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Re: As a busy rock musician, managing his scheduling and negotiating [#permalink]
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As a busy rock musician, managing his scheduling and negotiating were made much easier by having a top notch agent.

(A) As a busy rock musician, managing his scheduling and negotiating were made much easier by having a top notch agent.

(B) As a busy rock musician, having a top notch agent made managing his scheduling and negotiating much easier.

(C) Being a busy rock musician and having a top notch agent, managing his scheduling and negotiating was made much easier.

(D) A busy rock musician, he made managing his scheduling and negotiating much easier by having a top notch agent.

(E) Busy as a rock musician, he made his scheduling and negotiating management much easier by having a top notch agent.


Its all to do with the modifier--
As a busy rock musician should be closer to WHAT it modifies and it should be some person..
Only D passes the MODIFIER test..
lets see the choices:-
(A) As a busy rock musician,managing his scheduling and negotiatingwere made much easier by having a top notch agent.
Error in modifier.
Also managing should take verb 'was;


(B) As a busy rock musician, having a top notch agent made managing his scheduling and negotiating much easier.
Error in modifier.

(C) Being a busy rock musician and having a top notch agent, managing his scheduling and negotiating was made much easier.
Again Modifier error..
Also being is almost always redundant. Here too removing BEING does not affect the sentence


(D) A busy rock musician, he made managing his scheduling and negotiating much easier by having a top notch agent.
Correct-- A busy rock musician is an APPOSITIVE modifying 'he'

(E) Busy as a rock musician, he made his scheduling and negotiating management much easier by having a top notch agent.
Although corrects the MODIFIER issue, but changes the meaning..
Original meaning was that "he is a busy rock musician", changes here to "he is busy as a rock musician".
Omission of 'HIS' makes it confusing as to 'whose' scheduling etc did he make


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Can you please explain the error in B?
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Can you please explain the error in B?


The modifier as a busy rock musician should refer to he. However in option B this modifier refers to the gerund phrase having a top notch agent. The implied meaning is having a top notch agent was a busy rock musician.
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(B) As a busy rock musician, having a top notch agent made managing his scheduling and negotiating much easier.

Can you please explain the error in B?


Hi,
as also explained by Sayantan, As a busy rock musician' is a modifier and requires a NOUN to modify..

We could have written..
As a busy rock musician, he managed his... with help of a top notch agent..
here As a busy rock musician correctly modifies 'he'
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Re: As a busy rock musician, managing his scheduling and negotiating [#permalink]
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I am unable to comprehend the sentence's meaning. I get the point as to why the answer is D, However, What i do not understand is the fact that,

As a busy rock musician is modifying Managing his scheduling and Negotiating - Even if this is wrong - What does this wrong sentence mean?


Could you please explain in detail?
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chetan2u sayantanc2k

I am unable to comprehend the sentence's meaning. I get the point as to why the answer is D, However, What i do not understand is the fact that,

As a busy rock musician is modifying Managing his scheduling and Negotiating - Even if this is wrong - What does this wrong sentence mean?


Could you please explain in detail?


Hi..

What the sentence means is that there is some one who is busy in his job, so he does not have time to manage his appointments and schedule, and, so he has hired an agent for the same.

When we use 'As a busy rock musician', it requires WHO and so a pronoun or a noun after it.
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