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D seems best here : believe that such education will be or can


reasoning : i will rather keep a sentence which has a proper noun (such education) than a sentence which uses "pronoun" and there by creates ambiguity . D and E solves the issue by having a noun "such education" D is better than E as both "would" and "could" signifies future and hence are redundant at best. D on the other hand uses "will be" and "can be" which signifies "future" and "emphatic nature" of the statement !!

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A. that they will, or could,----------->"they" is wrong .seems to refer to "educator" when in fact it should be referring to "education"

B. that they would, or could,------------->"they" is wrong for the same reason as stated above .also "would and "could" are redundant as explained above

C. it will be or could ------------->"it" is wrong as it seems to refer to "A large number"

D. believe that such education will be or can-------------->correct !!

E. believe that such education would or could------------> "would" and "could" are wrong as explained above

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A large number of educators surveyed view that higher education especially in technology subjects as Electronics and Civil Engineering is outdated at present but that they will or could be made appropriately contemporary in the near future.

A. that they will, or could,

B. that they would, or could,

C. it will be or could

D. believe that such education will be or can

E. believe that such education would or could

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E.


1. A large number of educators surveyed view that (considered all the educators)..... but believe that... SV agreement & parallelism
2. Would / Could ...they are not certain about their decision..so apt usage will be "would / could"
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A large number of educators surveyed view that higher education especially in technology subjects as Electronics and Civil Engineering is outdated at present but that they will or could be made appropriately contemporary in the near future.

A. that they will, or could,

B. that they would, or could,

C. it will be or could

D. believe that such education will be or can

E. believe that such education would or could

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OA is 'D' will be or can be make correct parallelism and 'view that' and 'believe that' make correct parallelism.
In A and B 'they' is ambigious, in C 'that' should be present after 'but' to make parallelism with 'view that' and in E would or could be are not parallelism.
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bbreddy999 wrote: E would or could be are not parallelism.


just to add this is not correct because "or" and "and" are parallel marker in which we see the parallelism from right to left so as long as "be" exist in the right hand side we do not need to repeat it, though doing so in not wrong .
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bbreddy999 wrote: E would or could be are not parallelism.


just to add this is not correct because "or" and "and" are parallel marker in which we see the parallelism from right to left so as long as "be" exist in the right hand side we do not need to repeat it, though doing so in not wrong .


Yes..I agree. But it creates ambiguity. Thought to add this in the explanation but still wrong parallelism is effective here to tackle the problem.
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A large number of educators surveyed view that higher education especially in technology subjects as Electronics and Civil Engineering is outdated at present but that they will or could be made appropriately contemporary in the near future.

A. that they will, or could,

B. that they would, or could,

C. it will be or could ---it represents correctly to "ENGINEERING " which is singular here.

D. believe that such education will be or can -- verbose

E. believe that such education would or could ---would and could are used when there is any prediction made. here the educators are believing and not predicting.



C is the correct one here.

A. that they will, or could,

B. that they would, or could,

C. it will be or could ---it represents correctly to "ENGINEERING " which is singular here.

D. believe that such education will be or can -- verbose

E. believe that such education would or could ---would and could are used when there is any prediction made. here the educators are believing and not predicting.
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Yes..I agree. But it creates ambiguity. Thought to add this in the explanation but still wrong parallelism is effective here to tackle the problem.

in fact i wanted to add one problem from OG but it is not handy with me at the moment . the point i wanted to stress with that problem is that in case a "tense change" is happening across "and" or "or" then we need to add (read it as MUST)that extra word ---->for instance have a look at this : it is AND will be .......----> here u need to add "is" as without "is" parallelism will be violated .
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A,B have pronoun errors...they
C has pronoun number error it...

E uses incorrect tense. ..

D is the best choice among all the options. Will be is appropriate here since the sentence talks about the future

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aditi wrote : it will be or could ---it represents correctly to "ENGINEERING " which is singular here.


unfortunately this is not true . always remember that parallelism is always absolute !! . by this i mean that if something is put in parallel then the meaning derived from that construction is as per the parallelism
so C effectively becomes : A large number of educators surveyed view that higher education especially in technology subjects as Electronics and Civil Engineering is outdated at present but it will be or could.......----->by sheer "default parallelism" "it" refers to "A large number of educators" and hence is wrong !!

