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I took the GMAT twice and scored 6.0 each time. I did put a lot of time in it the first time....too much actually. Being a non-native speaker and having not written a damn essay (of any kind) in many many years, I was very scared of the AWA. So, I went through every guide that I could find and wrote nearly 25-30 essays. Even had a friend grade them for me.....Pathetic, huh?

Anyway, for my second time, I just looked over my templates I created and wrote one of each the day before test just to refresh my memory on faster typing without making too many typos......

So, here it is....Enjoy, and please do not blame me if the 6.0 percentile goes down to 80 soon :-D



AWA GUIDE

by Chineseburned

1. General Structure



Intro - Restate argument, point out flaws or state intention to discuss them below
1st Para - First,...
2nd Para - Second/In addition,...
3rd Para - Third/Finally,...
Conclusion - The argument is flawed/weak/unconvincing because of the above -mentioned...Ultimately, the argument can be strengthened if/by...


2. Structural Word (should be all over the essays)



  1. Supporting examples - for example, to illustrate, for instance, because, specifically
  2. Additional support - furthermore, in addition, similarly, just as, also, as a result, moreover
  3. Importance - surely, truly, undoubtedly, clearly, in fact, most importantly
  4. Contrast - on the contrary, yet, despite, rather, instead, however, although, while
  5. Decide against - one cannot deny that, it could be argued that, granted, admittedly
  6. Ying-yang - on the one hand/on the other hand
  7. Concluding - therefore, in summary, consequently, hence, in conclusion, ultimately, in closing


3. Templates



Intro:
The argument claims that ....(restate)
Stated in this way the argument:
a) manipulates facts and conveys a distorted view of the situation
b) reveals examples of leap of faith, poor reasoning and ill-defined terminology
c) fails to mention several key factors, on the basis of which it could be evaluated
The conclusion of the argument relies on assumptions for which there is no clear evidence. Hence, the argument is weak/unconvincing and has several flaws.

1st Para:
First, the argument readily assumes that......
This statement is a stretch....
For example,...
Clearly,...
The argument could have been much clearer if it explicitly stated that...

2nd Para:
Second, the argument claims that....
This is again a very weak and unsupported claim as the argument does not demonstrate any correlation between....and...
To illustrate,...
While,...
However,....indeed....
In fact, it is not at all clear...rather....
If the argument had provided evidence that.....then the argument would have been a lot more convincing.

3rd Para:
Finally,...
(pose some questions for the argument).....Without convincing answers to these questions, one is left with the impression that the claim is more of a wishful thinking rather than substantive evidence.

Conclusion:
In conclusion, the argument is flawed for the above-mentioned reasons and is therefore unconvincing. It could be considerably strengthened if the author clearly mentioned all the relevant facts....
In order to assess the merits of a certain situation/decision, it is essential to have full knowledge of all contributing factors. In this particular case....
Without this information, the argument remains unsubstantiated and open to debate.

4. Going from the templates to full-fledged essays




ESSAY QUESTION:
The following appeared in the editorial section of a national news magazine:[/b]

"The rating system for electronic games is similar to the movie rating system in that it provides consumers with a quick reference so that they can determine if the subject matter and contents are appropriate. This electronic game rating system is not working because it is self regulated and the fines for violating the rating system are nominal. As a result an independent body should oversee the game industry and companies that knowingly violate the rating system should be prohibited from releasing a game for two years."

Discuss how well reasoned you find this argument. Point out flaws in the argument's logic and analyze the argument's underlying assumptions. In addition, evaluate how supporting evidence is used and what evidence might counter the argument's conclusion. You may also discuss what additional evidence could be used to strengthen the argument or what changes would make the argument more logically sound.


YOUR RESPONSE:
Quote:
The argument claims that the electronic games rating system, although similar to the movie rating system, is not working because it is self regulated and violation fines are nominal, Hence, the gaming rating system should be overseen by an independent body. Stated in this way the argument fails to mention several key factors, on the basis of which it could be evaluated. The conclusion relies on assumptions, for which there is no clear evidence. Therefore, the argument is rather weak, unconvincing, and has several flaws.

