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Floating in the waters of the equatorial Pacific, an array [#permalink] New post 14 Jun 2007, 15:34
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Floating in the waters of the equatorial Pacific, an array of buoys collects and transmits data on long-term interactions between the ocean and the atmosphere, interactions that affect global climate.

A. atmosphere, interactions that affect
B. atmosphere, with interactions affecting
C. atmosphere that affects
D. atmosphere that is affecting
E. atmosphere as affects
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Re: SC-equatorial Pacific [#permalink] New post 14 Jun 2007, 19:07
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Floating in the waters of the equatorial Pacific, an array of buoys collects and transmits data on long-term interactions between the ocean and the atmosphere, interactions that affect global climate.

A. atmosphere, interactions that affect
This is a run-on sentence. So Out
B. atmosphere, with interactions affecting
with is a preposition and cannot introduce a dependent clause . Out
C. atmosphere that affects
that is a subordinating conjunction. Also "An array of bouys" is acting as a singular noun. So affects is in || with collects and transmits
so I will go for it
D. atmosphere that is affecting
Out for -ing form
E. atmosphere as affects

Though "as" is a conjunction it doesnt mean much here

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 [#permalink] New post 14 Jun 2007, 19:17
C,D -> 'that' inappropriately modifies atmosphere
B,E makes no sense

A is best.
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 [#permalink] New post 14 Jun 2007, 19:26
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C,D -> 'that' inappropriately modifies atmosphere
B,E makes no sense

A is best.


Hmm...though too much about it :oops:

Isnt that in A an absolute phrase?
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Re: SC-equatorial Pacific [#permalink] New post 14 Jun 2007, 19:30
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Floating in the waters of the equatorial Pacific, an array of buoys collects and transmits data on long-term interactions between the ocean and the atmosphere, interactions that affect global climate.

A. atmosphere, interactions that affect
B. atmosphere, with interactions affecting
C. atmosphere that affects
D. atmosphere that is affecting
E. atmosphere as affects


A for me. "Interactions that" correctly modifies the long-term interactions between ocean and atmosphere.
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Re: SC-equatorial Pacific [#permalink] New post 14 Jun 2007, 21:35
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Floating in the waters of the equatorial Pacific, an array of buoys collects and transmits data on long-term interactions between the ocean and the atmosphere, interactions that affect global climate.

A. atmosphere, interactions that affect
B. atmosphere, with interactions affecting
C. atmosphere that affects
D. atmosphere that is affecting
E. atmosphere as affects



Are you guys sure there is no mistake in this question. What's the source of this question?

A can't be right in my opinion. It would be right if modified as :

Floating in the waters of the equatorial Pacific, an array of buoys collects and transmits data on long-term interactions, between the ocean and the atmosphere, that affect the global climate.
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 [#permalink] New post 14 Jun 2007, 21:46
Guess this is a case of 'resumptive' modifier. (interactions)

but the comma in A makes me uncomfortable.
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 [#permalink] New post 15 Jun 2007, 10:18
Between A and D, I see A as a run on sentence. Though D also has problems, it seems the least of the evils.
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 [#permalink] New post 15 Jun 2007, 18:52
A it is...this is the use of 'appositive' modifying interactions.
In D,'that' modifies atmosphere which is wrong.
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Re: SC-equatorial Pacific [#permalink] New post 24 Jul 2007, 07:27
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A can't be right in my opinion. It would be right if modified as :

Floating in the waters of the equatorial Pacific, an array of buoys collects and transmits data on long-term interactions, between the ocean and the atmosphere, that affect the global climate.


cannot quite figure out what is wrong with this sentence, i do not think between the ocean and the atmosphere should be subordinated...
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Re: Floating in the waters of the equatorial Pacific, an array [#permalink] New post 29 Aug 2013, 05:38
why cant the 'that' in C and D modify 'data'. It is ambiguous, I feel that 'that' can modify both 'atmosphere' and 'data'.
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Re: Floating in the waters of the equatorial Pacific, an array [#permalink] New post 29 Aug 2013, 05:47
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why cant the 'that' in C and D modify 'data'. It is ambiguous, I feel that 'that' can modify both 'atmosphere' and 'data'.


if THAT is used as a pronoun ..then it will almost always refer to touching noun (there are few exceptions too).
so in this case THAT is refering to ATMOSPHERE..hence it is not ambiguous.
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Re: Floating in the waters of the equatorial Pacific, an array [#permalink] New post 31 Aug 2013, 07:10
Thanks for your clarification.

Can you also brief about the exceptions.
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Re: Floating in the waters of the equatorial Pacific, an array [#permalink] New post 01 Sep 2013, 20:22
A. atmosphere, interactions that affect
Absolute phrase tells more about interactions, so perfectly modifying the previous clause.
B. atmosphere, with interactions affecting
arrays collect and transmit..... with interactions affecting global climate=> awkward.
C. atmosphere that affects
It is not atmosphere but interactions 'that affects'
D. atmosphere that is affecting
Same as (C).
E. atmosphere as affects
Awkward.
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Re: Floating in the waters of the equatorial Pacific, an array [#permalink] New post 24 Oct 2013, 23:29
The OA is A guys. The rest of the options are ambiguous.
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Re: Floating in the waters of the equatorial Pacific, an array [#permalink] New post 19 Jan 2014, 01:56
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The OA is A guys. The rest of the options are ambiguous.


Ruling out an option because of its ambiguity should, in my humble opinion, be the last resort of a test-taker.

Floating in the waters of the equatorial Pacific, an array of buoys collects and transmits data on tong- term interactions between the ocean and the atmosphere, [s]interactions that affect[/] global climate.

(A) atmosphere, interactions that affect
Although not the best answer, it still prevails over the others.
(B) atmosphere, with interactions affecting
with interactions modifies the wrong noun
(C) atmosphere that affects
that modifies atmosphere, conveying the wrong meaning
(D) atmosphere that is affecting
Same as C
(E) atmosphere as affects
The use of as is wrong.
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Re: Floating in the waters of the equatorial Pacific, an array [#permalink] New post 04 Feb 2014, 19:45
TGC wrote:
A. atmosphere, interactions that affect
Absolute phrase tells more about interactions, so perfectly modifying the previous clause.
B. atmosphere, with interactions affecting
arrays collect and transmit..... with interactions affecting global climate=> awkward.
C. atmosphere that affects
It is not atmosphere but interactions 'that affects'
D. atmosphere that is affecting
Same as (C).
E. atmosphere as affects
Awkward.


Nice, Thxs your help, I was confused B before.
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