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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post 06 Jun 2012, 14:20
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I want to thank again OasisGC for his help. It's not just an essay review, it's more like an overall feedback of the profile, application, essays, etc. Now that I corrected my essay with his helpful suggestions I sent him the next version of it!


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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post 06 Jun 2012, 19:45
Hi Oasis,

I will be giving my GMAT exam in August this year.Is it possible for you to do an evaluation of my profile so that i can improve in the areas required??

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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post 06 Jun 2012, 20:26
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2) Educational Background: undergrad major, GPA, GMAT score, any grad work you've done. Any special courses taken.

3) Work experience: what is your current role? Have you had any promotions? What industry do you work in? For how long have you worked? Have you had leadership experience ? Have you worked across countries/regions ?

4) Extracurriculars: do you participate in any extra-curricular activities? What is your role there? For how long have you been involved? Did you have any leadership role at EC ?

5) Short/Long term goals: what do you want to do after your MBA? Any geographic preferences? Any preference on two year or one year MBA ?

6) Schools: Which schools have you considered already? Any on your initial short list?

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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post 07 Jun 2012, 11:23
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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post 09 Jun 2012, 04:34
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This is a fabulous initiative. You'll definitely be hearing from me.



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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post 09 Jun 2012, 23:54
I have submitted my profile via PM to you. Have not included the essays (not prepared)
Can you plz suggest me the level and ranking of colleges that i might be able to apply to, given my exp. and all.
thank you in advanc.
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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post 12 Jun 2012, 05:36
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I have submitted my profile via PM to you. Have not included the essays (not prepared)
Can you plz suggest me the level and ranking of colleges that i might be able to apply to, given my exp. and all.
thank you in advanc.


Hello

I have replied to your PM.

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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post 12 Jun 2012, 05:39
Thank u! Your feedback made me realize the nuances i missed ;) ..
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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post 12 Jun 2012, 19:07
Hi. I am yet to apply to B-school but I would need advice on how best to package my application. A summary of my profile is below:

UGPA of 2.8-3.0 on a 4 point scale (My actual is 3.48 on a 5.0 scale)
Undergrad Major: Chemical Engineering
GMAT 700-780 (Yet to take the test but I should be able to ace it easily)
TOEFL iBT: 104
WE:1.5 yrs in Project Management at a Construction firm
1 yr as a high school teacher (mandatory national service)
7 months as an Account Executive (Strategic Planning & Implementation) at a Media company
Now 2 months at a Fortune 100 FMCG as a Field Sales Manager
EC: A whole lot of leadership and volunteer activities pre and post graduation, a prestigious undergrad scholarship (Exxon to be precise)
Ethnic status: Under-represented Minority

I intend applying for fall 2014 session and I've started my preparations. I'm looking at Smith, Goizuetta, Ross and Kellog and I'm hoping I get a scholarship. I'm thinking of taking a professional certificate course in Strategic Management (made up of five courses) at Havard Extension for two reasons. The first is to expand my knowledge base in the field and secondly to serve as a boost to my application.

My questions are below:
1. Do you advise I go ahead with the HES course or are there other programs that will give me a better deal?
2. What impact do you think this would have on my B-school application?
3. Do I apply in R1, R2 or R3? I'm considering R2.
4. How do you rate my profile? What other schools do you think I should consider?

Your thoughts are highly welcomed.
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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post 14 Jun 2012, 09:05
I just want to thank OasisGC for reviewing 2 of my essays. Oasis was VERY thorough when going through my essays and gave me some key advice on things that I had not even thought about. He goes through and basically inserts comments/advice on each part of your essay.

Highly recommended and I will definitely be asking for 2 more essay reviews if he will take them :lol:
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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post 14 Jun 2012, 15:19
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I just want to thank OasisGC for reviewing 2 of my essays. Oasis was VERY thorough when going through my essays and gave me some key advice on things that I had not even thought about. He goes through and basically inserts comments/advice on each part of your essay.

