I will discourage anyone who wants to post his/her admissions essay in this forum as if this was an open source co-op project.
Main reason for discouragement is the fact that anything that you post here is scanned and searched by search site bots (i.e. Google, Yahoo) and stored in the cache within their servers.
This means that adcoms can easily find your essay online, as well as other applicants. Those applicants can even copy your idea or part of your essay (if not the whole thing).
What if essays are uploaded as password protected zip files?
nach0, your idea is good and could be implemented on gmat club someday on a private forum, but gmatclub is not there yet. Please get your essays critiqued by people you know.
RF and nink, the essay area on our forum is private and this cannot be accessed by anyone except people authorized to do so.