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Caribou are wary animals with excellent hearing, so stalking them over the treeless landscape, getting close enough to kill it with nothing but a handheld lance, as Dorset people did, required exceptional hunting skill.
(A) so stalking them over the treeless landscape, getting close enough to kill it
(B) so to stalk them over the treeless landscape and get close enough to kill one
(C) so in order to stalk them over the treeless landscape and get close enough to kill one
(D) and so in order to stalk it over the treeless landscape, getting close enough to kill it
(E) and so stalking them over the treeless landscape and getting close enough in order to kill it

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Re: Caribou are wary animals with excellent hearing, so stalking [#permalink] New post 05 Aug 2008, 06:01
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A) wrong. run-on sentence with "... stalking... getting..."
B) correct. "to stalk.... required"
C) wrong. "in order" is unneccesary
D) "and so" makes sentence awkward
E) "and so" makes sentence awkward
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Re: Caribou are wary animals with excellent hearing, so stalking [#permalink] New post 05 Aug 2008, 10:02
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Caribou are wary animals with excellent hearing, so stalking them over the treeless landscape, getting close enough to kill it with nothing but a handheld lance, as Dorset people did, required exceptional hunting skill.
(A) so stalking them over the treeless landscape, getting close enough to kill it
(B) so to stalk them over the treeless landscape and get close enough to kill one
(C) so in order to stalk them over the treeless landscape and get close enough to kill one
(D) and so in order to stalk it over the treeless landscape, getting close enough to kill it
(E) and so stalking them over the treeless landscape and getting close enough in order to kill it

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"it" is not appropriate
between B and C

B looks concise..
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Re: Caribou are wary animals with excellent hearing, so stalking [#permalink] New post 05 Aug 2008, 10:48
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Caribou are wary animals with excellent hearing, so stalking them over the treeless landscape, getting close enough to kill it with nothing but a handheld lance, as Dorset people did, required exceptional hunting skill.
(A) so stalking them over the treeless landscape, getting close enough to kill it
(B) so to stalk them over the treeless landscape and get close enough to kill one
(C) so in order to stalk them over the treeless landscape and get close enough to kill one
(D) and so in order to stalk it over the treeless landscape, getting close enough to kill it
(E) and so stalking them over the treeless landscape and getting close enough in order to kill it

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B-

"and so" gives it run-on feel
"kill one" v. "kill it", kill it seems inappropriate
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Re: Caribou are wary animals with excellent hearing, so stalking [#permalink] New post 05 Aug 2008, 10:56
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B is correct :

A is wrong as it messes between "Them" and 'it".

C here "in order to" indicates a actions for which we might need the person who is performing that action just after the commaa (as Dorset people did,).
but we have required instead.

D and E both are wrong in using "it" (singular) whereas "animals" is not singular.
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Re: Caribou are wary animals with excellent hearing, so stalking [#permalink] New post 06 Aug 2008, 05:30
It is an obvious 2/3 split between 'SO' and 'AND' in choices A,B,C and D,E. Choices D,E are eliminated straight away. Out of A, B, C; A ends with Kill It, which is not appropriate and this leaves us with only 2 choices, B and C. As pointed out by rigger, 'in order to' gives an unnecessary stretch to the sentence. B is the best option here.
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Re: Caribou are wary animals with excellent hearing, so stalking [#permalink] New post 06 Aug 2008, 05:56
thanks everyone.. even I was confused as OA - A

The question is from 1000 SC series

If anyone agrees with OA please explain why B is wrong? otherwise I assume B is better option :wink:
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Re: Caribou are wary animals with excellent hearing, so stalking [#permalink] New post 06 Aug 2008, 11:21
After looking more carefully -

the answer could be A (rather than B), but I'm unsure.

Caribou are wary animals with excellent hearing, so stalking them over the treeless landscape, getting close enough to kill it with nothing but a handheld lance, as Dorset people did, required exceptional hunting skill.

