GMAT Essay topic: “So long as they are aware of the dangers involved,
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07 Jun 2015, 17:21
This is my first attempt. Please evaluate this essay and help me improvise it.
Topic: “So long as they are aware of the dangers involved, adults should not be legally bound to use seat belts”.
I dissent from speaker’s view that adults should not be legally enforced to use seat belts, until they are aware of the dangers involved as I believe “Precaution is better than cure”.
I feel the fatal accidents occurring these days majorly due to the laxness of not harnessing seat belts while driving. This carelessness attitude is seen amongst the youth. This have resulted to death, serious incidents and major health issues such as spinal cord injury, head injury etc which can prove to be a great tribulations for life time. Not every time adults foresee the condition of the roads they will have to traverse through and they may come across few dilapidated roads, which is high risk of sudden break or jerk which can lead to severe back injuries. Night driving in highway where people are more inclined to race with great alacrity, which is more prone to incidents. Fastening up seat belts also prove to be vital in plane, where flight-attended impose us for seat belts securely to protect us from any kind of shocks during emergency.
The increase in the graph of accidents is majorly due to not buckling up while driving. Road safety has been a major concern in India. Government should impose certain orders such as fine, when people tend to deviate the rule; in certain way to make people cautious about ramifications it may cause. I feel renowned people should participate in campaign and make a mark by creating awareness amongst people by persuading people about the pros and cons associated with seat belts; in a way to prompt people to exercise using seat belts .
Latest technology have devices incorporated in automobiles which can signal with certain beep when we fail to fasten our seat belts. Buckling up seats belts will definitely curtail accidents to a major degree of it and help in preventing ruining ones lives.
I believe our precedents or children are more inclined to follow us, we need to make sure we don’t set a bad exemplar for the future generation. We need to be a responsible citizen and keep in mind our life is extremely important for our society. State rules needs are imposed on us to protect our lives and are not banning on any leisure activities. We need to keep these things in mind and sportive enough to play a major role in upliftment and safety of our lives.
In my opinion short trip or long, whenever we are itinerating we need to make it a practice in our everyday life to use seat belts. Because not every time we can prognosticate the uncertainty which may come along our way. It is always good to take precautions. Life is precious; we do not want to lose it on roads.