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Free Profile/Essay Review Service - Free [#permalink]
 21 Mar 2012, 19:28
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We are starting a new program that offers GMAT Club members free profile review and essay review absolutely free of charge. The program is based on a first come/most posts/kudos basis. As as part of this free service, you will be getting: 1. Profile feedback 2. Essay Review Here is how to get started:1. Please reply in this thread indicating your interest and that we should expect to hear from you.2. Please fill out the attached DOC file 3. PM it to OasisGC4. You should hear aback within 2 business days. (this does not mean that you will get reviewed essays in two days) All submissions are confidential.What we want from you:1. Try the service 2. Provide feedback - what do you think about it? (this is required) 3. Suggestions for improvement or how to better use this time/resource for the GMAT Club members 4. All feedback is confidential (well... between you and me) _________________
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Free Essay review service for the first time - only 5 people [#permalink]
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Thanks BB for posting the same. Members, Feel free to reach out to me for any clarification. The service is absolutely free, but it does not mean that I will just give a glancing eyes to the essays, GC has intentionally kept it free, because the whole idea behind GC is to give value addition unconditionally, I just expect suggestions to improve this effort. Apart from sharing essays, if anyone wants to discuss and generic aspect about writing any particular type of essay , please do not hesitate and PM. Every communication for this concept will be kept confidential, so please do not shy away from giving details as per the document, and still if you hesitate to give any info, please PM me, so i may suggest an alternative yet generalized approach to provide information. Thanks.
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Joined: 21 Sep 2008
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Concentration: Strategy, Economics
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Re: Free Essay review service for the first time - only 5 people [#permalink]
28 Mar 2012, 11:16
Oasis -- When you say "we", whom are you referring to? Are you part of a team of admissions consultants or will one person be looking at the essays?
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Re: Free Essay review service for the first time - only 5 people [#permalink]
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FatRiverPuff wrote: Oasis -- When you say "we", whom are you referring to? Are you part of a team of admissions consultants or will one person be looking at the essays? I remember how the word "I" used to be important at b-school applications  ,so the word "I" was always the most sought after word, but these days while working with teams in professional life, i have developed the habit of writing "We" everywhere Just to clear , Its only "I" , i am an individual who just believe i must give back this community, so with whatever little time i can spare after my professional commitments ( again i am no where part of MBA processes - admissions, consultants etc ), i try to contribute to this community. hope this clarifies.
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Re: Free Essay review service for the first time - only 5 people [#permalink]
29 Mar 2012, 08:24
Will you be looking at grammar as well?
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Re: Free Essay review service for the first time - only 5 people [#permalink]
29 Mar 2012, 10:29
I have a toruble for choosing the suitable graduate management program for me.how can you help me?my major is finance
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Re: Free Essay review service for the first time - only 5 people [#permalink]
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Evelyn wrote: I have a toruble for choosing the suitable graduate management program for me.how can you help me?my major is finance Sure, it would be pleasure to help you, but you really need to share much more info about yourself. Your GMAT Your Undergrads and your GPA Your Work Experience in detail Your short term and long term goals Your preference of area to settle - region wise These are some basic details that can help me in giving you the potential options, please understand there can not be a tailor made perfect fit school for anybody, so every aspirant shortlists 5/6 colleges on the basis of his/her preference. Listing these 6/7 schools is also not a days exercise, one should talk to current students, admission directors, alums etc to understand the programs better. You can PM me if you think you might not want to share the details on forum Good Luck
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Re: Free Essay review service for the first time - only 5 people [#permalink]
29 Mar 2012, 12:39
FatRiverPuff wrote: Will you be looking at grammar as well? Hi, Yes, I will help you not only with grammar but also with the structure of the sentences. Thanks
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Joined: 29 Mar 2011
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Location: Sweden
Concentration: Strategy, Finance
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Re: Free Essay review service for the first time - only 5 people [#permalink]
29 Mar 2012, 13:19
I am very intersted in getting a quick evaluation of my profile.
