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New post 27 Jun 2013, 08:52
Hello ,

I am glad to have found this post. I would like to have my profile evaluated by the members of the club.
I am interested in some feedback on the essays I am preparing for applications for some MBA programs.

You can check my profile on this post: profile-evaluation-advise-needed-154989.html

I am particularly worried about the essays, I would appreciate if someone in the forum could read my essays and make some comments. Thanks in advace
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New post 27 Jun 2013, 11:12
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Hello ,

I am glad to have found this post. I would like to have my profile evaluated by the members of the club.
I am interested in some feedback on the essays I am preparing for applications for some MBA programs.

You can check my profile on this post: profile-evaluation-advise-needed-154989.html

I am particularly worried about the essays, I would appreciate if someone in the forum could read my essays and make some comments. Thanks in advace



Hi,

Feel free to send your essays to me , would be glad to give you comments to improve the same

Will send you the feedback on profile along with your essays or separate - the way you want

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New post 12 Jul 2013, 00:14
Hi,

Sent you my profile..Please review.

Thanks :)
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New post 29 Jul 2013, 02:15
Oasis,

First of all thank you for this wonderful initiative. Kudos to you guys for taking time out to patiently review profiles and essays!

I would as well like to get my profile reviewed, i will send across (PM) my profile to you guys.

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New post 03 Sep 2013, 06:47
I sent OasisGC four different essays answering the same question and he gave me a good sense of direction as to which one to focus on. He did a very thorough review of the essay he thinks I should focus on. As someone previously mentioned, his comments is longer than the essay itself.

I really appreciate his insight. This guy is just amazing! I bet his karma points are like completely off the roof.
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New post 05 Sep 2013, 00:57
I am interested in Profile review and Essay evaluation.
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New post 05 Sep 2013, 11:02
Hi oasis,

I want to get my profile and also some essays reviewed.
Sending you a PM.

Looking forward to hearing from you . :-D

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New post 05 Sep 2013, 19:15
Hi Oasis,

Thank you for offering to edit essays! I will send you a few via PM.

Thanks,
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New post 11 Sep 2013, 18:42
Thanks for the helpful and insightful feedback, Oasis! I appreciate you pointing out the weaknesses in my essay and ways to address them. With your comments and suggestions in mind, I'm going to work on the structure and specificity. I had definitely hit a wall before I received your edits, so again, thank you for your time. Since you offered, I'll send you a revised version when I'm finished. :)
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New post 11 Sep 2013, 22:02
I would be interested in your service. I'm in the process of preparing them. Will be forwarding them to you hopefully in a few weeks.

Thank you so much in advance! :)
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New post 12 Sep 2013, 00:02
Hi Oasis,

Any comments on my essays, been long have not heard from you. beginning to wonder if you got my essays or not :oops:
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New post 13 Sep 2013, 14:39
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Hi Oasis,

Any comments on my essays, been long have not heard from you. beginning to wonder if you got my essays or not :oops:


Hello,

I am unable to find your essays at my inbox.

Can you please send me the same again ?

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New post 12 Nov 2013, 06:04
Hi, I would like to get my essays reviewed.
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New post 02 Dec 2013, 16:37
Hi OasisGC,

I sent you a PM.
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New post 02 Dec 2013, 17:11
Hi Oasis,

I just found this thread - are you still doing reviews?

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New post 15 Dec 2013, 02:33
Hello OasisGC,

I would like to get my profile reviewed. Will PM you the details.

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New post 29 Dec 2013, 13:07
Hello Oasis,

I would like to get my essays reviewed. I have pm'd the document. Thank you so much for your help.
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New post 03 Jan 2014, 11:46
I'm interested in this service. Thank you very much.
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New post 03 Jan 2014, 12:00
Hi OasisGC,

I had sent you my essays for review about six days ago but haven't heard back from you. Did you get my PM? and a chance to look at the essays? Kindly let me know.
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Oasis,

Are you still offering this service? Cause I had sent my essays a while ago but got no reply. Kindly let me know
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