(A) so stalking them over the treeless landscape, getting close enough to kill it
(B) so to stalk them over the treeless landscape and get close enough to kill one - does not fit in with as Dorset people did

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Re: Caribou are wary animals with excellent hearing, so stalking [#permalink] New post 06 Aug 2008, 11:48
Take the sentence like this.

To X and to Y

You have to maintain the consistency.

as for choice A, it does not keep up the parallel construction,
stalking, getting , kill <<---

Makes B a better choice
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Re: Caribou are wary animals with excellent hearing, so stalking [#permalink] New post 05 Sep 2010, 01:50
Accordign to my source, OA is B, with which I completely agree.
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Re: Caribou are wary animals with excellent hearing, so stalking [#permalink] New post 09 Oct 2013, 16:16
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thanks everyone.. even I was confused as OA - A

The question is from 1000 SC series

If anyone agrees with OA please explain why B is wrong? otherwise I assume B is better option :wink:

this question appeared in GmatPrep and B (so to stalk....to kill one) is credited response.
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Re: Caribou are wary animals with excellent hearing, so stalking [#permalink] New post 30 Oct 2013, 07:57
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Caribou are wary animals with excellent hearing, so stalking them over the treeless landscape, getting close enough to kill it with nothing but a handheld lance, as Dorset people did, required exceptional hunting skill.
(A) so stalking them over the treeless landscape, getting close enough to kill it
(B) so to stalk them over the treeless landscape and get close enough to kill one
(C) so in order to stalk them over the treeless landscape and get close enough to kill one
(D) and so in order to stalk it over the treeless landscape, getting close enough to kill it
(E) and so stalking them over the treeless landscape and getting close enough in order to kill it

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A, d, e, are all wrong at first sight coz -

In the non-underlined portion the sentence is "Caribou are...." which means the noun Caribou is plural . So, A, d, e are out in first go.
Between B and C I chose B for two reasons -
1. It is concise
2. C lacks the subject in the second clause which makes the second clause a fragment (In order to...can not act as subject)
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Re: Caribou are wary animals with excellent hearing, so stalking [#permalink] New post 31 May 2014, 00:23
In B i think the parallelism is wrong because "to stalk....and kill". Can anysome show me where I am wrong? Thanks a lot
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Dear dqtuan9627,

The parallelism is between "stalk" and "get".

How can you know this? Look for markers that indicate the parallelism: for lists with more than two items, look for the commas; for lists with two items, look for the conjunctions.

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Re: Caribou are wary animals with excellent hearing, so stalking [#permalink] New post 26 Nov 2014, 04:03
Can somebody tell when the use of 'one' is incorrect? In this case it appears to be correct. there are several sentences from OG that do not use 'one' in the correct choice
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Re: Caribou are wary animals with excellent hearing, so stalking [#permalink] New post 05 Dec 2014, 01:17
There is a list of things in this sentence --> stalk and kill

So there must be
a) an and between the items in the list
b) the items in the list must be parallel and
c) the pronoun reference must be correct!

Non underlined portion says that the C ARE wary animals. So we need them and not it.

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Caribou are wary animals with excellent hearing, so stalking them over the treeless landscape, getting close enough to kill it with nothing but a handheld lance, as Dorset people did, required exceptional hunting skill.

(A) so stalking them over the treeless landscape, getting close enough to kill it Reasons A & C

(B) so to stalk them over the treeless landscape and get close enough to kill one

(C) so in order to stalk them over the treeless landscape and get close enough to kill one in order has the same function as to. redundant

(D) and so in order to stalk it over the treeless landscape, getting close enough to kill it in order has the same function as to. redundant and it is used instead of them

(E) and so stalking them over the treeless landscape and getting close enough in order to kill it Reason C


B is the best
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Re: Caribou are wary animals with excellent hearing, so stalking [#permalink] New post 05 Dec 2014, 01:19
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Can somebody tell when the use of 'one' is incorrect? In this case it appears to be correct. there are several sentences from OG that do not use 'one' in the correct choice


Go by the logic of the sentence.

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