monirjewel wrote:
Born into poverty and sent by her father into servitude at the age of seven, Martha Matilda Harper created America's first retail franchise network, a radical new business model that enabled women in the late nineteenth and early twentieth centuries to own their own businesses and gain financial independence.
(A) Martha Matilda Harper created America's first retail franchise network, a radical new business model that enabled women in the late nineteenth and early twentieth centuries to own
(B) Martha Matilda Harper created America's first retail franchise network, a radical new business model that enabled ownership by women in the late nineteenth and early twentieth centuries of
(C) Martha Matilda Harper's creation of America's first retail franchise network was a radical new business model that enabled women in the late nineteenth and early twentieth centuries to own
(D) America's first retail franchise network was created by Martha Matilda Harper, a radical new business model that enabled women in the late nineteenth and early twentieth centuries to own
(E) America's first retail franchise network was created by Martha Matilda Harper, a radical new business model that enabled ownership by women in the late nineteenth and early twentieth centuries of
Agree with macfauz, Ans has to be A
Clearly C,D and E can be ruled out because the modfier " Born into poverty and sent by her father into servitude at the age of seven" can modify only Martha
For option B,lets break down the sentence and see what it looks like
Born into poverty and sent by her father into servitude at the age of seven, Martha Matilda Harper created America's first retail franchise network, a radical new business model that enabled ownership by women in the late nineteenth and early twentieth centuries of their own businesses and gain financial independence.Clause 1 :Born into poverty and sent by her father into servitude at the age of seven, Martha Matilda Harper created America's first retail franchise network
Clause 2:a radical new business model
Clause 3: that (that stands for new business model) enabled ownership by women in the late nineteenth and early twentieth centuries of their own businesses and gain financial independence
Note clause 2+ Clause 3 a Noun+noun Modifier construction modifying the preceding clause,
Subject verb pair in : clause 3 (That-Sub) + verb (enabled )
Now enabling of ownership allows women to own their businesses and gain financial freedom and therefore use of "to" is better to show intent.
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