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Status: 2012-2013 Applicant
Joined: 01 Mar 2010
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Location: United States (FL)
Concentration: Finance, Real Estate
GMAT 1: 640 Q36 V41
GMAT 2: 630 Q42 V34
GMAT 3: 640 Q42 V35
GMAT 4: 620 Q42 V34
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Re: Free Essay review service for the first time - only 5 people [#permalink]
29 Mar 2012, 17:08
I would be interested in the profile review. Thanks.
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Re: Free Essay review service for the first time - only 5 people [#permalink]
29 Mar 2012, 20:34
I am interested too.
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Re: Free Essay review service for the first time - only 5 people [#permalink]
29 Mar 2012, 21:16
Happytrojan wrote: I am very intersted in getting a quick evaluation of my profile. Hi, thanks for sending the PM to me, will revert on the same.
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Re: Free Essay review service for the first time - only 5 people [#permalink]
29 Mar 2012, 21:18
doggdetroit wrote: I would be interested in the profile review. Thanks. Hi, have received your profile, impressive profile , we can do a lot of things on this. will revert you thanks
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Re: Free Essay review service for the first time - only 5 people [#permalink]
29 Mar 2012, 21:21
ravsg wrote: I am interested too. Hi ravsg thanks for your interest please let me know where i can help you, whether individual profile evaluation, hand holding for essay or any other specific Q. Feel free to send me PM me or post here thanks
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Re: Free Essay review service for the first time - only 5 people [#permalink]
15 Apr 2012, 08:09
HI,
Would like to share my experience of working with OasisGC. I got 7 of my essays reviewed!!! He has done a great job!!! I am very happy that I got this chance! It was an eye-opening experience and made me realize how too general and boring my essays were. Now, I have a feeling and good direction how to improve them. A lot of work to do, but it was a good start!
I would like to express my greatest gratitude to OasisGC for the excellent job and to GmatClub for such an opportunity!!!
THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!!
PS. My suggestion: more such kind of opportunities!!!
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Re: Free Essay review service for the first time - only 5 people [#permalink]
29 Apr 2012, 10:35
Thanks a ton to OasisGC for the great feedback. The feedback was right on and hit the weaker areas in my profile. Now, I need to start working on the feedback points and make it to my dream school! Good initiative OasisGC and BB!!!
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Re: Free Essay review service for the first time - only 5 people [#permalink]
01 May 2012, 07:13
I'm also interested. PM sent. Thanks in advance.
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Re: Free Essay review service for the first time - only 5 people [#permalink]
01 May 2012, 10:01
starlight1 wrote: HI,
Would like to share my experience of working with OasisGC. I got 7 of my essays reviewed!!! He has done a great job!!! I am very happy that I got this chance! It was an eye-opening experience and made me realize how too general and boring my essays were. Now, I have a feeling and good direction how to improve them. A lot of work to do, but it was a good start!
I would like to express my greatest gratitude to OasisGC for the excellent job and to GmatClub for such an opportunity!!!
THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!!
PS. My suggestion: more such kind of opportunities!!! Hi, Thanks for your feedback , glad that my insights helped you. all the best
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Re: Free Essay review service for the first time - only 5 people [#permalink]
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ravsg wrote: Thanks a ton to OasisGC for the great feedback. The feedback was right on and hit the weaker areas in my profile. Now, I need to start working on the feedback points and make it to my dream school!
Good initiative OasisGC and BB!!! Thanks ravsg for your feedback. Glad to hear that my insights helped you. I am just a PM away to help you Good luck
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Re: Free Essay review service for the first time - only 5 people [#permalink]
06 May 2012, 21:23
Hello Oasis, I read your feedback to some of the students. I feel you are doing justice to each request by carefully evaluating the profiles. Kudos to you. I am in the phase of introspection of is an MBA now? which college? etc. etc. I will send out my profile details to you. Requesting you to kindly help me in exploring more on my profile from the perspectives of what an adcom would look for in it. Meanwhile you can view my profile as posted on GC earlier, at: profile-evaluation-request-suggest-suitable-b-school-130218.html#p1069960I would welcome any comments on selecting the right school, shaping up my profile, and any other point which helps me put forth a solid application in front of any adcom. Regards Santosh
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