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163. Because Halley’s comet changes orbit slightly during the seventy-six-year interval between passing close to Earth, it may veer onto a collision course with a planet sometime in the distant future.
(A) between passing
(B) of passing
(C) between its passes
(D) of its passes
(E) as it passes

completely lost it please can any 1 explain
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26 Sep 2009, 17:39
IMO E.

Dont read the strike part, does it make sense? Only E fits here.
-> Because Halley’s comet changes orbit slightly [strike]during the seventy-six-year interva[/strike]l as it passes close to the earth, it may veer onto a collision course with a planet sometime in the distant future.
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26 Sep 2009, 17:40
Another reasons, between has to follow by two things
its trying to trick us by giving "interval OF" but its wrong.

Whats OA?
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26 Sep 2009, 22:22
I was inclined to choose B cuz of "OF", but now say E.
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27 Sep 2009, 09:32
The OA is C
even i cant figure it out
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27 Sep 2009, 21:36
sagarsabnis wrote:
The OA is C
even i cant figure it out

hmm...can anyone explain why C?
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28 Sep 2009, 06:23
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163. Because Halley’s comet changes orbit slightly during the seventy-six-year interval between passing close to Earth, it may veer onto a collision course with a planet sometime in the distant future.
(A) between passing
(B) of passing
(C) between its passes
(D) of its passes
(E) as it passes

completely lost it please can any 1 explain

C is correct.

The subject of the sentence is "Halley's comet", but the sentence describes the path of the comet. A pronoun is required to refer to "comet's path/pass"
"its" correctly refers to Comet's passes or passing (the comet's action)

The options are narrowed down to C and D. D is better. "between" correctly describes the comet's action between 2 stages.
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28 Sep 2009, 22:15
I too chose E, can someone explain more why C is good? some explanation is there above but kind of confusing really.
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I too chose E, can someone explain more why C is good? some explanation is there above but kind of confusing really.

The subject of the sentence is "comet" ( or call Halley's comet).

Now note that the second part of the sentence is not referring to the comet but to comet's ordit, so a noun/pronoun is required to refer to comet's orbit

Because Halley’s comet changes orbit slightly during the seventy-six-year interval between the comet's orbits close to Earth, it may veer onto a collision course with a planet sometime in the distant future.

There are two nouns in this sentence "comet" and comet's "comet's orbit/passes" and a pronoun "its" is required in the second part of the sentence to refer to "orbit/passes"
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29 Sep 2009, 06:10
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Because Halley’s comet changes orbit slightly during the seventy-six-year interval between the comet's orbits close to Earth, it may veer onto a collision course with a planet sometime in the distant future.

Here in subordinate clause, its refer to comet's not comet's orbit's. Comet's orbit doesn't pass in interval close to Earth, but the comet does.

how to define an interval - (interval between two passes of comet close to Earth[*consecutive is implicit]) <== This is what is implied in here by using "between its passes".

Also, 'it' in last clause again refers to Comet not Comet's orbit.
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In E, "as it passes" imples that the Comet takes 76 yrs to pass close to Earth. If thats true then people will book trips in advance

So, E is definitly wrong. We are discussing about an interval, which is calculated b/w 2 occurances. So, I think C is correct.
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11 Apr 2010, 07:57
This is very tricky. I went with B. got caught in the trick.

Thanks for the explanations.
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25 Sep 2010, 06:43
Very tricky. Don't understand why C is correct?
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25 Sep 2010, 08:12
wow! at first I went for E
having read explanation above still I can not digest C very well
confusing, isnt it?
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26 Sep 2010, 12:39
I would also aprreciate some more clarification.
Could anybody elaborate a bit more?
still confused with this one.
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27 Sep 2010, 01:13
I was going back and forth between C and D. Couldn't figure out if "interval between" was redundant, so I went with D, but I can see it both ways. Is "interval of" unidiomatic?
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25 Apr 2012, 01:35
It is not clear why the ans is C. Does Gmat test in this way?
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