manishtank1988 wrote:
mikemcgarry - Does this make the option B correct?
B. The phonograph, the practical light bulb, and the telephone transmitter---each of
them Thomas Edison's well-known inventions---were major innovations, ----------WRONG
B. The phonograph, the practical light bulb, and the telephone transmitter---each of
IT Thomas Edison's well-known inventions---were major innovations, ----------RIGHT
I am not able to see as why option B is wrong - in my understanding modifier between 2 commas, and 2 hyphens can just be removed while checking for SVA.
I am not able to see as why you are saying
the big problem is in the modifier. I did read about the appositive which should modify the previous noun and that is my "them" should make sense as we have something as ["A, B, and C" --- each of THEM...].
What is wrong here or what am i missing?
Please clarify.
Thanks
Dear
manishtank1988,
I'm happy to respond.
My friend, I am sorry to say this, but you have a lot to learn about the "feel" of the English language. It's clear that you have studied many rules. Non-native students often labor under the misconception that they could arrive at SC mastery if they learned some mythical "complete list" of grammar rules. In fact, the rule-based approach to GMAT SC is quite limited, and at a certain level of difficulty, the official SC questions are more apt to punish such an approach rather than reward it. I recommend this blog article:
How to Improve Your GMAT Verbal ScoreA habit of reading, practiced diligently and assiduously, will build intuition for well-spoken English, intuition that no list of rules could ever give you.
Here's what I'll say:
(1) "
each of them Thomas Edison's well-known inventions" = a subtle mistake, but clearly wrong; quite typical of a GMAT SC wrong answer
(2) "
each of IT Thomas Edison's well-known inventions" = fingernails-on-blackboard wrong; no native speaker would ever dream of saying this and any native speaker instantly would recognize this as laughable; far too wrong to be a wrong answer on the GMAT SC
The word "
each" is always singular. In the construction "
each of X," the X must be plural, and the entire construction is always singular.
In (1) above, "
each of them" is singular, but it's in an appositive phrase equated with a plural, "
Thomas Edison's well-known inventions." Again, this is a mismatch that is jarring to the ears of native speakers. It would have been 100% grammatically correct to say
(3)
each of them one of Thomas Edison's well-known inventions(4)
each of them a well-known invention by Thomas EdisonBoth of those are 100% grammatically correct, although rhetorically they are far from ideal.
As for (B) overall, I will try an analogy. Suppose I am in a car accident: suppose I break my leg and bang my head. The first priority is to figure out whether I have a serious head injury. The brain specialist who examines me will ignore my broken leg for the sake of his examination. If this brain specialist comes to find that I have sustained no major head injury, that's very good, but it doesn't mean I am in perfect health. I still have a broken leg! In order for a body to be healthy, every part must be healthy.
In order for a SC answer choice to be correct, every part of it must be 100% correct. It's perfectly true that, when we are trying to figure out the SVA, we can completely ignore this modifier, just as the brain specialist is allowed to ignore my broken leg as he examines my brain. As it happens, (B) has flawless SVA, no problem at all. When we were ignoring the modifier, we found no problem, but of course, for the entire sentence to be correct, the modifier itself also has to be correct. I said that the problem was in the modifier itself because (1) above is wrong. The modifier itself contains an error, and one that really "feels" wrong. This error doesn't impact any other part of the sentence, but it is still an error. As with the broken leg, we get to ignore it for a certain phase of the analysis, but we don't get to ignore it
forever. If any part of the answer choice is wrong in any way at all, then the entire answer choice is wrong. There's a mistake inside the modifier, so the entirety of choice (B) is wrong.
My friend, does all this make sense?
Mike