hi saeedt,
thanks a million for your assessment. Finally I get some grading for my work. Just as an aside, I've been looking for some free e-grader software which might help grade the many essays I have written. Any on the net?
. For now, I've being using MSword for spell check and word count.
Well, I wrote the whole thing within the alloted time. I type fast and am only lucky TOEFL writing is done on the keyboard! A 616-word essay is too much? Do I have to cut down on the words? Typically, I write 500+. Good? I agree the 5th paragraph is like a young, unclothed boy sweltering out in the sun. I was rather in a rush to complete the writing in time. Also, I agree with your suggestion of teacher and student developing interpersonal connections.
Meanwhile, I have been expermenting with the much-discussed chineseburned's writing template I found here. Is it wise to begin some incorporation at this stage, since I am having the exam in less than a week? Also, I really do hope it's a 28+ as you remarked. My goal is actually a 30 in writing.
And I hope you don't mind if I post another essay down here for assessment. Thanks a mil!
Are college years the best in one's life?
Going to college is now usual among young people. People go to college so that they can start a career, become employable or simply get the chance to engage in social or sports activities. Because most college students are often between 19-25, people tend to believe that college is mostly for young people. Since these years are formative years, the inclination is to believe that they are the times one can get the most fun. While I do not dispute this assertion, I believe there are a number of reasons why it can't be true. For one, college is not just for young people; older people past their prime, and sometimes senior citizens, also seek adult education. However, I'll outline my other reasons below.
First, college years are only about 3-4 years. How can just 3-4 years be the best in one's life? College years are undoubtedly preparatory years. We often learn the most significant things about human behaviour during this time and also learn to discover new things about ourselves. Nevertheless, the number of years is just too few to completely determine one's life. Oftentimes, people will leave college only to discover completely new things about themselves. For instance, I never realised that I loved literature very much until I left the university. University activities had apparently taken so much of my time that I never had room for anything else. Once I left school and had more free time, reading literature books became a hobby and I have even given it serious thoughts to write a novel myself.
Second, college often houses very young people. Young people are naive and selfish; they are also very quick to conclude that they are having their best time in college. What isn't immediately obvious to them is that they still have a lot of years ahead of them. True, some find their wives in college and some end up with lifelong friends from college. Nevertheless, there are many more years ahead after college and these years are as open as they can be. Chances are that their best time is yet to come. Perhaps during their weddings, perhaps after securing that well-paid job, perhaps it will be after starting their own business. One thing is certain though, limiting one's best time to college years is clearly an act of inexperience.
Finally, not everyone gets to have a nice time in college. This might be as a result of several factors such as intimidation by a bully, social phobias or anxiety which are often common among young people. Therefore, it is quite rare that everyone enjoys their college experience. It is unfair to these people to conclude that college years are the best in one's life. Such people should also get the chance to have their own best time once they finish college. Years of college are mostly formative years and the experience gained is taken into the outside world.
In conclusion, the few number of years college require, the naivety of college students and the rare chance of having a nice time in college do not make college years the best in a person's life. In fact, one shouldn't hastily conclude that the most fun is obtained in college. Life itself is fun. As we live it, it will always leave room for discovering ourselves and finding what's most fun to us.