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Schools: Chicago (Booth) - Class of 2009
GMAT 1: 730 Q45 V45
WE: Business Development (Consumer Products)
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Essay Review [#permalink] New post 21 Nov 2006, 03:27
I've been buried. I have over 30 essays sent to me in the last three or four days. I'm trying to get through it, but it might take a while. Someone paypal me $4 so I can go buy coffee. Hah! Hang tight crew, I see em. Also I recieved the following from someone:

Quote:
Though I am not a gay but I want to kiss you. Kiss
Thanks a lot.


LOL
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 [#permalink] New post 21 Nov 2006, 03:56
Keep up the good work Rhyme.
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 [#permalink] New post 21 Nov 2006, 04:02
I start thinking about sending you mine... :)
GMAT Club Legend
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Affiliations: HHonors Diamond, BGS Honor Society
Joined: 05 Apr 2006
Posts: 5925
Schools: Chicago (Booth) - Class of 2009
GMAT 1: 730 Q45 V45
WE: Business Development (Consumer Products)
Followers: 256

Kudos [?]: 1581 [0], given: 7

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 [#permalink] New post 21 Nov 2006, 04:09
helg wrote:
I start thinking about sending you mine... :)


I've edited your essay:

I'm starting to think about sending you mine.

Comments:

A good start to your essay, but you've failed to really say much. I'd suggest adding a second or third sentence.
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 [#permalink] New post 21 Nov 2006, 04:23
rhyme wrote:
helg wrote:
I start thinking about sending you mine... :)


I've edited your essay:

I'm starting to think about sending you mine.

Comments:

A good start to your essay, but you've failed to really say much. I'd suggest adding a second or third sentence.


OK, you passed the test. Watch out for the PM! :lol: :lol: :lol:
GMAT Club Legend
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Affiliations: HHonors Diamond, BGS Honor Society
Joined: 05 Apr 2006
Posts: 5925
Schools: Chicago (Booth) - Class of 2009
GMAT 1: 730 Q45 V45
WE: Business Development (Consumer Products)
Followers: 256

Kudos [?]: 1581 [0], given: 7

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 [#permalink] New post 21 Nov 2006, 04:23
helg wrote:
rhyme wrote:
helg wrote:
I start thinking about sending you mine... :)


I've edited your essay:

I'm starting to think about sending you mine.

Comments:

A good start to your essay, but you've failed to really say much. I'd suggest adding a second or third sentence.


OK, you passed the test. Watch out for the PM! :lol: :lol: :lol:


sh**!

heh.

It's gonna be a long day of reading essays!
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 [#permalink] New post 21 Nov 2006, 04:27
rhyme wrote:
helg wrote:
rhyme wrote:
helg wrote:
I start thinking about sending you mine... :)


I've edited your essay:

I'm starting to think about sending you mine.

Comments:

A good start to your essay, but you've failed to really say much. I'd suggest adding a second or third sentence.


OK, you passed the test. Watch out for the PM! :lol: :lol: :lol:


sh**!

heh.

It's gonna be a long day of reading essays!


No worries. I will bide my time. I decided to postpone my Tuck app till January, when I will already know the Chicago, Wharton and (hopefully) Kellogg results.
  [#permalink] 21 Nov 2006, 04:27
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