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Re: Because of the flood of immigrants between 1905 and 1910, so [#permalink]
I will go with 'D'

(A) so overcrowded were the school buildings on the lower East Side beyond their capacity
overcrowded & beyond their capacity - redundant.

(B) so overcrowded beyond their capacity were the school buildings on the lower East Side
same as A

(C) school buildings on the lower East Side were overcrowded so far beyond their capacity
same as A

(D) school buildings on the lower East Side were so overcrowded
This is it.

(E) lower East Side school buildings were so overcrowded
Makes it look like 'Lower East Side' is a name of a school.
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Re: Because of the flood of immigrants between 1905 and 1910, so [#permalink]
D is best. It's free of any grammatical errors, and is clear and concise.
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Re: Because of the flood of immigrants between 1905 and 1910, so [#permalink]
Because of the flood of immigrants between 1905 and 1910, so overcrowded were the school buildings on the lower East Side beyond their capacity that the city converted a hospital ship into a school where ten thousand children received instruction.

(D) school buildings on the lower East Side were so overcrowded
(E) lower East Side school buildings were so overcrowded

I think we can narrow down to D and E pretty much quickly.

Between D and E, D is better. we want to say school buildings on the lower east side to make clear it's not any school buidlings, but only those situated on the lower east side.

E is not so clear on that point. By syaing lower east side school buidlings, the reader can take it to be the eastern corners of school budilings
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Re: Because of the flood of immigrants between 1905 and 1910, so [#permalink]
IMO, "D" makes it sound like we are talking abt buildings that are located on the lower east side of the school.
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Re: Because of the flood of immigrants between 1905 and 1910, so [#permalink]
I pick "D"

A --> redundant

B --> so overcrowded and beyond their capacity
Mention the same thing twice

C --> [..] overcrowded so far beyond [..]
"far beyond" doesn't make any sense.

E --> lower East Side school
Definitely a name of a school
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Re: Because of the flood of immigrants between 1905 and 1910, so [#permalink]
I go for D.

IMO we can narrow to C and D because of dangling modifiers. And since C is very cumbersome D becomes the obvious choice.
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Re: Because of the flood of immigrants between 1905 and 1910, so [#permalink]
jpv wrote:
I dont agree with OA.


Relax guys :P


I too picked D....

I would have liked someone like Paul/HH to explain us about this.
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Re: Because of the flood of immigrants between 1905 and 1910, so [#permalink]
Because of the flood of immigrants between 1905 and 1910, so overcrowded were the school buildings on the lower East Side beyond their capacity that the city converted a hospital ship into a school where ten thousand children received instruction.

(D) school buildings on the lower East Side were so overcrowded
(E) lower East Side school buildings were so overcrowded

D & E, IMO, could be chosen depending on the intended meaning.

D will be true of the author wants to convey that the school buildings near the lower East Side were overcrowded

But, I believe E is more logical than D in this context - E basically says that All the school buildings within the lower east side region were overcrowded. This is better than the intended meaning in D, which gives a sense of overcrowding of a subset of schools
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Re: Because of the flood of immigrants between 1905 and 1910, so [#permalink]
Vithal wrote:
D & E, IMO, could be chosen depending on the intended meaning.

Yes, and the intended meaning is mentioned in the original wrong choice.
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jpv wrote:
I dont agree with OA.


How come there are different OAs for the same question.



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