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28 Dec 2013, 06:10
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The 21th century has begun. What changes do you think this new century will bring? Use examples and details in your answer.
It is a well-known fact, that the world is developing day by day. The 21th century will bring great changes and innovations to make our life easier. I want to list some of them below.
First of all, a computer system surprises and gets developed day to day. Several centuries ago, we couldn’t imagine how to communicate with one another in several seconds, through the computer programs such as, skype, yahoo messenger and facebook. In several years, scientists will invent techniques that will integrate a television and computer. The innovation will enable us to use it for double purposes. Thanks to it and the scientists, electricity and financial expenditures will be reduced significantly.
On the other hand, medicine and technical sciences will be advanced greatly. In the last century, tuberculous and other similar diseases were uncurable, but nowadays, our doctors have already solved the problem. Today, our world is suffering from AIDS and various types of cancers, plenty of people are dying out of these illnesses . In the future, these diseases will be cured easily. As to the technical fields, for example: transportation and mechanical engineering sphere has recently been evolved unsurprisingly. In the air the roads will be built in order to relocate easily. Lots of modern and innovative cars equipted with utmost systems will be made to drive fast, safely and comfortably.
In addition to this, to the scientists’ mind, living on the moon is avaliable, but it hasn’t been proved up to now. They are working hard to discover new life and enable us to see the new world.
To sum up, I strongly believe lots of amazing changes will be brought in the present century. More over with a help of the modern technologies, our next generations will develop their skills and abilities to cope with and overcome their difficulties.