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color-printing division [#permalink]
02 Sep 2007, 17:18
The computer company has announced that it will purchase the color-printing division of a rival company for $950 million, which is part of a deal that will make it the largest manufacturer in the office color-printing market.
million, which is part of a deal that will make
million, a part of a deal that makes
million, part of a deal making
million as a part of a deal to make
million as part of a deal that will make
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Re: color-printing division [#permalink]
02 Sep 2007, 17:33
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pi10t wrote: The computer company has announced that it will purchase the color-printing division of a rival company for $950 million, which is part of a deal that will make it the largest manufacturer in the office color-printing market.
million, which is part of a deal that will make million, a part of a deal that makes million, part of a deal making million as a part of a deal to make million as part of a deal that will make
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Re: color-printing division [#permalink]
02 Sep 2007, 19:30
pi10t wrote: The computer company has announced that it will purchase the color-printing division of a rival company for $950 million, which is part of a deal that will make it the largest manufacturer in the office color-printing market.
million, which is part of a deal that will make million, a part of a deal that makes million, part of a deal making million as a part of a deal to make million as part of a deal that will make
I go with answer choice E
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I choose E.
part of a deal making....
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cruiser wrote: I choose E.
part of a deal making....
What is wrong with D?
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I will also pick E.
D is wrong because it uses "as a part of a deal". This "a" is redundant because part is already conveying the meaning of being only a section of the deal.
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N750 wrote: I will also pick E. D is wrong because it uses "as a part of a deal". This "a" is redundant because part is already conveying the meaning of being only a section of the deal.
I appreciate your explanation.
Spoiler!
OA is ///E///
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