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Even though Clovis points, spear points with longitudinal grooves chipped onto their faces, have been round all over north America ,they are named for the new Mexico site where whey were first discovered in 1932

1) Even though Clovis points , spear points with longitudinal grooves chipped onto their faces, have been found all over north America, they are named for the new Mexico site where they were first discovered in 1932.
2) Although named for the new Mexico site where fist discovered in 1932. Clovis points are spear points of longitudinal grooves chipped onto their faces and have been found all over north America .
3) Named for the new Mexico site where they have been first discovered in 1932. Clovis points, spear points of longitudinal grooves chipped onto the faces, have been found all over north America .
4) Spear points with longitudinal grooves that are chipped onto the faces ,Clovis points , even though named for the new Mexico site where first discovered in 1932, but were found all over north America .
5) While Clovis points are spear points whose faces have longitudinal grooves chipped into them ,they have been found all over north America ,and named for the new Mexico site where they have been first discovered in 1932
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Re: Even though Clovis points, spear points with longitudinal [#permalink] New post 06 Oct 2012, 07:44
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Even though Clovis points, spear points with longitudinal grooves chipped onto their faces, have been found all over North America, they are named for the New Mexico site where they were first discovered in 1932.

1. Even though Clovis points, spear points with longitudinal grooves chipped onto their faces, have been found all over North America,
- Colored one is the appositive describing the points
2. they are named for the New Mexico site
3. where they were first discovered in 1932.

Nothing wrong in A


(A) Even though Clovis points, spear points with longitudinal grooves chipped onto their faces,have been found all over North America, they are named for the New Mexico site where they were first discovered in 1932.

(B) Although named for the New Mexico site where first discovered in 1932, Clovis points are spear points of longitudinal grooves chipped onto their faces and have been found all over North America.-- Meaning changed contrast should be between where they have been found and for what they have been named.

(C) Named for the New Mexico site where they have been first discovered in 1932, Clovis points, spear points of longitudinal grooves chipped onto the faces, have been found all over North America.-- with time frame simple past should be used, no contradictory clauses

(D) Spear points with longitudinal grooves that are chipped onto the faces, Clovis points, even though named for the New Mexico site where first discovered in 1932, but were found all over North America.- no verbs for subject clovis ; use of even though , but in same sentence makes it wrong

(E) While Clovis points are spear points whose faces have longitudinal grooves chipped into them, they have been found all over North America, and named for the New Mexico site where they have been first discovered in 1932.- they named for-> wrong helping verb are , were required. also the meaning is changed

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Even though Clovis points, spear points with longitudinal [#permalink] New post 06 Oct 2012, 06:58
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Even though Clovis points, spear points with longitudinal grooves chipped onto their faces, have been found all over North America, they are named for the New Mexico site where they were fi rst discovered in 1932.

(A) Even though Clovis points, spear points with longitudinal grooves chipped onto their faces,have been found all over North America, they are named for the New Mexico site where they were fi rst discovered in 1932.

(B) Although named for the New Mexico site where first discovered in 1932, Clovis points are spear points of longitudinal grooves chipped onto their faces and have been found all over North America.

(C) Named for the New Mexico site where they have been fi rst discovered in 1932, Clovis points, spear points of longitudinal grooves chipped onto the faces, have been found all over North America.

(D) Spear points with longitudinal grooves that are chipped onto the faces, Clovis points, even though named for the New Mexico site where fi rst discovered in 1932, but were found all over North America.

(E) While Clovis points are spear points whose faces have longitudinal grooves chipped into them, they have been found all over North America, and named for the New Mexico site where they have been first discovered in 1932.

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Re: Even though Clovis points, spear points with longitudinal [#permalink] New post 23 Nov 2012, 06:40
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Hi Shraddha,
Can you explain what you mean by "1. There is only one verb for "Spear points…”. But still the choice is using “but”. This means there should be another verb here. Absence of this verb leads to fragment error." for option D?


Hi there,

Choice D reads:

Spear points with longitudinal grooves that are chipped onto the faces, Clovis points, even though named for the New Mexico site where first discovered in 1932, but were found all over North America.