Highly recommended and I will definitely be asking for 2 more essay reviews if he will take them :lol:


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Thanks very much for you words, I am glad that my review helped you

I would be more than happy to help anytime. You can surely send the essays once you are through with the same.

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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post 15 Jun 2012, 07:03
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Hi OasisGC,

I sent my profile via PM to you. Can you please evaluate it?
Thank you


Done now, Please check your PM now.

Hope the same helps you

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Thank you very much OasisGC. I greatly appreciate you for taking time to provide valuable insight.

I sent you a follow question. Hope it is okay to ask for additional information. I feel bad since this a free service.
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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post 15 Jun 2012, 13:33
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Hi. I am yet to apply to B-school but I would need advice on how best to package my application. A summary of my profile is below:

UGPA of 2.8-3.0 on a 4 point scale (My actual is 3.48 on a 5.0 scale)
Undergrad Major: Chemical Engineering
GMAT 700-780 (Yet to take the test but I should be able to ace it easily)
TOEFL iBT: 104
WE:1.5 yrs in Project Management at a Construction firm
1 yr as a high school teacher (mandatory national service)
7 months as an Account Executive (Strategic Planning & Implementation) at a Media company
Now 2 months at a Fortune 100 FMCG as a Field Sales Manager
EC: A whole lot of leadership and volunteer activities pre and post graduation, a prestigious undergrad scholarship (Exxon to be precise)
Ethnic status: Under-represented Minority

I intend applying for fall 2014 session and I've started my preparations. I'm looking at Smith, Goizuetta, Ross and Kellog and I'm hoping I get a scholarship. I'm thinking of taking a professional certificate course in Strategic Management (made up of five courses) at Havard Extension for two reasons. The first is to expand my knowledge base in the field and secondly to serve as a boost to my application.

My questions are below:
1. Do you advise I go ahead with the HES course or are there other programs that will give me a better deal?
2. What impact do you think this would have on my B-school application?
3. Do I apply in R1, R2 or R3? I'm considering R2.
4. How do you rate my profile? What other schools do you think I should consider?

Your thoughts are highly welcomed.


Hello,

You have a PM with comprehensive personalized evaluation of your profile :) hope that helps

All the Best
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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post 15 Jun 2012, 13:41
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icaniwill wrote:
Hi OasisGC,

I sent my profile via PM to you. Can you please evaluate it?
Thank you


Done now, Please check your PM now.

Hope the same helps you

Thanks


Thank you very much OasisGC. I greatly appreciate you for taking time to provide valuable insight.

I sent you a follow question. Hope it is okay to ask for additional information. I feel bad since this a free service.


Hi icaniwill,

Thanks very much for you words, it has been equally great interacting with you for your profile.

Glad to hear that this service helps you in your journey to MBA, I would be more than happy to answer all follow up questions :). You will hear from me in max 24-48 hours.

The more you ask questions, the happier we will be (unconditionally :) ), so hope this makes you feel comfortable to shoot questions till the time you knock of your competition and get into your dream school :)

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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post 17 Jun 2012, 01:29
Hi OasisGC, do you think you can help me evaluate my profile? I have started a thread for mine at the following link
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Will greatly appreciate you taking your time to go through it and giving me some critical evaluation. :)
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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post 17 Jun 2012, 04:38
I'm interested. PM sent.

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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post 17 Jun 2012, 20:16
I would be interested in getting my essays reviewed and profile evaluated. I have not completed by essays yet but will PM you once I have done so. Thank you in advance. Kudos to you for offering such a service.
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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post 21 Jun 2012, 02:10
Hi OasisGC

I'd like a profile review. Will PM you. Hope to hear from you soon
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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post 21 Jun 2012, 10:27
I am very much interested in getting an evaluation on my profile!

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Re: Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink] New post 22 Jun 2012, 23:44
Dear Oasis,

This is to thank you for critically reviewing my essays. The reworked essays look very different and convincing now. Your comments and broad themeatic suggestions helps in understanding the requirments of the adcom maintaining the originality of writing style of the applicant.

Thanks again for your unconditional assistanace.

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