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22 Dec 2012, 20:09
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He was less successful after he had signed with the Washington Bullets compared to the New York Knicks, small forward Bernard King nevertheless earned a steadfast group of admirers who consider him one of the greatest scorers in basketball history.
A) He was less successful after he had signed with the Washington Bullets compared to B)Being less successful after he had signed with the Washington Bullets as compared to C) Less successful after he signed with the Washington Bullets than he had been with D) Although he was less successful after signing with the Washington Bullets compared to E) He had been less successful after signing with the Washington Bullets than with
How could the answer be D. D makes a wrong comparison and hence, in IMO, cannot be correct. The same issue is with A, B and D. C and E are the choices that don't have this issue, but E has modifier issue. C seems the perfect choice. _________________
How could the answer be D. D makes a wrong comparison and hence, in IMO, cannot be correct. The same issue is with A, B and D. C and E are the choices that don't have this issue, but E has modifier issue. C seems the perfect choice.
OE- The initial sentence features a significant Sentence Construction error, as the phrase before the comma is an independent clause, which cannot be followed by another subject without a transition. Because the phrase after the comma starts with an independent clause, "small forward Bernard King nevertheless earned," the underlined portion to begin the sentence must be a Modifier, and choices A and E are incorrect. Choice E is also incorrect in its Tense, as the past-perfect "had been less successful" must come before another event, and not "after signing with the Bullets". Answer choices A, B, and D commit an Idiomatic error in constructing the comparison, using the wordier "as compared to" instead of the idiomatic "less than". Furthermore, these examples each commit a parallel Comparison error; the comparison needs to be made "less successful with X than with Y", and not "less successful with X than Y". Accordingly, these choices are incorrect. Choice C, which uses proper Tense and idiomatic comparison structure, and sets up an effective Modifier, is the correct answer.
Hii Vignesh. Welcome to GMATCLUB. Here in the answer choices ABD, the comparison is being made between his success after he signed with Washington Bullets and New York Nicks-Illogical. The correct comparison should be made between his success when he was with WB, i.e. Success #1, and when he was with NYN, i.e. Success #2. Hope that helps. _________________
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