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By sucking sap from the young twigs of the hemlock tree, <<tree growth is retarded by the woolly adelgid, causing needles to change color from deep green to grayish green and to drop>> prematurely.

A. tree growth is retarded by the woolly adelgid, causing needles to change color from deep green to grayish green and to drop
B. tree growth is retarded by the woolly adelgid, and this causes the color of needles to change from deep green to grayish green, and their dropping
C. the woolly adelgid retards tree growth, which causes needles to change color from deep green to grayish green, and dropping
D. the woolly adelgid retards tree growth, causing needles to change color from deep green to grayish green and to drop
E. the woolly adelgid retards tree growth, and this causes the color of needles to change from deep green to grayish green, and the their dropping
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New post 26 Aug 2004, 07:40
I think the answer is D.

Tree growth can't "suck", so A and B are wrong. "Which" in C and "this" in E can't indicate the sentence before them.
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New post 26 Aug 2004, 08:15
First I went for C but D makes perfect sense to me. causing needle to change color and to drop prematurely
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New post 26 Aug 2004, 08:46
D is best. A and B have misplaced modifiers problem. C and E improperly introduce conjuntion "and" after the commas at end of sentence
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pls, help

the word "this" in E is right or wrong. Pls, explain.
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pls, help

the word "this" in E is right or wrong. Pls, explain.


"this" in choice E is totally wrong, this does not refer to anything. If you use "this action (of the woolly adelgid), it will be ok.

Furthermore, choice E make parallelism in the modifier-part with 2 ambiguous items "this" vs "the their dropping".
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+1 D
A & B modifier prob
C Which...wrongly modifies the previous noun
E error in maintining II-ism
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By sucking sap from the young twigs of the hemlock tree, <<tree growth is retarded by the woolly adelgid, causing needles to change color from deep green to grayish green and to drop>> prematurely.

A. tree growth is retarded by the woolly adelgid, causing needles to change color from deep green to grayish green and to drop
B. tree growth is retarded by the woolly adelgid, and this causes the color of needles to change from deep green to grayish green, and their dropping
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C. the woolly adelgid retards tree growth, which causes needles to change color from deep green to grayish green, and dropping (and dropping is not parallel to any part of the sentence)
D. the woolly adelgid retards tree growth, causing needles to change color from deep green to grayish green and to drop
E. the woolly adelgid retards tree growth, and this causes the color of needles to change from deep green to grayish green, and the their dropping
(( their refers to what? ))
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A and D stands out,

i would go for D for active construction.

-- is there any thing wrong with A, other than the passive construction?
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A and in fact B are most certainly grammatically wrong becos they belong to the classic case of misplaced modification.The participial modifier By sucking sap from the young twigs of the hemlock tree should be followed by the modified noun namely the woolly adelgid rather than the tree growth. A and B mean as if the tree growth is sucking sap.
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By sucking sap from the young twigs of the hemlock tree, <<tree growth is retarded by the woolly adelgid, causing needles to change color from deep green to grayish green and to drop>> prematurely.

A. tree growth is retarded by the woolly adelgid, causing needles to change color from deep green to grayish green and to drop
B. tree growth is retarded by the woolly adelgid, and this causes the color of needles to change from deep green to grayish green, and their dropping
C. the woolly adelgid retards tree growth, which causes needles to change color from deep green to grayish green, and dropping
D. the woolly adelgid retards tree growth, causing needles to change color from deep green to grayish green and to drop
E. the woolly adelgid retards tree growth, and this causes the color of needles to change from deep green to grayish green, and the their dropping


Narrow down to C/D/E
Discard C as tree growth can't cause the change of color
Discard E growth, and.. green,and... their dropping?....
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Modifier is wrongly placed in A and B. E is wordy. D has to change .... to drop ||ism. D
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Can we eliminate E on the grounds that 'their dropping' is awkward
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Can we eliminate E on the grounds that 'their dropping' is awkward


In general a possessive noun / pronoun + gerund is perfectly valid combination.

The following link will probably be helpful to get a better concept on this topic:

http://www.english-for-students.com/Pos ... runds.html
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