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Sentence has following issues: 1. Usage of "Like" 2. Unnecessary Tense Change
A) majoring in specialized areas like those of finance and marketing have been becoming increasingly [ “Such as” is better alternative than “Like”; majoring implies an ongoing activity where as dependent clause is in simple present – eliminate it]
(B) who major in such specialized areas as finance and marketing are becoming more and more [ “Who” correctly modifying the students; Verb Major in same tense as the dependent clause – hold it ]
(C) who majored in specialized areas such as those of finance and marketing are being increasingly [ “majored” unnecessary tense shift; infamous redundant “being” - eliminate it]
(D) who major in specialized areas like those of finance and marketing have been becoming more and more [“Such as” is better alternative than “Like” – eliminate it]
(E) having majored in such specialized areas as finance and marketing are being increasingly [ Simple present preferred over “having majored”; infamous redundant “being” - eliminate it]
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