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Chronic low-level leaking and the routine discharge of drilling mud and mineral salts present considerable environmental risk during offshore oil drilling.

(A) Chronic low-level leaking and the routine discharge of drilling mud and mineral salts present considerable environmental risk during offshore oil drilling.
(B) The reason offshore oil drilling presents a considerably environmental risk is because of chronic low-level leaking and the routine discharge of drilling mud and mineral salts.
(C) A considerable risk to the environment is presented during offshore oil drilling, where low-level leaks are chronic and the routine discharge of mud and mineral salts.
(D) Offshore oil drilling presents a considerable risk to the environment due to the fact of chronic low-level leaks, and mud and mineral salts are routinely discharged.
(E) Chronic low-level leaking, along with the routine discharge of drilling mud and mineral salts, are what make offshore oil drilling environmentally risky.
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08 Nov 2009, 22:57
Think Its A. please post the OA good Question
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Chronic low-level leaking and the routine discharge of drilling mud and mineral salts present considerable environmental risk during offshore oil drilling.

(A) Chronic low-level leaking and the routine discharge of drilling mud and mineral salts present considerable environmental risk during offshore oil drilling.
(B) The reason offshore oil drilling presents a considerably environmental risk is because of chronic low-level leaking and the routine discharge of drilling mud and mineral salts.
(C) A considerable risk to the environment is presented during offshore oil drilling, where low-level leaks are chronic and the routine discharge of mud and mineral salts.
(D) Offshore oil drilling presents a considerable risk to the environment due to the fact of chronic low-level leaks, and mud and mineral salts are routinely discharged.
(E) Chronic low-level leaking, along with the routine discharge of drilling mud and mineral salts, are what make offshore oil drilling environmentally risky

It is certainly A

B - "Reason" has to be followed by "that" instead of "because"
C- "where" incorrectly placed as a modifier
D - wrong idiomatic usage of 'due to'
E - alongwith cannot make the subject plural - 'are'. 'Is' has to be used here.

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09 Nov 2009, 05:28
It is A...

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09 Nov 2009, 06:02
All of you have it right. it's from 1000sc (came across in the error log so thought of sharing ).
POE is the way to go for this and there is no issue with parallelism between "low level leaking" and "routine discharge"
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31 Dec 2012, 03:20
gmattokyo wrote:
All of you have it right. it's from 1000sc (came across in the error log so thought of sharing ).
POE is the way to go for this and there is no issue with parallelism between "low level leaking" and "routine discharge"

Hey, can you explain why there is no issue with parallelism with this?

I mean shouldn't it be low level leaking and routine discharging?
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31 Dec 2012, 03:51
Leaking is used as gerund here, hence acts as a noun.

Both noun phrases "Chronic low-level leaking" and "the routine discharge" are parallel and relate to "drilling mud & mineral salts"
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31 Dec 2012, 03:59
PraPon wrote:
Leaking is used as gerund here, hence acts as a noun.

Both noun phrases "Chronic low-level leaking" and "the routine discharge" are parallel and relate to "drilling mud & mineral salts"

Thanks ... that explains it ...
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