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Charlotte Perkins Gilman, a late nineteenth-century feminist, called for urban apartment houses including child-care facilities and clustered suburban houses including communal eating and social facilities.
(A) including child-care facilities and clustered suburban houses including communal eating and social facilities
(B) that included child-care facilities, and for clustered suburban houses to include communal eating and social facilities
(C) with child-care facilities included and for clustered suburban houses to include communal eating and social facilities
(D) that included child-care facilities and for clustered suburban houses with communal eating and social facilities
(E) to include child-care facilities and for clustered suburban houses with communal eating and social facilities included
While discussing this, can we discuss the use of
"for A and for B" vs "for A and B" ?
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D for me
futuristic, the problem with "for A and for B" vs. "for A and B" is that A must be different from B because in this case URBAN APARTMENT HOUSES cannot include SUBURBAN HOUSES... -> thus, GILMAN was FOR A and FOR B
(A) including child-care facilities and clustered suburban houses including communal eating and social facilities
This says URBAN APARTMENT HOUSES included SUBURBAN HOUSES
(B) that included child-care facilities, and for clustered suburban houses to include communal eating and social facilities
this isn't PARALLEL and comma isn't needed because of THAT
(C) with child-care facilities included and for clustered suburban houses to include communal eating and social facilities
close but not parallel
(D) Charlotte Perkins Gilman, a late nineteenth-century feminist, called for urban apartment houses that included child-care facilities and for clustered suburban houses with communal eating and social facilities
PERFECT
(E) to include child-care facilities and for clustered suburban houses with communal eating and social facilities included
again not parallel
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Inaddition to your explanations, Usage that ... with also sounds me perfect.
for A that .... and for B with
that included child-care facilities and for clustered suburban houses with communal eating and social facilities
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Moreover, (D) is slightly more concise than B.
U2 Lover girl just THRASHES these SCs as if they were pre-school ABCs.
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D for me.
I started it with THAT and the reasoned it furthur.
Please tell me if "THAT" was necessart element here.
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