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Re: Free Essay review service for the first time - only 5 people [#permalink] New post 06 May 2012, 22:44
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Hello Oasis,

I read your feedback to some of the students. I feel you are doing justice to each request by carefully evaluating the profiles. Kudos to you.

I am in the phase of introspection of is an MBA now? which college? etc. etc.

I will send out my profile details to you. Requesting you to kindly help me in explore more on my profile from the perspectives of an adcom.

Meanwhile you can view my profile as posted on GC earlier, at:
profile-evaluation-request-suggest-suitable-b-school-130218.html#p1069960

I would welcome any comments on selecting the right school, shaping up my profile, and any other point which helps me put forth a solid application in front of any adcom.

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Hi Santosh,

Thanks for your words !! I will be glad to help you.

Two points :

1) I have gone through your profile at the link posted by you, however i would suggest if you could just help me with the document (app360 - attached in the first post of BB at this thread), because details of your profile will help me to give you detailed and personalized feedback.

2) I would also suggest that send me every possible question that you have in your mind for your application.

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Re: Free Essay review service for the first time - only 5 people [#permalink] New post 23 May 2012, 23:35
Hi Oasis,

I gave my gmat day before yesterday and scored 740(50,39).I may be late, but is it possible for you to do a quick eval of my profile??

Thanks in advance
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Re: Free Essay review service for the first time - only 5 people [#permalink] New post 24 May 2012, 01:15
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Hi Oasis,

I gave my gmat day before yesterday and scored 740(50,39).I may be late, but is it possible for you to do a quick eval of my profile??

Thanks in advance
Bhupesh


Hello,

Thanks for writing to us.

Sure, will be glad to help you in your journey to MBA.

You can PM me your profile as per the details given below, or you can post the details on peer review thread.

I would request you to give below mentioned details to help me help you

Age, Demographic Profile
Academics - year, stream, GPA (Bachelors + Masters)
Short term and long term goal for MBA
Your work ex - four to five lines on what you are doing
Region you want to settle post MBA
Any target schools

Any other Question that concerns you

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Re: Free Essay review service for the first time - only 5 people [#permalink] New post 03 Jun 2012, 00:17
Hi OasisGC,

how do I seek your opinion? I am currently waitlisted at some schools. Is it possible for you to do an eval of my essays and suggest strategies to get off the waitlist?

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Re: Free Essay review service for the first time - only 5 people [#permalink] New post 03 Jun 2012, 03:50
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Hi OasisGC,

how do I seek your opinion? I am currently waitlisted at some schools. Is it possible for you to do an eval of my essays and suggest strategies to get off the waitlist?

Thanks


Hello,

Happy to help

I have replied to you PM

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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post 04 Jun 2012, 13:08
I want to thank again OasisGC for his help. It's not just an essay review, it's more like an overall feedback of the profile, application, essays, etc. Now that I corrected my essay with his helpful suggestions I sent him the next version of it!
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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post 06 Jun 2012, 01:26
Hi Oasis!

Thanks a lot for helping all of us. I would like you to evaluate my profile if possible. I shall PM you the details.

Best,

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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post 06 Jun 2012, 06:18
Hi OasisGC,

I sent my profile via PM to you. Can you please evaluate it?
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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post 06 Jun 2012, 14:19
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Hi OasisGC,

I sent my profile via PM to you. Can you please evaluate it?
Thank you


Done now, Please check your PM now.

Hope the same helps you

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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post 06 Jun 2012, 14:20
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I want to thank again OasisGC for his help. It's not just an essay review, it's more like an overall feedback of the profile, application, essays, etc. Now that I corrected my essay with his helpful suggestions I sent him the next version of it!


Thanks alfrep.

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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post 06 Jun 2012, 19:45
Hi Oasis,

I will be giving my GMAT exam in August this year.Is it possible for you to do an evaluation of my profile so that i can improve in the areas required??