Carefully note the structure of this sentence. The subject here is Spear points. The verb for this subject is “were found”. But this verb is preceded by “but”. This means we have a contrast here. For that, we need one more verb for the subject then only we can join another verb with the same subject by using “but”. For example:

The coffee smells sweet but tastes bitter.

Here, we have two verbs for subject “The coffee” – “smells” and “tastes”. Because we have two verbs for the same subject and we are presenting contrast here, we join the two verbs with “but”.

However, there is a verb missing for Spear points.

Spear points with longitudinal grooves that are chipped onto the faces, Clovis points, even though named for the New Mexico site where first discovered in 1932,but were found all over North America.

This is the structure of the independent clause. We have a verb missing here. This leads to fragment.












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Re: SC - Clovis [#permalink] New post 19 Oct 2006, 10:19
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Even though Clovis points, spear points with longitudinal grooves chipped onto their faces, have been round all over north America ,they are named for the new Mexico site where whey were first discovered in 1932

1) Even though Clovis points , spear points with longitudinal grooves chipped onto their faces, have been found all over north America, they are named for the new Mexico site where they were first discovered in 1932.-----Should be the Answer
2) Although named for the new Mexico site where fist discovered in 1932. Clovis points are spear points of longitudinal grooves chipped onto their faces and have been found all over north America .
3) Named for the new Mexico site where they have been first discovered in 1932. Clovis points, spear points of longitudinal grooves chipped onto the faces, have been found all over north America .
4) Spear points with longitudinal grooves that are chipped onto the faces ,Clovis points , even though named for the new Mexico site where first discovered in 1932, but were found all over north America .
5) While Clovis points are spear points whose faces have longitudinal grooves chipped into them ,they have been found all over north America ,and named for the new Mexico site where they have been first discovered in 1932



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in C , what is wrong with "have been first discovered" ... ?

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 [#permalink] New post 19 Oct 2006, 19:57
OA is A =)
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Re: SC - Clovis [#permalink] New post 19 Oct 2006, 20:20
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Even though Clovis points, spear points with longitudinal grooves chipped onto their faces, have been round all over north America ,they are named for the new Mexico site where whey were first discovered in 1932


3) Named for the new Mexico site where they have been first discovered in 1932. Clovis points, spear points of longitudinal grooves chipped onto the faces, have been found all over north America .



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in C , what is wrong with "have been first discovered" ... ?

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I think the problem with C is with the first sentence itself.
Named for the new Mexico site where they have been first discovered in 1932.
It isn't a complete sentence, this is the so called fragment?
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Clovis points [#permalink] New post 28 Jun 2007, 06:36
Even though Clovis points , spear points with longitudinal grooves chipped onto their faces, have been found all over north America, they are named for the new Mexico site where they were first discovered in 1932.

● Even though Clovis points , spear points with longitudinal grooves chipped onto their faces, have been found all over north America, they are named for the new Mexico site where they were first discovered in 1932.

● Although named for the new Mexico site where fist discovered in 1932. Clovis points are spear points of longitudinal grooves chipped onto their faces and have been found all over north America .

● Named for the new Mexico site where they have been first discovered in 1932, Clovis points, spear points of longitudinal grooves chipped onto the faces, have been found all over north America .

● Spear points with longitudinal grooves that are chipped onto the faces ,Clovis points ,even though named for the new Mexico site where first discovered in 1932, but were found all over north America .

● While Clovis points are spear points whose faces have longitudinal grooves chipped into them ,they have been found all over north America ,and named for the new Mexico site where they have been first discovered in 1932
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 [#permalink] New post 28 Jun 2007, 06:46
A, or the first one, is correct.
The rest have tense problems and/or are awkward.
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Even though Clovis points, spear points with longitudinal [#permalink] New post 23 May 2010, 07:23
Even though Clovis points, spear points with
longitudinal grooves chipped onto their faces, have
been found all over North America, they are named for
the New Mexico site where they were fi rst discovered
in 1932.


(A) Even though Clovis points, spear points with
longitudinal grooves chipped onto their faces,
have been found all over North America, they
are named for the New Mexico site where they
were fi rst discovered in 1932.

(B) Although named for the New Mexico site where
fi rst discovered in 1932, Clovis points are spear
points of longitudinal grooves chipped onto their
faces and have been found all over North
America.

