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He was less successful after he had signed with the [#permalink] New post 30 Nov 2011, 12:59
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He was less successful after he had signed with the washington bullets compared to the New York knicks small forward Bernard King nevertheless earned a steadfast grup of admirers who consider him oneof the greatest scorers in basketball history

A. He was less successful after he had signed with the washington bullets compared to
B. Being less successful after he had signed with the washington bullets as compared to
C. Less successful after he signed with the washington bullets than he had been with
D. Although he was less successful after signing with the washington bulets compared to
E. He had been less successful after signing with the washington bullets than with


If I change D to "Although he was less successful after signing with the Washington Bullets than with", would it be correct?

The OA is C.
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Re: A tougher SC [#permalink] New post 30 Nov 2011, 13:44
"Although" along with nevertheless rings redundancy in my head.
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Re: A tougher SC [#permalink] New post 30 Nov 2011, 22:22
I agree that "although" seems redundant. Is there a comma missing? The sentence is not clear.

Also, D is wordy. "less succesful" is better than "he was less succesful". We have to avoid the verb "to be" when it is possible.
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Re: A tougher SC [#permalink] New post 01 Dec 2011, 01:23
I believe it is a question of the right use of an idiom
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Re: A tougher SC [#permalink] New post 01 Dec 2011, 02:22
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If I change D to "Although he was less successful after signing with the Washington Bullets than with", would it be correct?


I agree with two errors you guys discussed above:

Redundancy with "although" and "nevertheless"
Error with the verb "to be"

The different tense between two compared items is need here. One is simple past, another is perfect pass.
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Re: A tougher SC [#permalink] New post 13 Dec 2011, 23:25
Can any one explain what is wrong with E.
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Re: A tougher SC [#permalink] New post 22 Apr 2012, 19:27
I am stuck with the same question, can any one help me on this one ?
Re: A tougher SC   [#permalink] 22 Apr 2012, 19:27
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