Thanks in advance
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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post 06 Jun 2012, 20:26
Hello,

Below mentioned are the details that will help me in giving a detailed response to your profile

These details will help me in giving you:
a) A thorough and meaningful analysis of your profile
b) A concrete direction for improving your profile during the remaining time period

1) Basic demographic info: age, gender, nationality

2) Educational Background: undergrad major, GPA, GMAT score, any grad work you've done. Any special courses taken.

3) Work experience: what is your current role? Have you had any promotions? What industry do you work in? For how long have you worked? Have you had leadership experience ? Have you worked across countries/regions ?

4) Extracurriculars: do you participate in any extra-curricular activities? What is your role there? For how long have you been involved? Did you have any leadership role at EC ?

5) Short/Long term goals: what do you want to do after your MBA? Any geographic preferences? Any preference on two year or one year MBA ?

6) Schools: Which schools have you considered already? Any on your initial short list?

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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post 07 Jun 2012, 11:23
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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post 09 Jun 2012, 04:34
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This is a fabulous initiative. You'll definitely be hearing from me.



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Will be glad to help you, I can see your valuable contribution to GC.

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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post 09 Jun 2012, 23:54
I have submitted my profile via PM to you. Have not included the essays (not prepared)
Can you plz suggest me the level and ranking of colleges that i might be able to apply to, given my exp. and all.
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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post 12 Jun 2012, 05:36
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I have submitted my profile via PM to you. Have not included the essays (not prepared)
Can you plz suggest me the level and ranking of colleges that i might be able to apply to, given my exp. and all.
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I have replied to your PM.

Hope that helps

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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post 12 Jun 2012, 05:39
Thank u! Your feedback made me realize the nuances i missed ;) ..
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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post 12 Jun 2012, 19:07
Hi. I am yet to apply to B-school but I would need advice on how best to package my application. A summary of my profile is below:

UGPA of 2.8-3.0 on a 4 point scale (My actual is 3.48 on a 5.0 scale)
Undergrad Major: Chemical Engineering
GMAT 700-780 (Yet to take the test but I should be able to ace it easily)
TOEFL iBT: 104
WE:1.5 yrs in Project Management at a Construction firm
1 yr as a high school teacher (mandatory national service)
7 months as an Account Executive (Strategic Planning & Implementation) at a Media company
Now 2 months at a Fortune 100 FMCG as a Field Sales Manager
EC: A whole lot of leadership and volunteer activities pre and post graduation, a prestigious undergrad scholarship (Exxon to be precise)
Ethnic status: Under-represented Minority

I intend applying for fall 2014 session and I've started my preparations. I'm looking at Smith, Goizuetta, Ross and Kellog and I'm hoping I get a scholarship. I'm thinking of taking a professional certificate course in Strategic Management (made up of five courses) at Havard Extension for two reasons. The first is to expand my knowledge base in the field and secondly to serve as a boost to my application.

My questions are below:
1. Do you advise I go ahead with the HES course or are there other programs that will give me a better deal?
2. What impact do you think this would have on my B-school application?
3. Do I apply in R1, R2 or R3? I'm considering R2.
4. How do you rate my profile? What other schools do you think I should consider?

Your thoughts are highly welcomed.
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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post 14 Jun 2012, 09:05
I just want to thank OasisGC for reviewing 2 of my essays. Oasis was VERY thorough when going through my essays and gave me some key advice on things that I had not even thought about. He goes through and basically inserts comments/advice on each part of your essay.

Highly recommended and I will definitely be asking for 2 more essay reviews if he will take them :lol:
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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post 14 Jun 2012, 15:19
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I just want to thank OasisGC for reviewing 2 of my essays. Oasis was VERY thorough when going through my essays and gave me some key advice on things that I had not even thought about. He goes through and basically inserts comments/advice on each part of your essay.

Highly recommended and I will definitely be asking for 2 more essay reviews if he will take them :lol:


Hello,

Thanks very much for you words, I am glad that my review helped you

I would be more than happy to help anytime. You can surely send the essays once you are through with the same.

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