First, the argument readily assumes that because the electronic game rating system is self regulated, it is not working well. This statement is a stretch and not substantiated in any way. There are numerous examples in other areas of business or commerce, where the entities are self regulated and rather successful. For instance, FIA, the Formula1 racing organization is self regulated. Yet, the sport is very popular and successful, drawing millions of spectators around the world each year. Tickets are rather expensive, races are shown on pay-per-view, and nearly all drivers are paid very well. Another example is the paralleled movie rating system that the argument mentions. The author fails to clarify whether it is working well, but it is clear that the movie rating system is pretty well received by people, who often base their decisions to go see a movie with kids or not on the movie rating. It has never been a case when someone would feel cheated by the movie rating and express disappointment afterwards. Since the movie rating system is also self regulated, it follows that this regulatory method is working pretty well and it is not obvious how it can be the reason for the poor electronic game rating system. The argument would have been much clearer if it explicitly gave examples of how the self regulatory system led to bad ratings and customer dissatisfaction.

Second, the argument claims that any violation fees for bad electronic game ratings are nominal. It thus suggests that this is yet another reason for the rating system not working. This is again a very weak and unsupported claim as the argument does not demonstrate any correlation between the monetary amount of the fines and the quality of the electronic game rating system. In fact, the argument does not even draw a parallel with the mentioned movie rating system and its violation fines. If any such correlation had been shown for the movie rating system, which supposedly works well, then the author would have sounded a bit more convincing. In addition, if the argument provided evidence that low violation fines lead to electronic game manufacturers to ignore any regulations with respect to the game rating system, the argument could have been strengthened even further.

Finally, the argument concludes that an independent body should oversee the game industry and companies that violate the rating system, should be punished. From this statement again, it is not at all clear how an independent regulatory body can do a better job than a self regulated one. Without supporting evidence and examples from other businesses where independent regulatory bodies have done a great job, one is left with the impression that the claim is more of a wishful thinking rather than substantive evidence. As a result, this conclusion has no legs to stand on.

In summary, the argument is flawed and therefore unconvincing. It could be considerably strengthened if the author clearly mentioned all the relevant facts. In order to assess the merits of a certain situation, it is essential to have full knowledge of all contributing factors.


5. Final tips



  • During the tutorial type in a few sentences in the mock essay window to get used to the keyboard.
  • Again during the tutorial, jot down on your notebook the basic structure of your essays or the opening sentences in case you get too nervous and forget them when the clock starts ticking.
  • Write as much as you can. Try to write at least 500 words per essay.
  • Always have the e-rater in mind as your potential reviewer. Remember that the human rater will make every effort to grade just like the e-rater. In that sense, keep your structure and volume in mind over actual quality/content.
  • Be careful of spelling mistakes. Double check words that you normally know you misspell (e.g. exercise). Try to finish 2-3 minutes before time is up so you can slowly re-read your essay for the purposes of spell checking. Do not reorganize/delete sentences/paragraphs with less than 2 min left.
  • No matter how great you thought your essays went, try to stay humble and focused - remember this was just a warm-up and the real stuff hasn't started yet!

Good luck!
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Re: How to get 6.0 AWA....my guide [#permalink] New post 24 Jun 2011, 08:15
Hey chineseburned,

Thank you so much for sharing your templates and essay examples! I received my GMAT official score report today and I got a 6.0 on the AWA using your templates. They were a tremendous help and have once again proven to be successful.

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Re: How to get 6.0 AWA....my guide [#permalink] New post 06 Jul 2011, 09:10
This is extremely helpful resource. Thanks for putting this up.
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Re: How to get 6.0 AWA....my guide [#permalink] New post 11 Jul 2011, 13:09
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Re: How to get 6.0 AWA....my guide [#permalink] New post 14 Jul 2011, 03:01
This is the THE perfect guide. I literally just memorized the standard structure with how he started and ended every essay. (Never practiced writing), and got a 6.0. English i my second language and I am NOT a strong writer.
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Re: How to get 6.0 AWA....my guide [#permalink] New post 17 Jul 2011, 10:03
Thanks again for this wonderful compilation!
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Re: How to get 6.0 AWA....my guide [#permalink] New post 22 Jul 2011, 06:44
Got a 5.5! Thanks. Will work for a 6 in the upcoming exam
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Re: How to get 6.0 AWA....my guide [#permalink] New post 23 Jul 2011, 05:48
Hello bb/chineseburned,

I have a query pertaining to Analysis of an Issue:

Is it possible to agree with one part of the statement and disagree with the other half.

I saw this approach in a sample essay written in 800score guide. Ironically, this is a response to an official issue question.

The stem is

"“It is unrealistic to expect individual nations to make, independently, the sacrifices necessary to conserve energy.
International leadership and worldwide cooperation are essential if we expect to protect the world’s energy resources
for future generations.”

