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Fifty-two percent of United States high school graduates go [#permalink]
 09 Jan 2006, 07:48
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Fifty-two percent of United States high school graduates go on to college, compared with Canada’s thirty-five percent and Great Britain, Japan, and West Germany’s fifteen percent
(A) Fifty-two percent of United States high school graduates go on to college, compared with Canada’s thirty-five percent and Great Britain, Japan, and West Germany’s fifteen percent.
(B) Fifty-two percent of United States high school graduates go on to college; in Canada it is thirty-five percent and in Great Britain, Japan, and West Germany it is fifteen percent.
(C) In the United States, Fifty-two percent of high school graduates go on to college, compared with thirty-five percent in Canada and fifteen percent in Great Britain, Japan, and West Germany.
(D) The percentage of high school graduates in the United States who go on to college is fifty-two, compared with Canada’s thirty-five percent, Great Britain’s fifteen, Japan’s fifteen, and West Germany’s fifteen.
(E) The percentage of United States high school graduates going on to college is fifty-two that in Canada is thirty-five, and that in Great Britain, Japan, and West Germany is fifteen.
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I like C. It's not as wordy and doesn't use ambiguous pronouns.
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C for me as well. D and E are out, they are too messy.
I dont like the use of the semicolon in B, although I am not 100% clear on when it really is appropriate to use one.
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C for correct comparison, non-usage of extra words, and non-usage of ambiguous pronouns.
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Probably I'm wrong, but D looks more clear and precise for me.
What is OA?
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Natalya Khimich wrote: Probably I'm wrong, but D looks more clear and precise for me.
What is OA?
In D the sentence is framed like "The perecentage of X is 52, Y's 52%,Z's 15%"
so somehow the comparison looks awkward as we are trying to compare a number with a percetage.
C seems to be the right one..
OA plz?
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OA is 'C'!
Good job all 
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I'll eliminate all other choices and go with C as such it provides parallel comparison.
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52% of Americans may matriculate into University, but only 25% eventually graduate.
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