :
In her home held festivals that featured....Now e don't know who is "her" refering to..

13.Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals in her home, they featured the preparation of great quantities of ceremonial food, the wearing of many layers of colorful clothing adorned with silver, and the recounting of traditional tribal jokes and stories.
(A) Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals in her home, they featured
(B) Festivals were held in Aho, a Kiowa matriarch’s home, which featured
(C) Aho, who was a Kiowa matriarch in her home, held festivals featuring
(D) In her home, Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals that featured
(E) Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals in her home that featured


Its not the "Aho" that is set off in commas, its the "a Kiowa matriarch" that is set off between commas. "In her home" is the modifier that modifies Aho. After removing the non-essential part, the sentence becomes:

In her home, Aho held festivals that featured............
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