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248. Doctors generally agree that such factors as cigarette smoking, eating rich foods high in fats, and alcohol consumption not only do damage by themselves but also aggravate genetic predispositions toward certain diseases.
(A) not only do damage by themselves but also aggravate
(B) do damage by themselves but also are aggravating to
(C) are damaging by themselves but also are aggravating
(D) not only do damage by themselves, they are also aggravating to
(E) are doing damage by themselves, and they are also aggravating
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New post 13 Jul 2007, 13:38
Again, this is idiom. The correct usage is not only...but also.
Only answer A has it.
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+1 A

However, it seem this is not a good question, IMO.
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A. Use of Not only---- But also...
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i am a bit confused ..generally not only ..but also is used in a positive context only .
Example :He not only scored high marks but also gained an admit from a top university .
As mettalicafan said this is a not a good question .
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be carefull my friends.

not only...but also is used to show the in-the-same- direction content between 2 clauses.

however, "but also" can be used ALONE to show contrast and means "but"

gmatprep presents a question in which "but also " is used ALONE to test whether we know the contrast.

in this question, the meaning is same-direction content between 2 clauses, so, the couple "not only...but also" is used

this is called meaning based analysis which assumes that the wrong answer choice is grammatical and needs to be proved wrong in meaning.

this means "but also" in b and c are grammatical but wrong in meaning.
if you think that "but also" in b and c are wrong because "not only" dose not go with them, you are wrong because "but also" can be used without "not only"

that is my thinking.
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248. Doctors generally agree that such factors as cigarette smoking, eating rich foods high in fats, and alcohol consumption not only do damage by themselves but also aggravate genetic predispositions toward certain diseases.
(A) not only do damage by themselves but also aggravate
(B) do damage by themselves but also are aggravating to
(C) are damaging by themselves but also are aggravating
(D) not only do damage by themselves, they are also aggravating to
(E) are doing damage by themselves, and they are also aggravating


use of idiom: Not only...but also. only A uses the idiom correctly.
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Correct idiom is not only...but also.
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Can someone please explain if parallelism is at work here?

I used the parallelism for the contrasting points: Not only X but also Y.

(A) not only do damage by themselves but also aggravate
(B) do damage by themselves but also are aggravating to
(C) are damaging by themselves but also are aggravating
(D) not only do damage by themselves, they are also aggravating to
(E) are doing damage by themselves, and they are also aggravating

A and C would pass the parallelism test. Is this a correct split?
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A question on choice E: Do we need a 'that' before 'they' in choice E?
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A question on choice E: Do we need a 'that' before 'they' in choice E?



No, we don't. It will change the meaning.
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Hi guys I have a doubt, MGMAT states that complex gerund is only parallel to an Action Noun. Here Smoking(Complex gerund),Eating(simple gerund) and consumption (action noun). So how can Eating be parallel in the list. Plz clarify :?: :pc
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Hi guys I have a doubt, MGMAT states that complex gerund is only parallel to an Action Noun. Here Smoking(Complex gerund),Eating(simple gerund) and consumption (action noun). So how can Eating be parallel in the list. Plz clarify :?: :pc


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please explain the parallelism here..."...cigarette smoking, eating rich foods high in fats, and alcohol consumption....".
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please explain the parallelism here..."...cigarette smoking, eating rich foods high in fats, and alcohol consumption....".


Generally, whenever a noun form exists for an action , that noun form is preferred to the -ing form of that action.

Here, alcohol consumption is preferred over consuming of alcohol

Coming to the parallelism aspect , the parallelism rules say the following are parallel
1) action nouns || to action nouns ( consumption here)
2) nouns || to complex gerunds (verb-ing OF <something>) --> notice the presence of "of <something>"
2) verb-ing (simple gerund) || to verb-ing (simple gerund)

Going by the rule - I see what you're saying. it's difficult to explain the parallelism by these rules.
But, going by the construction of this sentence, it is clear to see that smoking , eating and consumption are all unambiguously positioned as nouns . (considering verb-ing can be modifiers as well) ,

so I am guessing GMAC took the liberty to position all the nouns parallel (smoking, eating, and consumption) to avoid the awkwardness of a construction like below.

smoking of cigarettes, eating of rich foods high in fats, and alcohol consumption

this might be the only other possible construction to fit the rule, because smoking and eating do not have a proper noun form.

my takeaway would be that we should keep an eye on the role of verb-ing and if it's unambiguously a noun, it can be presented parallel to action nouns. just noticed that this question is repeated in OG16 (Q87) , verbatim, without eliminating the question. so GMAC believes this a valid construction. the rule is probably hard for modifier forms and soft on noun forms .

A new learning today, after having recently learnt about how past participle forms can be parallel to present participle forms - from the famous fungus question :).
thanks for asking this Q. do drop in another post if you notice similar construction in other Qs.
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The general observation is that GMAC never comes out and says that this is the rule or that is the rule. Only others interpret them as per their own perceptions. The problem is thicker when, such concepts are tested in the underlined portion. Then we have to look the proclaimed answer choices to expound the acceptance of the diction or the style. However, except for academic purposes, worrying about something that is not underlined or even cultivating that habit will be a strain on the resources, especially in the hall. So, let us take that as far //ism is concerned, that the combination of gerund and an action noun is perfectly ok in GMAT, if I may add including in underlined portion. I hardly remember having seen any GMAT question wherein such a distinction has been used to reject an answer
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