The response to this stem is agreeing with the 1st half while it doesnt entirely support the second half on the basis that there is no clear mention of type of resources depleting and to be conserved.

Your thoughts?
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Re: How to get 6.0 AWA....my guide [#permalink] New post 27 Jul 2011, 16:02
Thank You chineseburned. I used your template and wrote 2 essays before the big day and got 5.5. This is a very very good template and helped me get away with a 5.5 in just two days. Your efforts are much appreciated.
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Re: How to get 6.0 AWA....my guide [#permalink] New post 30 Jul 2011, 07:57
I just want to say a million thanks to chineseburn. I just got an official score today and my AWA is 6!!!
I'm an international student too. I'm originally from Thailand. Was so panic a few nights before the test because I didn't prepare much for AWA. So, I tried to look through the whole topics listed in OG12, but it made me feel worse. So, I stopped doing that. On the exam date, I brought this AWA guideline with me to the test venue, looked at it one more time just to make sure I didn't miss anything. Then, there was nothing to lose. I thought I did quite ok with it and didn't expect the score to be 6 at all..just 4 or 4.5 is enough. This is way too good!! and I must thank to chineseburn :)

The verbal part is my weakest link! Got 580..(Q49 V22!!!) Quite sad with the verbal part cuz after I finished Quant, I felt too proud that I could do it. So, I couldn't concentrate on the verbal. Sad!!!
Just register the next exam...the date is 31 Aug. I'll do my best :)
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Re: How to get 6.0 AWA....my guide [#permalink] New post 09 Aug 2011, 10:15
Just wanted to say thank you for an awesome AWA guide. I reviewed it for about two to three hours the day before I took the GMAT and just found out that I scored a 6.0! I wouldn't recommend spending too long studying this unless english is a weak spot for you (i.e. not your primary language). However, everyone should use this guide and, in my opinion, pay particular attention to the structure and key words/phrases that the e-rater looks for.

Now, time to revamp the resume, write essays and get the letters of rec..... seems like a never ending process :|
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Re: How to get 6.0 AWA....my guide [#permalink] New post 15 Aug 2011, 05:22
thanks a lot
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Re: How to get 6.0 AWA....my guide [#permalink] New post 16 Aug 2011, 19:46
Awesome buddy! You gave me much required energy :) Unfortunately, Tomorrow is my exam and in my 3 week study preparation, today is the only day I got for AWA (on&off I am referring few materials, nothing worth a mention) . This post for sure is the best guide I have gone through so far!

In the template, is it a good idea to use Firstly,Secondly .. so on...instead of First, Second ?? as we are ending with Finally (for the last point ).
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Re: How to get 6.0 AWA....my guide [#permalink] New post 24 Aug 2011, 20:05
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Re: How to get 6.0 AWA....my guide [#permalink] New post 27 Aug 2011, 14:01
Thanks Chineseburned!!!! Your legend lives on.....
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Re: How to get 6.0 AWA....my guide [#permalink] New post 30 Aug 2011, 20:21
AMAZING! I am going to use this on my test. +1
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Re: How to get 6.0 AWA....my guide [#permalink] New post 01 Sep 2011, 06:58
I got my 6.0, wish the rest of the gmat went as well though
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Re: How to get 6.0 AWA....my guide [#permalink] New post 08 Sep 2011, 04:21
Got my AWA score today and I got a 6.0. Thanks a lot chineseburned for the the amazing template.
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Re: How to get 6.0 AWA....my guide [#permalink] New post 08 Sep 2011, 08:42
Thanks! I got 5.5 with your template alone 8-)
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Re: How to get 6.0 AWA....my guide [#permalink] New post 17 Sep 2011, 08:18
chineseburned wrote:
Guide to Perfect 6.0 AWA GMAT Score

1. General Structure

1.1 Argument
1st Para - First,...
2nd Para - Second/In addition,...
3rd Para - Third/Finally,...

1.2 Issue
Intro - Restate issue, take a position
1st Para - First/One reason...
2nd Para - Second/Another reason...
3rd Para - Third/Perhaps the best reason...


where do you get examples for the topics? I mean sometimes I do not even have a clue what to write, what to provide as an example to the main point of a topic.
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Re: How to get 6.0 AWA....my guide [#permalink] New post 18 Sep 2011, 20:06
Wow! Thanks so much for sharing - I read your guide right before the GMAT the first time around and got a 6.0. Thanks for taking the time to compile such a helpful resource.
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