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Because the enemys new ship is the quietest and it is

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Because the enemys new ship is the quietest and it is [#permalink] New post 17 Jun 2006, 20:19
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Because the enemy’s new ship is the quietest and it is therefore the most elusive submarine, it is being increasingly viewed by the military as a threat to security.
(A) and it is therefore the most elusive submarine, it is being increasingly viewed
(B) it is therefore the most elusive of submarines, and it has increased the view
(C) and therefore the most elusive submarine, it is being increasingly viewed
(D) and therefore it is the most elusive of submarines, there is an increasing view
(E) therefore being the most elusive of submarines, it is increasingly viewed
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 [#permalink] New post 18 Jun 2006, 20:40
C seems correct.
I think 'being' is used correctly here. :roll:
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 [#permalink] New post 18 Jun 2006, 20:43
Agree 'C' it is.

Because the enemy’s new ship is the quietest and therefore the most elusive submarine, it is being increasingly viewed by the military as a threat to security.
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 [#permalink] New post 18 Jun 2006, 21:08
B --> 'has increased the view' is awkward
D --> 'increasing view' is awkward
E --> 'being' is not needed
A --> 'it is' is not needed

C is the best
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Re: SC Enemy ship [#permalink] New post 18 Jun 2006, 21:26
mahesh004 wrote:
Because the enemy’s new ship is the quietest and it is therefore the most elusive submarine, it is being increasingly viewed by the military as a threat to security.


(A) and it is therefore the most elusive submarine, it is being increasingly viewed
---> "it is" is redundant! --> out

(B) it is therefore the most elusive of submarines, and it has increased the view
---> "it is" is redundant! Besides, the abrupt "and" interrupts the causual meaning of the sentence. --> out

(C) and therefore the most elusive submarine, it is being increasingly viewed
---> fine!

(D) and therefore it is the most elusive of submarines, there is an increasing view
---> "it is" is redundant! Besides, "view" of what?! --> out
(E) therefore being the most elusive of submarines, it is increasingly viewed
---> "being" makes the sentence redundant. --> out

C is the best.
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 [#permalink] New post 19 Jun 2006, 05:38
^ C ^

we don't need "it is" again after "therefore".
  [#permalink] 19 Jun 2006, 05:38
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