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Fossils of a whale that beached on an African shore more [#permalink] New post 29 Jul 2009, 08:41
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Fossils of a whale that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and was subsequently butchered by hominids have been recovered by paleontologists.

A. that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and was subsequently butchered by hominids have

B. that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and then was subsequently butchered by hominids has

C. that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago, which was subsequently butchered by hominids, has

D. having been beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and subsequently butchered by hominids, have

E. having beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and then subsequently were butchered by hominids have
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Re: Fossils of whale [#permalink] New post 29 Jul 2009, 08:48
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Fossils of a whale that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and was subsequently butchered by hominids have been recovered by paleontologists.

A. that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and was subsequently butchered by hominids have

B. that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and then was subsequently butchered by hominids has should be have since plural fossils

C. that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago, which was subsequently butchered by hominids, has should be have since plural fossils

D. having been beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and subsequently butchered by hominids, have

E. having beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and then subsequently were butchered by hominids have
were is wrong here - should be was.


I think A sounds about right.
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Re: Fossils of whale [#permalink] New post 29 Jul 2009, 08:50
will go with A...was tempted for option B...got confused because of the word 'Fossils'
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Re: Fossils of whale [#permalink] New post 29 Jul 2009, 09:18
A ..it is ...
nothing wrong with the Sentence...
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Re: Fossils of whale [#permalink] New post 29 Jul 2009, 10:59
S-V agreement : has Vs have - have wins

"having" is wrong almost/always wrong on GMAT.

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Re: Fossils of whale [#permalink] New post 04 Aug 2009, 18:08
Question guys,

Is it correct to avoid a comma after hominids?
A. that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and was subsequently butchered by hominids, have

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Re: Fossils of whale [#permalink] New post 04 Aug 2009, 18:21
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Is it correct to avoid a comma after hominids?
A. that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and was subsequently butchered by hominids, have


I think that would be wrong. if you read the sentence withought the adjective ('that' pronoun reference clause), it will be " Fossils of a whale , have been recovered by paleontologists" so obviously this construction is wrong.
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Re: Fossils of whale [#permalink] New post 06 Aug 2009, 03:10
IMO A
B & C - It should be have not has
D - not much insight in having been usage but it sounds wrong to me.
E - were is not required not it is correct.
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Re: Fossils of whale [#permalink] New post 08 Aug 2009, 20:45
IMO A
B & C - Have should be used to agree with "fossils"
D & E - seem to have incorrect verb tense
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Re: Fossils of a whale that beached on an African shore more [#permalink] New post 07 Nov 2011, 02:12
what is was referring to in option A??

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Re: Fossils of a whale that beached on an African shore more [#permalink] New post 07 Nov 2011, 02:51
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what is was referring to in option A??

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Fossils of a whale that (beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and was subsequently butchered by hominids) have been recovered by paleontologists.

"was subsequently ......" is parallel with "beached on an ..." and describes "whale".
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Re: Fossils of a whale that beached on an African shore more [#permalink] New post 07 Nov 2011, 06:50
Clearly answer is A.

In option D,E- having is incorrect.
The subject here is fossils(Plural) and hence the verb should be have.Hence B & C are out.
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Re: Fossils of a whale that beached on an African shore more [#permalink] New post 11 Nov 2011, 17:11
A for me as well. Good question.
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Re: Fossils of a whale that beached on an African shore more [#permalink] New post 12 Nov 2011, 16:12
The original sentence is correct. A
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Re: Fossils of a whale that beached on an African shore more [#permalink] New post 09 Jul 2012, 03:32
Correct answer is A.

Trap is to mix-match S-V agreements.
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Re: Fossils of a whale that beached on an African shore more [#permalink] New post 10 Jul 2012, 09:44
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Fossils of a whale that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and was subsequently butchered by hominids have been recovered by paleontologists.
A. that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and was subsequently butchered by hominids have
B. that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and then was subsequently butchered by hominids has
C. that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago, which was subsequently butchered by hominids, has
D. having been beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and subsequently butchered by hominids, have
E. having beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and then subsequently were butchered by hominids have


The subject of the sentence is Fossils, not Whale. So, the correct form of "have" should be "have", not "has". Hence, eliminate B and C.

In choice D and E, HAVING BEEN makes sense that the verb beached already happen and ambiguously modified either FOSSILS or WHALE. Therefore, we can eliminate choice D and E.

The remain correct one is A.
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Re: Fossils of a whale that beached on an African shore more [#permalink] New post 10 Feb 2014, 02:56
Fossils of a whale that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and was subsequently butchered by hominids have been recovered by paleontologists.

First look: redundancy, verb tense, S/V agreement

A. that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and was subsequently butchered by hominids have Correct

B. that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and then was subsequently butchered by hominids has Wrong - "Then...subsequently" is redundant; "has" must be plural.

C. that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago, which was subsequently butchered by hominids, has Wrong - "which" is a misplaced modifier; "has" must be plural

D. having been beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and subsequently butchered by hominids, have Wrong - Passive voice "having been beached" is not required because "whale" received the actions; cannot split a subject and a verb with a comma ", have"

E. having beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and then subsequently were butchered by hominids have Wrong - "then subequently" is redundant; "were" must be singular form because the noun of the relative pronoun is singular "a whale"

IMO A
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Re: Fossils of a whale that beached on an African shore more [#permalink] New post 10 Feb 2014, 04:36
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Fossils of a whale that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and was subsequently butchered by hominids have been recovered by paleontologists.

A. that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and was subsequently butchered by hominids have

B. that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and then was subsequently butchered by hominids has

C. that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago, which was subsequently butchered by hominids, has

D. having been beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and subsequently butchered by hominids, have

E. having beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and then subsequently were butchered by hominids have



Let's split the sentence:

Subject relative clause predicate

Fossils of a whale that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and was subsequently butchered by hominids have been recovered by paleontologists.

Fossils - have been recovered by the paleontologists
(Fossils- plural subject) agrees with (have- plural verb)

parallelism in relative clause

- whale that
1)beached - (verb)
and
2)was subsequently butchered- (verb)


A. that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and was subsequently butchered by hominids have- looks good

B. that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and then was subsequently butchered by hominids has

Fossils has- subject verb agreement error
then subsequently- redundancy


C. that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago, which was subsequently butchered by hominids, has-
Fossils has- subject verb agreement error

D. having been beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and subsequently butchered by hominids, have
participle(having...) is not parallel to verb (butchered)


E. having beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and then subsequently were butchered by hominids have
then subsequently- redundancy
participle(having...) is not parallel to verb (butchered)


OA- A


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Re: Fossils of a whale that beached on an African shore more [#permalink] New post 24 Jun 2014, 21:34
Hi,
my doubt is regarding "Fossils of a whale that beached". Isnt that referring to Fossils here as "of a whale" is in prepositional phrase?? Please help, thanks
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Re: Fossils of a whale that beached on an African shore more [#permalink] New post 06 Jul 2014, 17:52
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Fossils of a whale that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and was subsequently butchered by hominids have been recovered by paleontologists.

A. that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and was subsequently butchered by hominids have

B. that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and then was subsequently butchered by hominids has

C. that beached on an African shore more than a million years ago, which was subsequently butchered by hominids, has

D. having been beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and subsequently butchered by hominids, have

E. having beached on an African shore more than a million years ago and then subsequently were butchered by hominids have



In this Question, how is "beached" parallel to "was butchered"

Also "Whale beached on an African shore" is in active voice whereas ""Whale was subsequently butchered by hominids" is in passive voice.

So how is this construction correct?
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