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Re: Hi Paul, could you take a look at my profile? [#permalink]
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Hey DukeCityMBA,

I grew up in a military family as well. I know your pain.

If you plan on writing about your upbringing, and how it shaped you, you want to be very selective about what questions you answer. As a general rule, admissions committees like to see more time relevant examples. They also like to see work examples – in general. I think because you are slightly older, it's okay to speak more about the personal aspects. Just know that if you try to use a personal example to demonstrate how you were five years old and learned a very formative lesson, one that has stayed with you today, that might ring a little hollow. One more thing, the United Nations Gen. assembly metaphor is cliché. I don't want to trivialize your experiences, but at the same time, I do not want you to trivialize your experience as well. Most applicants think they need a hook, but they end up creating a cliché. It makes me want to poke my eyes out every time I read it. So just state how it affected you and move on – avoid the many colors of Benetton advertising campaign. Although I have yet to see an essay draft, it sounds like you could be grasping at straws. But really, it's too early to tell.

If you want to work overseas – let's say Europe – you should really go to a European business school. If you feel this strongly, yet to really consider if Georgetown is actually a legitimate backup school. Or is it just the last person standing in the bar at closing time? Think of it this way, why would her career from the EU flyover to Washington DC to recruit you? I'm sure you are awesome, but there's probably someone almost as awesome right down the street at LBS, or INSEAD. The other thing you need to consider is the state of the European economy – more specifically, countries that use the euro. It kind of sucks over there right now. To make sure you pick and choose wisely, look at the schools employment reports. Right now, LBS probably looks like a better bet than INSEAD.

I can't really answer what schools you should not look at, because we would be here all day. The set of schools you should be looking at contain the criteria I listed above.

Hit me back if you have any questions.

Respectfully,
Paul Lanzillotti

DukeCityMBA wrote:
Paul,

I apologize about not providing a clearer account of my experience.

I have no international experience whatsoever. Growing up in a military family, I have traveled and lived in all corners of the United States. I have many friends who are first or second generation Americans that come from various regions of the globe. (Seriously, my social gatherings have a habit of taking on the look of the UN General Assembly.) In that respect, I have lots of stories about experiences with cultural differences. Can I substitute one of the more profound of these experiences for Insead's Culture Shock essay? Or would it seem like I am grasping at straws?

Given my aims of international consultancy, are there any schools NOT on my list I should be looking at?

Thanks for your response.
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