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Griffith‘s cameraman Bitzer was a mechanical wizard, and what skill was lacking in his visual composition was more than compensated by his ability to combine gadgets and props to produce the required cinematic effects.

(A) what skill was lacking in his visual composition was more than compensated by

(B) what skills he was lacking in visual composition, he more than compensated for in

(C) whatever his visual composition lacked, he more than compensated in

(D) whatever skills he lacked in visual composition, he more than compensated for by

(E) he more than compensated his lack of visual composition with


Hi,
IMO D.
Meaning: The sentence is about camera skills of Bitzer. While he lacked his in visual composition,he was a mechanical wizard. He produced the required cinematic effects by combining gadgets and props.

It is clear from the meaning that two acts are simultaneous and must be presented in same tense form. Since non underlined portion of the sentence is in simple past, the underlined verb must be in simple past as well. This gives us a 2-3 split.

Among C,D & E, D presents the meaning more clearly. It is the skills he lacked and not visual composition.

Between compensated for and compensated with , compensated for sounds much better than the latter.
I am waiting for OE on this one as well.
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Griffith‘s cameraman Bitzer was a mechanical wizard, and what skill was lacking in his visual composition was more than compensated by his ability to combine gadgets and props to produce the required cinematic effects.

(A) what skill was lacking in his visual composition was more than compensated by Should be Skills instead of Skill[b]

(B) what skills he was lacking in visual composition, he more than compensated for in [b]used of compensated for in is incorrect by his ability is correct


(C) whatever his visual composition lacked, he more than compensated in Skill is missing here

(D) whatever skills he lacked in visual composition, he more than compensated for by

(E) he more than compensated his lack of visual composition with same as option C

POE was used to arrive at D

If we look at the meaning inference of both the underlined and non underlined part D makes sense

IMO D
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Griffith‘s cameraman Bitzer was a mechanical wizard, and what skill was lacking in his visual composition was more than compensated by his ability to combine gadgets and props to produce the required cinematic effects.

(A) what skill was lacking in his visual composition was more than compensated by

(B) what skills he was lacking in visual composition, he more than compensated for in

(C) whatever his visual composition lacked, he more than compensated in

(D) whatever skills he lacked in visual composition, he more than compensated for by

(E) he more than compensated his lack of visual composition with


I ll take a stab

Visual composition lacks the skill vs He lacks the skills in Visual composition
Cross off - A

Firstly - Compensated for in is little tricky for me
secondly - Compensated for should come before lacking in visual composition as... He more than compensated for what skills he was lacking in visual composition by...
Cross off B & D

whatever his visual composition lacked, he more than compensated in his ability to combine gadgets - Hmm, his visual composition lacked and he compensated that in his ability to combine.. Ahhan!
Cross Off C

E - Grammatically sound as per me

IMO - E
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Griffith‘s cameraman Bitzer was a mechanical wizard, and what skill was lacking in his visual composition was more than compensated by his ability to combine gadgets and props to produce the required cinematic effects.

I believe the answer to this question should be "D". Not that I am happy with D, its just best out of the lot!

30 ft level:
The sentence use the word "and" which is one of the FANBOYS and hence the phrase following "and" should be a dependent clause. Having stated the 30 ft level, let's look at the answer choices:


(A) what skill was lacking in his visual composition was more than compensated by - I found the start lil awkward. How can "skill" lack in his visual composition?

(B) what skills he was lacking in visual composition, he more than compensated for in - the use of compensated for "in" is incorrect. How can you compensate in?

(C) whatever his visual composition lacked, he more than compensated in - Similar to (B). Also, this answer choice misses the context by omitting the word "skills".

(D) whatever skills he lacked in visual composition, he more than compensated for by - Although not very happy (especially with the 2nd half of the answer choice, best out of the lot!

(E) he more than compensated his lack of visual composition with - not a dependent clause - uses (discussed in the "30 ft level" para)
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His ability cannot be compared with his visual composition. C and E are therefore eliminated.

Options A and B are incorrect because of the use of the past continuous tense was lacking, which is inappropriate in the context of the sentence. Simple past tense lacked is better in my view.

The correct answer is D. It rightly uses the simple past tense and the comparison was made between skills he lacked in visual composition and his ability to combine gadgets and props.
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Griffith‘s cameraman Bitzer was a mechanical wizard, and what skill was lacking in his visual composition was more than compensated by his ability to combine gadgets and props to produce the required cinematic effects.

(A) what skill was lacking in his visual composition was more than compensated by

(B) what skills he was lacking in visual composition, he more than compensated for in This should use "were" and not was

(C) whatever his visual composition lacked, he more than compensated in

(D) whatever skills he lacked in visual composition, he more than compensated for by

(E) he more than compensated his lack of visual composition with


Very weird question.
The non underlined portion has an "and" so we should have parallel elements but B was a mechanical wizard is just not parallel to what/whatever. "He" in the option E may be makes the most sense?

Split : compensated by vs compensated in
I guess compensated by sounds better? "Compensated in" is not correct. So that gets rid of C as well.

In option D, "compensated for by"? I can't even think of anything to be of this form. Example: I compensated for lack of time by reading faster"? but then there should be something between for and by?

Between A and E, I guess I will pack E because of Parallelism though I have no idea what is parallel.

Let's see. Definitely a tough and interesting one.

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generis Is this 900 level question ?
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