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1. Use active voice as opposed to passive (e.g. My company promoted me can be written as I was promoted)


actually, saying "My company promoted me" is active voice, and "I was promoted" is passive voice. :wink:
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I'm finally understanding this word/page limit thing ;) my OUTLINE is longer than the Haas word limit already!

I highly suggest you get "Elements of Style" and "65 Successful Harvard Business School Essays" to see how people can express their goals and other essays in 300-500 words. It's quite inspiring to read some of those essays. They sound matter-of-fact and still get everything across. Read it and it should help!

My goal right now is to hack and slash my Haas essays down to within the word limit...
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kripalkavi wrote:
1. Use active voice as opposed to passive (e.g. My company promoted me can be written as I was promoted)


Bzzzttt, wrong! :wink:
You meant, "Use passive voice over active voice to save on words". Although this idea may work in saving a few words, active voice is usually simpler and more straight-forward. And I seriously doubt that using passive voice can really save you enough words to justify this "more complex way of forming sentences". So, although I understand that sometimes passive voice makes sense, but my recommendation would be to not use it for the sake of it or to save 2-3 words.
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dabots wrote:
actually, saying "My company promoted me" is active voice, and "I was promoted" is passive voice. :wink:


Oh well, I guess my GMAT SC skills are rusty :) Thanks for the heads up!


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Bzzzttt, wrong! Wink
You meant, "Use passive voice over active voice to save on words". Although this idea may work in saving a few words, active voice is usually simpler and more straight-forward. And I seriously doubt that using passive voice can really save you enough words to justify this "more complex way of forming sentences". So, although I understand that sometimes passive voice makes sense, but my recommendation would be to not use it for the sake of it or to save 2-3 words.


Point taken mneo. Thank you.
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If you're looking for advice on how to cut your essays, try to look at some journalism guides. When writing newspaper articles, you regularly cut out 75% of what you put down. It really focuses your message, and forces you to get right to the point.

For the purposes of writing your career essays, try to focus both your language and your message. Talk about only what is important and leave out the smaller details if they don't fit. Then, use tell it in a focused concise manner.
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Thanks for the input guys...we will trudge along.....
Riverripper....I guess it is good to know that we have company..but the sooner we figure the essays out the better....I read in your blog that you told your bosses about your potential move...I am exactly in a similar situation and will be telling my director by the end of this month...
By the way...anyone planning to visit MIT through the Ambassadors program....I am going on Oct 4...
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