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Australian embryologists have found evidence that suggests that the elephant is descended from an aquatic animal, and its trunk originally evolved as a kind of snorkel.

(a)Australian embryologists have found evidence that suggests that the elephant is descended from an aquatic animal, and its trunk originally evolved as a kind of snorkel.
(b) that has suggested the elephant descended from an aquatic animal, its trunk originally evolving
(c)suggesting that the elephant had descended from an aquatic animal with its trunk originally evolving
(d) to suggest that the elephant had descended from an aquatic animal and its trunk originally evolving
(e) to suggest that the elephant is descended from an aquatic animal and that its trunk originally evolved
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01 Mar 2011, 01:11
I think it should be E as it correctly uses evidence to and also properly uses "its trunk" . Whats the OA and OE?
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01 Mar 2011, 01:23
is descended ? is that right grammar ?
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01 Mar 2011, 01:25
OA is E but there is no satisfactory OE. what exactly is wrong with C ?
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When you are referring to ancestry "is descended" is the correct usage, so it should be OK in this case. Also, other four choices have more obvious errors.
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01 Mar 2011, 01:42
grammatically 'is descended' is perfectly fine! it's passive!

I just had little doubt whether should be 'was descended' here in E but still it is the best of all.
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01 Mar 2011, 02:37
BTW, what is the source of this question?
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01 Mar 2011, 03:29
E is correct. Because it accurately identified trunk of elephant that is evolved.
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07 May 2011, 20:48
garimavyas wrote:
OA is E but there is no satisfactory OE. what exactly is wrong with C ?

Usage of past perfect in C is wrong."Is descended" in my opinion should have been "was descended" ..Is descended is a little passive in tone.
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07 Mar 2012, 17:02
"scientists have found evidence that suggests that"

is this wrong because it's the evidence suggesting something rather than the scientist?

I went with E based on the parallelism of "that its trunk", but i was unsure about the above. Does A work if it was "to suggest that" and replaced "and its trunk" with "and that its trunk"?
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08 Mar 2012, 11:41
bschoolnewbie2011 wrote:
"scientists have found evidence that suggests that"

is this wrong because it's the evidence suggesting something rather than the scientist?

I went with E based on the parallelism of "that its trunk", but i was unsure about the above. Does A work if it was "to suggest that" and replaced "and its trunk" with "and that its trunk"?

I think that it is correct that "evidence" suggests, as opposed to that "scientists" suggest. Scientists merely found evidence, which suggests blah blah.
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08 Mar 2012, 15:08
It is not in the options but wouldn't * its trunk was evolved * be more correct ?
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