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By the same techniques used for genetically enhancing plants, making them disease- or pest-resistant, researchers have been able to increase the amount of protein in potatoes, sweet potatoes, and tobacco.

A. By the same techniques used for genetically enhancing plants, making them
B. With the same techniques to genetically enhance plants, so that they are
C. Employing the same techniques used to genetically enhance plants so that they are
D. Employing the same techniques to genetically enhance plants, which makes them
E. Employing the same techniques for genetically enhancing plants that make them
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Re: Genetically enhancing plants [#permalink] New post 23 Mar 2010, 11:18
i would pick (C)

A. By the same techniques used for genetically enhancing plants, making them - awkward
B. With the same techniques to genetically enhance plants, so that they are - awkward
C. Employing the same techniques used to genetically enhance plants so that they are - correct
D. Employing the same techniques to genetically enhance plants, which makes them - which refers to plant
E. Employing the same techniques for genetically enhancing plants that make them - appears like plant make them disease or pest resistant
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Re: Genetically enhancing plants [#permalink] New post 21 Jun 2010, 03:51
Even I thought C, but I think this question is wrong. to genetically enhance is a split infinitive error in B, C and D.

So, b/w A and E, E remains.

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i would pick (C)

A. By the same techniques used for genetically enhancing plants, making them - awkward
B. With the same techniques to genetically enhance plants, so that they are - awkward
C. Employing the same techniques used to genetically enhance plants so that they are - correct
D. Employing the same techniques to genetically enhance plants, which makes them - which refers to plant
E. Employing the same techniques for genetically enhancing plants that make them - appears like plant make them disease or pest resistant

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Re: Genetically enhancing plants [#permalink] New post 21 Jun 2010, 08:56
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Even I thought C, but I think this question is wrong. to genetically enhance is a split infinitive error in B, C and D.

So, b/w A and E, E remains.

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i would pick (C)

A. By the same techniques used for genetically enhancing plants, making them - awkward
B. With the same techniques to genetically enhance plants, so that they are - awkward
C. Employing the same techniques used to genetically enhance plants so that they are - correct
D. Employing the same techniques to genetically enhance plants, which makes them - which refers to plant
E. Employing the same techniques for genetically enhancing plants that make them - appears like plant make them disease or pest resistant




please explain what is a split infinitive error ??

I will go with C . Yes which refers to plants and I do not see a problem in this. So of I ignore the middleman "which makes them.disease- or pest-resistant..." I get a complete sentence .
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Re: Genetically enhancing plants [#permalink] New post 21 Jun 2010, 09:09
Split infinitive error >>>> to + adverb + verb
For example - to genetically enhance
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Re: Genetically enhancing plants [#permalink] New post 21 Jun 2010, 18:32
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Split infinitive error >>>> to + adverb + verb
For example - to genetically enhance


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what is a split infinitive error ?

An infinitive verb form with an element, usually an adverb, interposed between to and the verb form, as in to boldly go.
Usage Note: The split infinitive has been present in English ever since the 14th century, but it was not until the 19th century that grammarians labeled and condemned the usage. The only rationale for condemning the construction is based on a false analogy with Latin. The thinking is that because the Latin infinitive is a single word, the equivalent English construction should be treated as if it were a single unit. But English is not Latin, and distinguished writers have split infinitives without giving it a thought. Noteworthy splitters include John Donne, Daniel Defoe, George Eliot, Benjamin Franklin, Abraham Lincoln, William Wordsworth, and Willa Cather. Still, those who dislike the construction can usually avoid it without difficulty. The sense of the sentence To better understand the miners' plight, he went to live in their district is just as easily expressed by To understand the miners' plight better, he went to live in their district. However, one must take care not to ruin the rhythm of the sentence or create an unintended meaning by displacing an adverb. · When choosing to retain split infinitives, one should be wary of constructions that have more than one word between to and the verb. The Usage Panel is evenly divided on the one-adverb split infinitive. Fifty percent accept it in the sentence The move allowed the company to legally pay the employees severance payments that in some cases exceeded $30,000. But only 23 percent of the panel accepts the split infinitive in the sentence We are seeking a plan to gradually, systematically, and economically relieve the burden. In some contexts, the split infinitive is unavoidable, as in the sentence We expect our output to more than double in a year. · Excessive zeal in avoiding the split infinitive may result in an awkward placement of adverbs in constructions involving the auxiliary verbs be and have. Infinitive phrases in which the adverb precedes a participle, such as to be rapidly rising, to be clearly understood, and to have been ruefully mistaken, are not split and should be acceptable to everybody. By the same token, there are no grounds for objecting to the position of the adverb in the sentence He is committed to laboriously assembling all of the facts of the case. What is "split" here is not an infinitive but a prepositional phrase.
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Re: Genetically enhancing plants [#permalink] New post 21 Jun 2010, 20:34
Between C and E.
IMO E.

In C, /Employing the same techniques used to genetically enhance plants so that they are/
can someone explain what does 'they' refer to?techniques or plants ?
i eliminated C as they refers to techniques here
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Re: Genetically enhancing plants [#permalink] New post 03 Jul 2010, 07:06
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Between C and E.
IMO E.

In C, /Employing the same techniques used to genetically enhance plants so that they are/
can someone explain what does 'they' refer to?techniques or plants ?
i eliminated C as they refers to techniques here


they clearly refers to plants, at least as per my understanding
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Re: Genetically enhancing plants [#permalink] New post 03 Jul 2010, 07:12
Between C and E. Leaning towards C.
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Re: Genetically enhancing plants [#permalink] New post 03 Jul 2010, 23:08
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The correct answer is certainly choice C.

Choice E changes the meaning. With "for" it sounds as though we are using some kind of techniques on genetically enhanced plants; but not necessarily the techniques that caused those genetic enhancements in the first place. That is, it sounds like this: "by using techniques for [this type of plant]".

Choice D also changes the meaning. We need the "used to".

There is no split infinitive error in choice C:

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Re: Genetically enhancing plants [#permalink] New post 03 Jul 2010, 23:20
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Sorry I didn;t get the subtle difference between "used to" and just "to". Whats the difference

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Sorry I didn;t get the subtle difference between "used to" and just "to". Whats the difference

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In the original sentence, it is clear that today's researchers are employing previously used techniques. Without the "used", in choice D, there isn't any relationship between the first action and the second.
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Re: Genetically enhancing plants [#permalink] New post 03 Jul 2010, 23:44
Thanks :o that really helped. I should have compared my option with original sentence.
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Re: Genetically enhancing plants [#permalink] New post 05 Sep 2010, 02:06
so split infinitives are therefore sometimes acceptable?
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Re: By the same techniques used for genetically enhancing [#permalink] New post 04 Aug 2014, 01:27
Why "so that they are" is correct in option C ?

use of are reflects present condition and efforts are being employed by scientist to achieve some future state.

I am not sure such usage is fine in C.
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