(C) Named for the New Mexico site where they have
been fi rst discovered in 1932, Clovis points,
spear points of longitudinal grooves chipped
onto the faces, have been found all over North
America.

(D) Spear points with longitudinal grooves that are
chipped onto the faces, Clovis points, even
though named for the New Mexico site where
fi rst discovered in 1932, but were found all over
North America.

(E) While Clovis points are spear points whose faces
have longitudinal grooves chipped into them,
they have been found all over North America,
and named for the New Mexico site where they
have been fi rst discovered in 1932.

Guyz i couldnt even make a guess about that question damnnn. Help me to understand it plz??
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Re: Sentence Correction.confusing (700+) [#permalink] New post 24 May 2010, 07:38
A)the intended contrast is pretty clear

b)use of AND in later part of s/c fades the contrast

c)the s/c has omited the contrast and has put the s/c in simple terms ;
and wrng tense------->have been found

d)were is plural

e) while is incorrect choice for creating contrast

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Re: Sentence Correction.confusing (700+) [#permalink] New post 25 May 2010, 03:49
The answer is A


C) cant be cuz of the tense-have been discovered in 1932-

d) Even tough and but is not right use so i eliminated it

e) have been discovered in 1932 so it is gone.

But I couldt find anything wrong in B. So there is anyone can explain to me that where is the problem on B?
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Re: SC - Clovis [#permalink] New post 28 Nov 2010, 03:36
Hello all,

Any one can tell why they used present tense here "...they are named for ...", i thought this must be "were named" since the naming action is described very clearly at the time "when were first discovered in 1932". I'm puzzled with such detail and cannot go with A.

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Re: SC - Clovis [#permalink] New post 07 Dec 2010, 08:34
Is there a clear referent for they in A?
1) Even though Clovis points , spear points with longitudinal grooves chipped onto their faces, have been found all over north America, they are named for the new Mexico site where they were first discovered in 1932.

Couldn't they be referring to faces instead of Clovis points? Please can someone explain?
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Even though Clovis points, spear points with longitudinal [#permalink] New post 08 Apr 2011, 16:39
Even though Clovis points, spear points with longitudinal grooves chipped onto their faces, have
been found all over North America, they are named for the New Mexico site where they were first discovered
in 1932.

(A) Even though Clovis points, spear points with longitudinal grooves chipped onto their faces, have been found all over North America, they are named for the New Mexico site where they were first discovered in 1932.

(8) Although named for the New Mexico site where first discovered in 1932, Clovis points are spear points of longitudinal grooves chipped onto their faces and have been found allover North America.

(C) Named for the New Mexico site where they have been first discovered in 1932, Clovis points, spear points of longitudinal grooves chipped onto the faces, have been found all over North America.

(D) Spear points with longitudinal grooves that are chipped onto the faces, Clovis points, even though named for the New Mexico site where first discovered in 1932, but were found all over North America.

(E) While Clovis points are spear points whose faces have longitudinal grooves chipped into them, they have been found all over North America, and named for the New Mexico site where they have been first discovered in 1932

OA is A. Why is there no pronoun ambiguity in "spear points with longitudinal grooves chipped onto their faces, " ????

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Re: SC pronoun ambiguity [#permalink] New post 09 Apr 2011, 10:47
Hey,
I hope i can help u...
1st of all, ambiguity is only a "style" mistake and therefor you wont always find a solution that fixes it.

2nd - every other answer is bad - and A is the only one without bigger mistakes so no real dilemma here,...
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Re: SC pronoun ambiguity [#permalink] New post 10 Apr 2011, 06:13
nope. i dont agree. OA never has mistakes. it has been clarified thousands of times by Ron..
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Re: Even though Clovis points, spear points with longitudinal [#permalink] New post 26 Oct 2011, 18:56
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Re: Even though Clovis points, spear points with longitudinal [#permalink] New post 26 Oct 2011, 20:44
I picked C...but i see why A is correct
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Re: Even though Clovis points, spear points with longitudinal [#permalink] New post 07 Oct 2012, 02:12
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I was hoping in a major discussion .

OA is added
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