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aditi wrote: believe that such education will be or can -- verbose

"verbose" does not necessarily mean wrong . sometimes succinct or terse sentences are in fact wrong
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Yes..I agree. But it creates ambiguity. Thought to add this in the explanation but still wrong parallelism is effective here to tackle the problem.

in fact i wanted to add one problem from OG but it is not handy with me at the moment . the point i wanted to stress with that problem is that in case a "tense change" is happening across "and" or "or" then we need to add (read it as MUST)that extra word ---->for instance have a look at this : it is AND will be .......----> here u need to add "is" as without "is" parallelism will be violated .


Thanks for the information. It is very useful. Actually option D should be 'will be or could be' or 'would be or can be'. I think only this will make sense.

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Thanks for the information. It is very useful. In option D the tense change is happening 'will be or could be'.


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A large number of educators surveyed view that higher education especially in technology subjects as Electronics and Civil Engineering is outdated at present but that they will or could be made appropriately contemporary in the near future.

A. that they will, or could,

B. that they would, or could,

C. it will be or could

D. believe that such education will be or can

E. believe that such education would or could

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Explanation- Cl1- A large number of educators view that
Cl2-higher education especially in technology subjects as Electronics and Civil Engineering is outdated at present
Cl3-but that they will or could be made appropriately contemporary in the near future.

A. that they will, or could,-- At the start of IC 'that'has no referent (logical). ''they'' should be ''it'' as the pronoun is referring to higher education.
B. Same error as A
C. Correct Ans- Pronoun ''it'' refers to higher education and there is a complete clause after BUT.
D. Believe that.... this has no noun referent like it they etc. (Noun/Pronoun is missing)
E. Same as D
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A large number of educators surveyed view that higher education especially in technology subjects as Electronics and Civil Engineering is outdated at present but that they will or could be made appropriately contemporary in the near future.

A. that they will, or could,

B. that they would, or could,

C. it will be or could

D. believe that such education will be or can

E. believe that such education would or could

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I think it is D.
In options A and B, the antecedent of "They" cannot be "A number of educators". Also, we need to establish some parallel structure here. A large number of educators surveyed view that......and XYZ that....
In option C, a think we have a parallelism error. The phrase "that higher education" is not parallel to "it will be". We need to have "that" here.
Option D is correct. Parallel issue stated above is resolved. A large number of educators surveyed view that...and believe that. (Parallel). Also, will be and can be are in parallel.
In option E, we need to have will or can here..not would or could.

Hence option D seems the best fit.
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A large number of educators surveyed view that higher education especially in technology subjects as Electronics and Civil Engineering is outdated at present but that they will or could be made appropriately contemporary in the near future.
C. it will be or could
"It" represents "higher education"
Consider singular and plural:
A & B: They - > only "technology subjects" is plural noun. But obviously the main subject here is "higher education", technology subjects such as ... is just example for higher education so this phrase can not be the next subject for the following sentence.
D & E: believe... who can believe? only educators can 'believe'. But the first sentence implies that educators only surveyed view (which means they carried out a survey on a view that), verb is "surveyed" and is in past tense. But both D & E have "believe" in simple tense -> unconvincing.
->> C correct
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A large number of educators surveyed view that higher education especially in technology subjects as Electronics and Civil Engineering is outdated at present but that they will or could be made appropriately contemporary in the near future.

This sentence has one error: 1. They can't refer to singular Higher education.


A. that they will, or could, :They can't refer to singular Higher education.

B. that they would, or could, They can't refer to singular Higher education. Also, would or could is wrong.

C. it will be or could It is referring to higher education.Tense usage is correct. will or could shows both certainity and probability.

D. believe that such education will be or canno need to use believe, such education.Also, tense usage is wrong

E. believe that such education would or couldno need to use believe , such education. Also, tense usage is wrong

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A large number of educators surveyed view that higher education especially in technology subjects as Electronics and Civil Engineering is outdated at present but that they will or could be made appropriately contemporary in the near future.

A. that they will, or could,

B. that they would, or could,

C. it will be or could

D. believe that such education will be or can

E. believe that such education would or could

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I think E is the correct choice here. A possibility of improvement in near future has been expressed and use of could/would is appropriate. Use of "will be" and "can be" to define same thing is contradictory. we can say either improvement in near future "will be" made (definite outcome) or improvement in near future "can be" (possible outcome) made. use of both in same sentence is incorrect.
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I choose E.

- The phrase "but that they will or could" refers to higher education so it should be in singular form -> eliminate A & B
- Because of parallelism, verb after "but" belongs to subject "A large number of educators". Thus, verb used here should be "believe" -> eliminate C
- The sentence talks about uncertain possibility in the future, so eliminate "will be or can" -> eliminate D
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